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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:49:01 GMT 5
Un ka bhi shukriya jinhoN nay dil maiN daad di.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:40:13 GMT 5
Jin dostoN nay iss ghazal ko paRha aur yahaN likhay baghair dil hi maiN daad di un ka bhi bahut shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:35:23 GMT 5
Hum hisaab lay rahay haiN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:33:29 GMT 5
Nasri shaeri ko ab tak maiN shaeri tasleem nahiN karta.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:22:35 GMT 5
Shukriya WaQaar Bhai! App ko guzarishaat pasand aaeeN, Daad ka bhi shukriya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:53:46 GMT 5
sada jazboon ki numainda ghazal hay,rawayati bandish aur mauzaat ka rev ho tu us men mazaqa nahi magar dosri sorat mein zuaq ki taskeen nahi hoti. matla mein taqabul radeef ki waja say misra oola munasib nahi laga. aqeel Taareef aur tanqeed ka bahut shuriya. Aap apni baat maiN koi Comma, Full stop waghaira tau istemaal kia kijiay. Baat samajhnay maiN aasaani ho jaay gi. Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:43:21 GMT 5
Aray bhai hamid baqri ka quote to ppoora chhaptay. hamaiN bhool gaay
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:37:37 GMT 5
maikey jaane ko ager beevi kahey, met ghabra uskey jaane meiN bhi qudrat ne maza rakhha hai
Kamal ki perodi hai Khalid saheb!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:33:09 GMT 5
Wah! kia kehnay! Kia khwahish hai iss umr maiN!!!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:32:05 GMT 5
Kia andaaz hai... Daad hazir hai, qabool kijiay.
huii meire saath yehi dagha
Dagha muzakkar hai lihaza issa huwaa hona chahiay.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:24:05 GMT 5
Khalid sahib ki baat maiN wazan hai magar aap ka jawab munasib nahiN.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:21:25 GMT 5
Aap say Allah bachhaay!!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:19:56 GMT 5
Wah!!!!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:15:06 GMT 5
Qamar Saheb bahut khoob kehtay haiN aap. Daad qabool kijiay.
iss sher maiN lafz "SAFAR" ka talaffuz "SAFR" maHsoos ho raha hai:- Sham-e talab sey subh-e fana tak Dil ka safar bas itna ho ga
Dekhiay ga shayad maiN ghalat hooN.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 18:05:26 GMT 5
Bahut ooNchi baat hai laikin Khalaaee wazn maiN
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