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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 11, 2007 18:59:47 GMT 5
Intebah Teray tasawwur maiN kho kay hum nay Jo zindagi ka samay gaNwaya Hum uss samay ka hisab laiN gay!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 11, 2007 23:03:12 GMT 5
wahhhhhh bohat khoob mukhatar aur jamae daad hazir hay Mirza sahib
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 12, 2007 11:13:40 GMT 5
Tabasum Sahib Zarra Nawazi hai! Aap ka kalam parhna chahta hooN agar munasib samjhaiN! Shukriya
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 12, 2007 23:35:11 GMT 5
Tabasum Sahib Zarra Nawazi hai! Aap ka kalam parhna chahta hooN agar munasib samjhaiN! Shukriya Shukria Mirza sahib isi sukhanwar maiN aur Andaz e biaN kay kuch puranay safhaat daekhaiN yaqeenan mera bohat sa klaam aap say samnay a,ay ga darasl meri koshish hoti hay hamaisha taza klaam post karooN jab bhi kuch huwa to aap hi ki amanat ho ga waesay aap isi andaz e biaN maiN daekh saktay haiN
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 13, 2007 11:57:18 GMT 5
Khoob haiN aap kay ash'ar bhi!
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Post by khalid on Oct 17, 2007 4:25:15 GMT 5
bohot khoob huzoor! sinf e sullsi ka aaina daar kalaam pasand aaya! daad haazir hai! difa'na mujh pe ilzaam ab lagaao ''tasav,vuroN key na peechey bhaago'' kaha to tha,''mujh ko bhool jaao''
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 18, 2007 16:13:45 GMT 5
Achha Difa' karnay ki koshish ki hai Khalid Sahib aap nay magar yeh Intebah tau unn Mohtarma kay liay tha jo abb humari KHATOON-E-KHANA haiN aur 8 1/2 baras say haiN.
Aap ka phir bhi shuriya keh aap nay Wazir-i-Difa' ka kaam karnay ki koshish ki.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:35:23 GMT 5
Hum hisaab lay rahay haiN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 24, 2008 19:52:17 GMT 5
boht mukhtasir nazm parhnay main main nay kitni dair laga dee magar ab daad daynay main to takheer nahin karni chahiay thanx razi
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neha
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Post by neha on Jul 24, 2008 22:32:28 GMT 5
Bohut khoob Atif sahab, Itnay muqtasar alfaz aur itny mukammal nazam...
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 24, 2008 22:49:22 GMT 5
boht mukhtasir nazm parhnay main main nay kitni dair laga dee magar ab daad daynay main to takheer nahin karni chahiay thanx razi Dair aayad, durust aayad! Aap ki nazar-e-karam hai jo yahaN paR gayee warna khaaksaar tau iss haal maiN guzaaraa karnay ka aadi hai.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 24, 2008 22:52:30 GMT 5
Bohut khoob Atif sahab, Itnay mukhtasar alfaz aur itny mukammal nazam... Neha Ji! Aap ki qadr bhari nigaah ka kamaal hai keh aap ko yeh mukhatasar nazm bhaa gayee. Shunwaayee ka shukriya.
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 26, 2008 1:06:07 GMT 5
AOA ATIF jee wah keya khobsorat intebah he Atif sahib lutf ageya parh kar dili dad qabol ki jyie par yeh ya drakhyie ap ne oper likha he hum hisab le rahe hain bad me hisab dena bhi pade ga hazoor waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 26, 2008 1:41:58 GMT 5
AOA ATIF jee wah keya khobsorat intebah he Atif sahib lutf ageya parh kar dili dad qabol ki jyie par yeh ya drakhyie ap ne oper likha he hum hisab le rahe hain bad me hisab dena bhi pade ga hazoor waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Mohtaram Ramish Bhai! INaayat aur mohabbat ka shukriya. Aap ki qeemti daad dil say qabool ki. Huzoor jin khaatoon ko yeh Intebaah bhaija tha ab woh aap ki BHABI haiN!
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Jan 26, 2009 23:49:03 GMT 5
Wahhh. Mukhtasar aur Mukammal nazm. Laikin apnpn se iss lehjay main baat munasib hai kiya DaaD qubool kijiye.
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