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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 9, 2008 18:08:03 GMT 5
Yeh hawa aur behr-o-bar khamosh Iss jahaN ka har ik nagar khamosh
Shaam khamosh hai, SaHar khamosh Ho gi ab zinDagi basar khamosh
Dil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
Aaj kiyooN chup haiN sari DeewaraiN? Kis liay ho gaay haiN Dar khamosh?
Har taraf khamshi kay dairay haiN KiyooN huwa hai yeh ghar ka ghar khamosh?
Mujh ko inkar kar na Day woh kahiN Ho gaya hooN yeh soch kar khamosh
Chup si kiyooN karwaN peh chhaiee hai? Kis liay too hai raahbar khamosh?
Bhool jatay haiN raastay raahi RaahaiN manzil ki hoN agar khamosh
Jab koi baat naiee honay lagi Ho gaay saray bay khabar khamosh
Khoya rehta hooN tairi yaadoN maiN BaiTha rehta hooN raat bhar khamosh
Ik hajoom apnay sang tha Atif! Phir bhi guzra har ik safar khamosh
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Post by khalid on Jan 9, 2008 22:36:33 GMT 5
Aaj kiyooN chup haiN sari DeewaraiN? Kis liay ho gaay haiN Dar khamosh?
Dil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
Chup si kiyooN karwaN peh chhaiee hai? Kis liay too hai raahbar khamosh?
Har taraf khamshi kay dairay haiN
bohot khoob janaab aatif sb! aapkee is ghazal k beishter ash'aar mulk ki soorat e haal per achha tabsera haiN! daad qubool keeje! ''jab koii baat naii honey lagi" ko shayad yuN hona chaahiye tha.''jab naii baat koii hone lagi''
meiree jaanib se aapko khiraaj e tehseen peish kerne ke liye do ash'aar........ mulk teira nahiN, hamaara hai hukm e haakim hai; reh, magar khamosh
rehbar o raahzan ko pehchaano met raho yuN nagar nager khaamosh
bolta tu bohot hai mehnet kash zulm seh, qissa mukhtasar;khamosh
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Post by zehrab on Jan 11, 2008 11:53:44 GMT 5
Dil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
bohat khub atif saheb. kya bat hey. Ghazal ke tamam ashaar lajawab hein lekin ye sher khas taur per pasand aaya. aur ye ashaar bhi:
Khoya rehta hooN tairi yaadoN maiN BaiTha rehta hooN raat bhar khamosh
aur
Ik hajoom apnay sang tha Atif! Phir bhi guzra har ik safar khamosh
daad qabool ki jiye
Qamar
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 11, 2008 16:33:03 GMT 5
Aaj kiyooN chup haiN sari DeewaraiN? Kis liay ho gaay haiN Dar khamosh?
Dil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
Chup si kiyooN karwaN peh chhaiee hai? Kis liay too hai raahbar khamosh?
Har taraf khamshi kay dairay haiN
bohot khoob janaab aatif sb! aapkee is ghazal k beishter ash'aar mulk ki soorat e haal per achha tabsera haiN! daad qubool keeje! ''jab koii baat naii honey lagi" ko shayad yuN hona chaahiye tha.''jab naii baat koii hone lagi''
meiree jaanib se aapko khiraaj e tehseen peish kerne ke liye do ash'aar........ mulk teira nahiN, hamaara hai hukm e haakim hai; reh, magar khamosh
rehbar o raahzan ko pehchaano met raho yuN nagar nager khaamosh
bolta tu bohot hai mehnet kash zulm seh, qissa mukhtasar,khamosh?
Khalid Sahib yeh aap ki mohabbat hai keh aap ko Ghazal pasand aaee aur hasb-e-maamool izzat afzaee kay lieay jawab aaN ashaar attaa kieay. Mashwaray ka shukriya. Soch kay daeray maiN aa gaya hai ghaur kar kay dekhooN ga. Analysis per poora utra tau qabool ho ga. Mamnoon-e-Ehsan hooNDil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
bohat khub atif saheb. kya bat hey. Ghazal ke tamam ashaar lajawab hein lekin ye sher khas taur per pasand aaya. aur ye ashaar bhi:
Khoya rehta hooN tairi yaadoN maiN BaiTha rehta hooN raat bhar khamosh
aur
Ik hajoom apnay sang tha Atif! Phir bhi guzra har ik safar khamosh
daad qabool ki jiye
Qamar Qamar Sahib pasandeedgi aur daad ka shukriya.
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Post by khalid on Jan 11, 2008 23:02:27 GMT 5
Aaj kiyooN chup haiN sari DeewaraiN? Kis liay ho gaay haiN Dar khamosh?
Dil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
Chup si kiyooN karwaN peh chhaiee hai? Kis liay too hai raahbar khamosh?
Har taraf khamshi kay dairay haiN
bohot khoob janaab aatif sb! aapkee is ghazal k beishter ash'aar mulk ki soorat e haal per achha tabsera haiN! daad qubool keeje! ''jab koii baat naii honey lagi" ko shayad yuN hona chaahiye tha.''jab naii baat koii hone lagi''
meiree jaanib se aapko khiraaj e tehseen peish kerne ke liye do ash'aar........ mulk teira nahiN, hamaara hai hukm e haakim hai; reh, magar khamosh
rehbar o raahzan ko pehchaano met raho yuN nagar nager khaamosh
bolta tu bohot hai mehnet kash zulm seh, qissa mukhtasar,khamosh?
Khalid Sahib yeh aap ki mohabbat hai keh aap ko Ghazal pasand aaee aur hasb-e-maamool izzat afzaee kay lieay jawab aaN ashaar attaa kieay. Mashwaray ka shukriya. Soch kay daeray maiN aa gaya hai ghaur kar kay dekhooN ga. Analysis per poora utra tau qabool ho ga. Mamnoon-e-Ehsan hooNjanaab aatif sb meira mashvara ghalat bhi ho sakta hai aapki soch k mutaabiq! maan leina her giz zaroori nahiN! aap maasha allah aik kohna mashq shaair haiN! Dil ki dunya maiN aik halchal hai Sara maHol hai magar khamosh
bohat khub atif saheb. kya bat hey. Ghazal ke tamam ashaar lajawab hein lekin ye sher khas taur per pasand aaya. aur ye ashaar bhi:
Khoya rehta hooN tairi yaadoN maiN BaiTha rehta hooN raat bhar khamosh
aur
Ik hajoom apnay sang tha Atif! Phir bhi guzra har ik safar khamosh
daad qabool ki jiye
Qamar Qamar Sahib pasandeedgi aur daad ka shukriya.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 14, 2008 23:08:57 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat Ghazal
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 15, 2008 20:29:51 GMT 5
Inayat hai aap ki keh aap nay pasand ki yeh ghazal! Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:49:01 GMT 5
Un ka bhi shukriya jinhoN nay dil maiN daad di.
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