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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 16:32:45 GMT 5
Wah Neelofar ji
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 16:23:28 GMT 5
Wah Tanweer Shaib! Kia achhotay aur munfarid ashaar paish kiay haiN aap nay, Iss tarah kay maHol maiN kaha jaata hai keh:-
Dua Bahaar ki maaNgi tau itnay phool khilay Koi jagah na mili mairay aashiyanay ko
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 15:55:36 GMT 5
Kia munfarid radeef hai. Ghazni saheb kay liay bay baha daad aur Rafi bhai aap ka bahut bahut shukriya keh itni khoobsoorat ghazal aap nay post ki.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 15:24:26 GMT 5
Atif Saheb Ek bherpoor nazm ke liye dil ki gehraaiyon sey dheron daad. Likhtey rahiye isi tarah......mashaAllah Kher andesh Qamar Qamar Bhai! Daad ka bahut shukriya. Aap ki pazeeraaee ka andaz bahut bhaya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 15:23:08 GMT 5
Mirza saab- achhi nazm hai......mubarak ho! saeed Khair Mubarak Saeed ji! Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 15:20:02 GMT 5
BOHAT KHOOB DEAR BOHAT KHOOB ....... NICE 1 WISH U ALL THE BEST
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] Rana sahib bahut shukriya taareef ka
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 15:16:00 GMT 5
mohtaram aatif sb bherpoor daad haazir hai! aap ghazal aur nazm, donoN hi kamaal kehte haiN! daad haazir hai! Khalid Saheb aap nay bahut baRay compliments diyay haiN. Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 8:02:13 GMT 5
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 8:00:44 GMT 5
bahut achhi nazm kahi hai Atif ji.amooman logon ko gahzal kehna mushkil lagta hai aur vo aazaad nazm kehte hain, lekin maine aaj tak shaayad 1 ya 2 nazm hi kahi hongi, ghazal kehte hue chaahe behr mein koii galti ho jaaye lekin main ghazal kehna hi pasand karti huN. daad haazir hai qubool karen. Sunita ji nazm mushkil hai ya ghazal yeh tau mujhay nahiN maaloom bus likh lete hooN, kabhi ye nahiN soch keh koi aik mushkil hai ya na mumkin hai. Bus dil say niklti huwi awaz hoti hai jo maaloom nahiN kaisay kiss qaalib maiN dhal jaati hai: -
Asar kaisay na ho unn maiN jo mujh per lafz utartay haiN UnhaiN chaahat ki chhalni say mera munn chhaan leta hai
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 7:54:39 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai! Daad denay aur ghazal pasand karnay ka bahut shukriya. aap achhchha zehn rakhtay haiN aur dil kay bhi bhalay insaan haiN iss liay taareef ka hunar bhi jantay haiN. Aap ka bahut shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 7:49:37 GMT 5
Malik Sahib, koi comma, ful stop wahgaira istemaal kia kijiay, jumloN ki rawani maiN farq paRta hai aap ki iss ajeeb aadat say.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 7:37:06 GMT 5
Devi ji bahut khoobkehti haiN aap bhi
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 7:30:02 GMT 5
bohaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat khoob Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 7:20:40 GMT 5
Yeh baat aaj bhi qeemti hai!!!!!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:57:04 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib aur Khalid Sahib! Ghazal maiN typo thi iss liay ussay durust kar kay dobara post kia hai. Aap say guzarish hai keh aap apni post maiN meray qout kiay huway board ko modify kar laiN kiyooN keh uss ka link different hai. Thanx
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