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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 31, 2007 10:34:18 GMT 5
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Post by khalid on Oct 31, 2007 18:41:08 GMT 5
khoob kaha hai huzoor! daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 31, 2007 22:59:16 GMT 5
Achi nazm Mirza sahib aap ki ghazal aur nazm donooN par yaksaaN grift hay daad qabool farmaiN
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 1, 2007 17:04:59 GMT 5
Khalid sahib aur Rafi Sahib aap ka bahut shuriya keh aap nay nazm pasand ki.
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Post by HASIB RANA on Nov 18, 2007 17:54:43 GMT 5
SOCH K PARINDEY NAY MERY MUN KI TEHNI PER AaSHEYAAN BANAYA HAY ........ BOHAT KHOOB DEAR BOHAT KHOOB ................ KEEP SHEARING .............. WIASH U ALL THE BEST
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Post by dnangrani on Nov 19, 2007 2:40:03 GMT 5
Atif ji
teri yaad ke tinke kis nagar se..............
bahut hi achoota ahsaas hai
daad ke saath
Devi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 3, 2007 17:19:21 GMT 5
Nazm ka matalia kia,mujhy dr say is hawalay say ikhtilaf hay ke nazm par garft hay hamari aj ki nazm baohut mukhtalif ho chuki hay is nazm mein gehrae o geerae donoN mafqood hein aik am admi aur aik takhleeq kar mein bunyadi farq he khialat ki tazgi aur tanawo hay
aqeel
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Post by dnangrani on Dec 6, 2007 1:27:57 GMT 5
teri yaad ke tinke jaane kis ........... adbhut udaan hai soch ki. bahut achi rachna ke liye daad kabooliyega
Devi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Dec 23, 2007 0:11:04 GMT 5
teri yaad ke tinke jaane kis ........... adbhut udaan hai soch ki. bahut achi rachna ke liye daad kabooliyega Devi Devi Jee Shukriya 2 baar pasand karnay ka! Mamnoon hooN
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Post by Atif Mirza on Dec 23, 2007 0:11:55 GMT 5
Nazm ka matalia kia,mujhy dr say is hawalay say ikhtilaf hay ke nazm par garft hay hamari aj ki nazm baohut mukhtalif ho chuki hay is nazm mein gehrae o geerae donoN mafqood hein aik am admi aur aik takhleeq kar mein bunyadi farq he khialat ki tazgi aur tanawo hay aqeel Jee??? Waisay Malik Sahib! Iltimas Hai keh aap apni shaeri say nawazaiN takeh aap kay maayaar ka andaza ho aur uss kay baad maiN uss maayaar ki shaeri aap ki khidmat maiN paish kar sakooN. Jo shayad aap ko pasand aa jaay. Fil-waqt tau yehi mesoos ho raha hai keh aap kay maayaar ko pohonchna meray buss ka kaam nahiN. Shayad Rafi Sahib, Razi Sahib ya koi aur iss kaam mairi madad kar sakaiN.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 16, 2008 7:49:37 GMT 5
Malik Sahib, koi comma, ful stop wahgaira istemaal kia kijiay, jumloN ki rawani maiN farq paRta hai aap ki iss ajeeb aadat say.
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