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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 3:01:07 GMT 5
SALAAM... Main ap doonun razi sahib aor rafi sahib ka shukriya ada karti hun keh poetry kay hawalay s mujhay ap ka tawun mel raha hay
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 2:54:09 GMT 5
RAFI SB,,,
BAHUT SHUKRIAYA
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 2:52:20 GMT 5
RAZI SAHIB,,,,,, AOA.,,,,, Main ap ki bahut shukuguzaar hoon ke ap mere poetry ko
ko pasand kar rahay hain aor es ki khamiun ka jaiza laikar mere technique ghaltin ki neshaadahi kar rahay hain,,,istrah main inn khamiun ko dor kar sakun gi ,,,insha-allah....
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 2:43:30 GMT 5
RAFI SAHIB,, AOA,,, BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA POEM PASAND KARNAY KA,,,,,,,,,
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 2:12:25 GMT 5
SAB say pahlay to ap tammam dostoon ka shukriya keh
aap sab nay mujhay wellcome kaha aor mere poetry main khayalaat ko srahaa.....atif sahib aor naheed sahiba nay jin technique khamiun ki nishaandahi ki ,,insh allah koshish karun gi keh ap sab kay tawun se unn per qaboo pa "Nothing",,,,,,,,,,,ap sab ki basarat ki nazar mere aik poem hazir hay ,,,, aara se nawaziay ga,,,//
USSAY KAHO
Usay kaho who jabb bhi mere tasweer daikhy ……
Mere aankhun main chuppay huay gardaab parrh lay…
Merey bairang hoontun ke khamoosh zubaan ko samjhay ,,,
Aor mere zuveeda paishaani ko manind e ketaab parrh lay,,,
Meray aweraaq main bhikheray huay lafzoon ko samaitay,,
Gardash e daoraan say jo melay ,,who azaab parrh lay …
Meray shabby o roz ka mahwar raha uska hijir o feraaq,,,
Dasht e janoon main jo paiy hain, who ataab parrh lay ,,
Usay kaho keh mere rooh kay karb ko bhi samjhay…..
Zulmat e daoraan ne jo kiay barbaad merey khawb parrh lay;;;
Usay kaho main uss kay zikar main rahun ,,na rahun…
Who mera hay harf e talabb ,hay mera intasaab parr lay ….
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 1:54:16 GMT 5
kanwal jee....sab say pahly to itani khoobsurat poetry per daad qabool kijiay ,,,,, ap nay mere poetry ko sraaha aor mujhy wellcome kaha ,, phool bhaijay ,,kaisay shukria adda karun...,, dair sey jawab kailiay muazratkhawh hun,,,keh ALLAH nay apnay ghar kay deedaar ki saadat kailiay bulaawa bhaija tha.. aor baad main kuch professional masrufiat aarray ain..ap ki yeh hosla afzai jari rahi to insha-allah main tecknique khamiun per qaboo pa lungi
again thanks
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 17, 2008 12:20:23 GMT 5
RAZI SAHIB,,
Yeh bahut khoobsurat silsalaa hay,,laiken agar mukamal biodata aor bamua tasweer ho to aor bhi khoobsurat ho jaiyga ,,
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 17, 2008 10:09:06 GMT 5
KOI LAMHA TO AFTAAB HOTA ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
Yeh ruttain baihissi ki Yeh zamaanay bairukhi kay
Badalatay hoiy inn lamhoon ka Koi to ihtasaab hoota
Kabhi aankh kay neil main Kabhi waqt ki jheel main
Jo aansoo khak ho gaiy Koi to unka hisaab hoota
Rassta tumhara judda sahi
Hum say tum khafaa sahi
Magar ..
Saath guzaray zamanay ka
Koi tu lamha aaftaab hoota
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 17, 2008 9:49:47 GMT 5
SAYA BHI JUDDA
Ub tou yeh dinn guzartay hain istraha Naa sulagtay hain jism-o –jaan
Naan melti hay chhaya,,^ ^ Jazboon ki shiddat bhi dheemi dheemi …,,,,,,,
Chahtoon ki aanch bhi bujhi bujhi …..,,,,,,,
Bus ek yaad hay kuchh bhooli bhooli …,,,,,,,
Umeed ka daamann bhi jala bujha …….,,,,,,
Aas ka sittaara bhi dooba dooba …,,,,****
Bus hum hain aor ek khayal dhundla dhundla’’’;
Lamhoon say saddion ka aik faasla…’’’’’’’’’’,,,,,,
Zakham hai n kuchh khelay khelay ..;;’’’’’’’….
Bichhri muhabtain hain khoi khoi ,,,//…’’’’’
Bus hum aor hamara saya ,, Yaa shaid srif hum,,,
Aor SAYA hamara JUDDA- JUDDA’’’’
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 16, 2008 13:50:48 GMT 5
atif sahib.. mere traf se ap ko bahut bahut mubarak ....
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 14, 2008 15:14:06 GMT 5
rafi sahib,,,,thanks for such appreciating remarks for my poem TUM SUCH KAHTAY HO,,, NOW i am enjoying ,bieng a member of sukhanwar net
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 14, 2008 1:58:31 GMT 5
TUM SACH KAHTAY HO
Sabb bhula daina hay behtar…
Sabb mitta daina hay achha…
Who sab ahid e rafta kay waaday …
Who sab ahid e guzashta ki baatain..
Who hanstay khailtay dinn saaray ,,
Who khawb bunti sabb raatain ,,
Who khushbu ka jhaunkaa sey lamhay ..
Who maossam e wasl ki jhilmelaati saatain…,
Who gham khaar lehjuun kay khazaanay …
Who khushgawaar lamhuun kay zamaanay;;;
Sabb baitay dinnun ka hain asaasa …
Sabb bai-tabeer khawbun ke dastak hain…
Ajnabi ajnabi theen raahain kal bhi
Ajnabi ek doojay say hain hum ab bhi…
Chalo ab kahna tumharaa maanain ‘’
Abb hijir ko apna asaasaa janain //
Abb shah-rug main mahroomiun ka NISHTAR BOAIN’’ Tanhaie kay pahlu main koi khawb nahin..
DARD PROAIN;;;; Abb raishamm jaisay rishtun ka daamen chhorrain,,,
Ajnabiat ke rasam o raah boain …
Who chamaktay khawb kissi kuhsaar main dafna ain;;;
Who kirnun sa ehsaas ,,maot ke aaghosh main lepta ain
… Chalo khud ko abb kahin bhula ain,,,
Zeest kay baqi lamhay .bai-ehsaas kahin bitaa ain..
Kuchh aor shikwun say paishtar …
SABB BHULAA DAINA BEHTAR
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 14, 2008 0:10:19 GMT 5
razi sahib...
aslaam o alaikum.....
sab se pahlay sukhanwer ki salgira mubarak main kis trah sey shukria adda karun
ap nay mere poetry ko srahaa,,aor agay
barrhnay kailiay hosla afzaaie ki.. specially
kanwal jee ,,atif sahib aor rafi tabbasum
sahib ka shukria jinnhun ne mere poems sarahaa.....
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on May 25, 2008 2:18:43 GMT 5
Dil Ka Moassam
Tujh say qai-im tha tasalsul kucch mere tahreeroon say Ubb kistraha sandais bannay meray dil-e-iztraar ka maossam
Nazar main gulaab maossam abhi kucch dair ay-dusht-e-janoon Inqlaab main rahaiga phir khawbboon kay masmaar ka maossam
Hoti nahin hay bai-sabbab dil kay darichay main anjuman Yadoon nay tere bbassa dia hay ek naiy darbaar ka maossam
Tum kis jaan kay ghumgusaar hum kin phooloon kay rahbar Hamaray tumharay darmian ubb kahaan woh piyaar ka maossam
Andaish-a-farda main mualaq zaat mere kucch istrah Zihin-o-dil main chha gia hay phir fishaar ka maossam
Naan khawhishain hain , wasal ki naa, shikaitain , naa hikaitain Zabt-e-haal say rooth gia hay ubb itbaar ka maossam
Wohi muheeb darichay , wohi hain udaas shamain Badla nahin zara bhi , hamaray dar-o- diwaar ka maossam
Aya-BAARGAH-E-AIZDI tujhay waasta dar-e-mahboob ka Sakoon day kar badal day meray dil-e-bai-daar ka maossam
woh shakas bhi ajeeb tha ,ajeeb thain uski chahtain passand kion usko aa gia hay praiy diyaar ka maossam
kucch shaok turq-e-tauluq tha usko kucch anna prustt hum bhi issiliay darmiaan aa gia karwaan-e-aghiyaar ka maossam
Jabb say guraizaan who hoa hay gulshan-e-hasti ki traha Wahishitoon ka makaan hogia hay dil-e-bai-qraar ka maossam
Phir wohi ablapaa hum ,nafratoon ki dhoop bhi wohi Tufaan blaakhaiz ho gia hay guzari bahaar ka maossam
Hay uski yaad ki shiddat kucch aor bhi arooj per Pulkoon pay zao-fishaan hay woh gul-o-gulzaar ka maossam
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on May 25, 2008 2:07:31 GMT 5
Rahay gi yaad mujhko woh’ Mulaqaat aakhri’’;;;
Hoontoon pay theher gai thi jo adhoori .. woh baat aakhri
Aankhoon kay dasht main phaili nageenoon ki ‘ ’’’ Who sughaat aakhri …’’ ’’;;;; Woh dinn bhi thehra thera saa .. Woh gahri shaam udaas si
Dil ki dunyan mai chhai .;’’; Jazboon ki who nammi ;;’’’;;; Bhooloon gi kaisay main bhla woh ;’;.,
Lamhaat aakhri ‘;;’ ;’;’;; Woh ruk ruk kay woh murr murr kay daikhna us bai-nawa ka ; AOR Woh thaher thaher kay maira saya kay peechhay bhaagna ;; ’ Who shaam say raat tuk ka udaas sa safar ;
’;’’; Aanhoon aor siskion ka goia koi samanddar ;;;;;;
Khaamooshi say uttar gia tha jo mairay unddar ‘’’’ Us rooz murjhaya sa laga kainaat ka har shajar ;;; ;;
Aya gi naa ub kabhi Woh barsaat aakhri ;’’’’’’’’’’;;;;;;
Woh shnaasai aor nashnaasai ka dukh ajeeb sa
Barray faaslay thay laiken laga who qareeb sa ;’. Main nay tou koi shikwa sajia naa tha magar ;’;’’’’
Who kahta raha bichharrna khail hay naseeb ka;’’’ Bhulaon gi kaisay main us kay
Woh kalmaat aakh ri ;’’’’
Baad us mulaqaat kay;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; Haan baad us mulaqaat kay ;;;;;;
Chhaya yeh kaisa intashaar ;’’’’;;;;;;;;;
Jaisay pukaartay hoon jazbay woh baiqraar ;’;’;
Jaisay dasht-e-talab main roota ho koi zaar-zaar ;’;;
Naan tummana kisi phool ki naa kaantoon say
Hum baizaar ;;;;;;;;;;; Dinn raat ka safar katteta hay isi umeed par ‘ ; Shaid koi naam lay ,,shaid koi lay hamain pukaar ‘;
Magar jantay hain ,keh maojoon kay rang main thay ;’
WOH JAZBAAT AAKHRI ;’;’ haan who jazbaat aakhri Shaid kabhi aisa ho keh Iss waqat kay chakkar main
Khawab –o-khayal kay nagar main Woh laotay agar iss shahar main kabhi ‘’’
Dain dustak who pichhlay jazbay sabhi ;;’’ Chhay phir who shaam sard si ;’’’;;
Dil ki khalish tou mittay gi naan ub kabhi ; Us kay aanay pay hoon gi Ubb rasoomaat aakhri Iss jehaan say uss jehaan tuk Lamhaat aakhri Mulaqaat aakhri Rahay gi yaad mujhko woh’ Mulaqaat aakhri’’;;;
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