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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 17, 2008 10:09:06 GMT 5
KOI LAMHA TO AFTAAB HOTA ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
Yeh ruttain baihissi ki Yeh zamaanay bairukhi kay
Badalatay hoiy inn lamhoon ka Koi to ihtasaab hoota
Kabhi aankh kay neil main Kabhi waqt ki jheel main
Jo aansoo khak ho gaiy Koi to unka hisaab hoota
Rassta tumhara judda sahi
Hum say tum khafaa sahi
Magar ..
Saath guzaray zamanay ka
Koi tu lamha aaftaab hoota
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 20, 2008 14:06:13 GMT 5
aap ki nazmon main baaz maqaamat par to aahang mojood hota hy jo is baat ko zaahir karta hy k aap nazm ya ghazal ki chand bunyaadi baatain jaan lain to bhr main bhi keh sakti hain nazm ka mozoo umda hy shukria k aap forum main apni poetry post karti rehti hain thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 22, 2008 2:22:54 GMT 5
maiN Razi bhai ki baat say ittefaaq kartay huay aap ko shaeree jari rakhnay ka mashwara dooN ga
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 3:01:07 GMT 5
SALAAM... Main ap doonun razi sahib aor rafi sahib ka shukriya ada karti hun keh poetry kay hawalay s mujhay ap ka tawun mel raha hay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 23, 2008 17:24:56 GMT 5
Dr Najma Ji! Aap ki shaeri ko paRh kar ehsaass hota hai keh aap kuchh arsay baad behr maiN likhnay kay qabil ho jaeiN gi. Jari rakhiay mehnat.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 24, 2008 19:24:26 GMT 5
ap ki nazm kareeban ahang leay hoeay hay bas matalia aur shauq ap ki rehnumae karay ga
aqeel
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 0:36:04 GMT 5
KOI LAMHA TO AFTAAB HOTA ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
Yeh ruttain baihissi ki Yeh zamaanay bairukhi kay
Badalatay hoiy inn lamhoon ka Koi to ihtasaab hoota
Kabhi aankh kay neil main Kabhi waqt ki jheel main
Jo aansoo khak ho gaiy Koi to unka hisaab hoota
Rassta tumhara judda sahi
Hum say tum khafaa sahi
Magar ..
Saath guzaray zamanay ka
Koi tu lamha aaftaab hoota
;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; Najma jee ,...
Har kaam se pehley acha khayaal hona laazmi amar hai ,...
Aur acha khayaal Khuda ki dain hai ,...
Jo Khuda ne Aapko de rakhi hai ,...
Baaqi hausle buland hoN to pahaar bhi raaheiN chod dete haiN yeh behr kya hai ,....
Khubsoorat se khayalaat par daad ki dheroN Daad Aapki nazR ,...
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