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Post by dr.najma shaheen on May 24, 2008 6:46:51 GMT 5
AITRAF E WAFA KIA tha ek baar agar Tum nay bhi agar aitraaf e wafa kia hota Zamaany se tujh ko bhi juddai ka gilla hota ,, , Jurm e wafa kay maen e ko tum nay bhi Parrha hota Jiss nay dil se tujhy chaha tha .., Kabhi usko apna bhi kaha hota ,, Dil e na moataber ko kuch to rutba dia hota ,,, Yeh bhi haqeeqqtt keh Ghamun ki dhoop karri hay bahut Nahin daita iss main sath koi ,,, Gulzaar rahun kay sathi hain bahut Kaantun pay nahin chalta sath koi ,,, Ghamun main tera sath rahy Yeh hum ko bhi manzoor nahin Magar teray chand lafzun ka , Mujh ko aasra dia hota Ek tery aitraaf se Jalti rahguzaarun main Jeenay ka hosla mela EK BAAR HAAN Ek baar aitraaf e wafa kia hota,,,,
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2008 0:47:24 GMT 5
Wahh
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 16, 2008 15:55:02 GMT 5
khoobsoorat andaz hay soch ka thanx razi
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 14, 2008 0:10:19 GMT 5
razi sahib...
aslaam o alaikum.....
sab se pahlay sukhanwer ki salgira mubarak main kis trah sey shukria adda karun
ap nay mere poetry ko srahaa,,aor agay
barrhnay kailiay hosla afzaaie ki.. specially
kanwal jee ,,atif sahib aor rafi tabbasum
sahib ka shukria jinnhun ne mere poems sarahaa.....
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 14, 2008 0:27:47 GMT 5
razi sahib... aslaam o alaikum..... sab se pahlay sukhanwer ki salgira mubarak main kis trah sey shukria adda karun ap nay mere poetry ko srahaa,,aor agay barrhnay kailiay hosla afzaaie ki.. specially kanwal jee ,,atif sahib aor rafi tabbasum sahib ka shukria jinnhun ne mere poems sarahaa..... dr sahiba is main bhala shukriay ki kia baat hay hum to khush hain k aap hamari bazm main apni poetry post kar rahi hain aap k haan khyaal boht umda hota hy magar abhi craft main aap ko mushkil dar paysh hay aap bazm main ziaada say ziaada aaya karain aur mukhtalif mubaahis main hisa lijiay thanx razi
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 1:20:16 GMT 5
razi sahib... aslaam o alaikum..... sab se pahlay sukhanwer ki salgira mubarak main kis trah sey shukria adda karun ap nay mere poetry ko srahaa,,aor agay barrhnay kailiay hosla afzaaie ki.. specially kanwal jee ,,atif sahib aor rafi tabbasum sahib ka shukria jinnhun ne mere poems sarahaa..... Shukriya to Aap ka ke Aap humeiN apni takhleeqaat parhne ka mauQa detiN haiN,...
Aur mujhe umeed hai ke Aapki takhleeQ din ba din nikharti jaaye gi ,... kyuNke Aapke paas khubsoorat khayalaat ki kami nahiN ,...
Iss "Aitraaf e Wafa" ke husn e khayaal par daad e guL Aapki nazR ,....
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 29, 2008 0:28:55 GMT 5
AOA DR SHAIBA dad qabol ki jyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 30, 2008 16:09:16 GMT 5
ramishjaan sb....a;a.... bahut bahut shukria ,,,ap nay sraha....mere bahut khawhish hay keh ap sab dost mere poem mulaaqaat aakhri parrahain aor apni raiy say nawaazain
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meena
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by meena on Aug 12, 2008 17:30:31 GMT 5
bohut khoob.........aap ka kalaam bohut piyara hota hai ........na jaanay kyuN apna apna sa lagta hai...........!
meena
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jan 11, 2009 2:08:02 GMT 5
MEENA JI KAISY SHUKRIA ADDA KARUN APKY INN PIARY LAFZUN KA
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