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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 17, 2008 9:49:47 GMT 5
SAYA BHI JUDDA
Ub tou yeh dinn guzartay hain istraha Naa sulagtay hain jism-o –jaan
Naan melti hay chhaya,,^ ^ Jazboon ki shiddat bhi dheemi dheemi …,,,,,,,
Chahtoon ki aanch bhi bujhi bujhi …..,,,,,,,
Bus ek yaad hay kuchh bhooli bhooli …,,,,,,,
Umeed ka daamann bhi jala bujha …….,,,,,,
Aas ka sittaara bhi dooba dooba …,,,,****
Bus hum hain aor ek khayal dhundla dhundla’’’;
Lamhoon say saddion ka aik faasla…’’’’’’’’’’,,,,,,
Zakham hai n kuchh khelay khelay ..;;’’’’’’’….
Bichhri muhabtain hain khoi khoi ,,,//…’’’’’
Bus hum aor hamara saya ,, Yaa shaid srif hum,,,
Aor SAYA hamara JUDDA- JUDDA’’’’
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 20, 2008 14:03:22 GMT 5
aik udaas kar daynay wali kayfiat tanhaai ka ehsaas aur na rasaai ka dukh boht acha khyaal hy is nazm ka dr sahiba khoob andaz hy thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 22, 2008 2:23:26 GMT 5
wah
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 2:52:20 GMT 5
RAZI SAHIB,,,,,, AOA.,,,,, Main ap ki bahut shukuguzaar hoon ke ap mere poetry ko
ko pasand kar rahay hain aor es ki khamiun ka jaiza laikar mere technique ghaltin ki neshaadahi kar rahay hain,,,istrah main inn khamiun ko dor kar sakun gi ,,,insha-allah....
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 2:54:09 GMT 5
RAFI SB,,,
BAHUT SHUKRIAYA
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 0:47:17 GMT 5
SAYA BHI JUDDA
Ub tou yeh dinn guzartay hain istraha Naa sulagtay hain jism-o –jaan
Naan melti hay chhaya,,^ ^ Jazboon ki shiddat bhi dheemi dheemi …,,,,,,,
Chahtoon ki aanch bhi bujhi bujhi …..,,,,,,,
Bus ek yaad hay kuchh bhooli bhooli …,,,,,,,
Umeed ka daamann bhi jala bujha …….,,,,,,
Aas ka sittaara bhi dooba dooba …,,,,****
Bus hum hain aor ek khayal dhundla dhundla’’’;
Lamhoon say saddion ka aik faasla…’’’’’’’’’’,,,,,,
Zakham hai n kuchh khelay khelay ..;;’’’’’’’….
Bichhri muhabtain hain khoi khoi ,,,//…’’’’’
Bus hum aor hamara saya ,, Yaa shaid srif hum,,,
Aor SAYA hamara JUDDA- JUDDA’’’’ dard meiN doobi nazM dil chhoo gayee ,...
Daad ke phooL Aapki nazR ,...
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 10, 2008 10:49:31 GMT 5
kanwal jee bahut shukria,,,s
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Nov 11, 2008 23:54:12 GMT 5
Dr Sahiba, Boht hi umdah khayal aur andaz hai. Daad Qubool kijiye.
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 14, 2008 20:12:04 GMT 5
bahut shukria jooni sahib
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