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Post by shaira on May 13, 2009 3:52:58 GMT 5
salaam Atif,
aapke walidain ke accident ki khabar sun ker bohat afsos houa,
hum sab aapke walidain ke liye duago hain.
sara
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Post by shaira on May 8, 2009 22:22:47 GMT 5
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Post by shaira on May 1, 2009 19:45:59 GMT 5
Mohtaram Atif,
adaab arz hei.
Qalam se deshtgardi ka muqabla bohat hi umda koshish haiA amn mushaire ki tafseeli report paRh ker acha laga, qalam se amn qaim karne ki rasm mujhe pasand aayi!
Wahaan houne wale roz marra ke tashaddud ki kahbrein paRhker dil gham mein Doob jaata hai aur hum duniya ke kisi doordaraaz goshe mein baiThe sirf dua karte rehte hain ke halaat behtar houjaaye.
"khuli khuli hou ye fizaa, khula khula samaaj hou teri zameeN pe aye khuda! muhabbatoN ka raaj hou!"
waah! bohat khoob kaha Shahnawaz Khan sahib ne.
sab shoara-e-ikraam ke ashaar qabil e tareef aur lajawaab hain. sabko humari janib se daad o mubarakbaad aur un sab ki koshishoN ki kamyaabi ki duayein pesh hain.
is tafseeli report ke liye aapka tah dil se shukriya ada karti hoon.
mukhlis
Sara.
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Post by shaira on Apr 10, 2009 0:04:39 GMT 5
Ahle mehfil adaab arz hei! aek aur tarhee ghazal pesh hai ummiid ke pasand ajaaye. 1. zindagi aarZee duniyaa ke imaarat niklee bin ataa't ke yeh muhmal see ibaarat niklee 2. mere lahje ko at'aa kardeN shaguftah andaaz phool ke a'rq meiN Doobee meri chaahat niklee 3. din ko toone mere roshan kiyaa khurshiid ke saath chaaNdnii raat meiN ujlee meri qismat niklee 4. ne'mateiN too ne saaree hee at'aa keeN phir bhee zindagi apnee saraapaa-e-shikaayat niklee 5. tere hee noor ke partaw se hai roshan yeh zameen aasmaaN kee bhee Zeyaa teri inaayat niklee 6. is Haqeeqat kaa nah ham ko kabhee ehsaas huwaa "zindagi apnee to khwaaboN kee amaanat niklee" 7. kab kii :Saraa: ne ibaadat kabhi jannat ke liye uskii chaahat to faqat teri hii taa'at niklee
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Post by shaira on Apr 10, 2009 0:01:41 GMT 5
bahooooooooooooooot khoob soraaaaaaaaaaat kyaaaaaaaaaaaa?
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Post by shaira on Apr 10, 2009 0:00:58 GMT 5
Saara aapaa bahut umda behr maiN napi tuli ghazal. Daad hazir! bohat shukriya Aatif, lekin abhi tak Tabassum sahib aur Razi sahib ne meri ghazal kyun nahi dekhi??
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Post by shaira on Apr 9, 2009 23:59:55 GMT 5
Bahut khoob Sara ji .... Daad qabool farmaeay .... sada khush raheay .... bohat shukriya Zaki sahib.
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Post by shaira on Apr 9, 2009 23:59:22 GMT 5
Boht Khoob Saara Sahiba. Boht si daad qubool kijiye. bohat shukriya Jooni sahib.
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Post by shaira on Mar 28, 2009 22:52:58 GMT 5
Sukhawaraan-e-mehfil, adaab arz hei, aek ghazal aap sab ke liye. Ghazal:
ab kahaaN kee anjuman aaraaiyaaN rah gai, hai bas yahee tanhaaiyaaN jitnaa Doobaa, utnaa nikhraa aadmee ishq kee aisee hai kuchh gahraaiyaaN teergee tanhaa nah kar mujhko kabhee roshnii hai waqt kee parchhaaiyaaN yaad rakhnaa usko aasaaN hai bahut bhool jaane hee meiN hai dushwaariyaaN ghair par ab mujh ko pyaar aane lagaa hai yeh apnoN kee karam farmaaiyaaN dil meiN Saraa ke muHabbat hai makeeN DhooNDte ho or kiyaa achhaaiyaaN Niazmand Saara
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Post by shaira on Feb 12, 2009 22:40:09 GMT 5
khuda wo waqt na laye k sogwar ho tu sakoon ki neend tujy b haram ho jaye tere musarat-e-peham tamam ho jaye tere hayat tujy talkh jaam ho jaye
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Post by shaira on Feb 10, 2009 20:21:03 GMT 5
Walekum salaam naz, bohat din baad yehan aana houa aur aapka salaam humein pahunch gaya jald aiye hum bhi aapko miss kar rahe hain. sara
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Post by shaira on Feb 10, 2009 20:19:05 GMT 5
maharabaa.N ho ke bulaa lo mujhe chaaho jis waqt
mai.n gayaa waqt nahii.n huu.N ke phir aa bhii na sakuu.N
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Post by shaira on Feb 10, 2009 20:17:19 GMT 5
terii yaad hai yaa teraa tasavvur
kabhii 'Daagh' ko ham ne tanhaa na dekhaa
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Post by shaira on Sept 17, 2008 9:27:00 GMT 5
Ahl e mehfil ki khidmet mein tasleem, aek tarhee ghazal pesh hai ummeed ke pasad fermayenge. Ghazal:
1. Misl e harf e ghalat mita hi de ab to aye dil use bhulaa hi de"
2. rung gulshan ke kho gaye hein Kaheen ab to ma'abood gul khilaa hi de
3. kabse bedaar meri aankhei.n hain surkh sholo.n ko ab bujhaa hi de
4. dhoondti hain jise meri nazrei.n ek jhalak uski ab dekha hi de
5. kitne vehshat zada hai ye chehre Shayad unko sukoon Khuda hi de
6. mera jo farz tha kiya main ne gar jaza kuchh nahin saza hi de
7. aaj Sara Jabeen hai chashm baraah ab to dastak use sun hi desara
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Post by shaira on Sept 7, 2008 18:23:19 GMT 5
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