shaira
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by shaira on Sept 17, 2008 9:27:00 GMT 5
Ahl e mehfil ki khidmet mein tasleem, aek tarhee ghazal pesh hai ummeed ke pasad fermayenge. Ghazal:
1. Misl e harf e ghalat mita hi de ab to aye dil use bhulaa hi de"
2. rung gulshan ke kho gaye hein Kaheen ab to ma'abood gul khilaa hi de
3. kabse bedaar meri aankhei.n hain surkh sholo.n ko ab bujhaa hi de
4. dhoondti hain jise meri nazrei.n ek jhalak uski ab dekha hi de
5. kitne vehshat zada hai ye chehre Shayad unko sukoon Khuda hi de
6. mera jo farz tha kiya main ne gar jaza kuchh nahin saza hi de
7. aaj Sara Jabeen hai chashm baraah ab to dastak use sun hi desara
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Post by Sukhanwar on Sept 17, 2008 23:00:22 GMT 5
aik bay yaqeeni ki fiza jo hamaray gird o paysh main mojood hy woh is ghazal sy bhi jhalakti hy riwaayat sy jurri hui khoobsoorat ghazal image file k chothay shair k pehlay misray main aap ny dhoondti ko dhoondhti likha jo drust nahin isay theek kar lain roman version main aap nay yeh lafz drust likha hy aakhri shair main aap nay lafz "chashm baraah" istamaal kia hy jo drust nahin asal lafz " chashm bar_raah" hay yaani matlab hy k raah par nazar hay hum aap ki raah daykh rahay hain ..is main "raay" ka harf do baar istamaal ho ga isay drust kar lijiay thanx razi
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 29, 2008 18:53:12 GMT 5
Sara!
Bohat khoobsurat aur achi ghazal aapki, meri janib say daad hazir hay.
Faq't Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 29, 2008 19:23:29 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 29, 2008 20:49:51 GMT 5
Aik jaandaar ghazal per daad qabool kijiay.
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:16:49 GMT 5
Wah Sara ji
Bohat achi ghazal ata ki aap ney
Daad qabool ki jiye
Khaksar
Qamar
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