shaira
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by shaira on Mar 28, 2009 22:52:58 GMT 5
Sukhawaraan-e-mehfil, adaab arz hei, aek ghazal aap sab ke liye. Ghazal:
ab kahaaN kee anjuman aaraaiyaaN rah gai, hai bas yahee tanhaaiyaaN jitnaa Doobaa, utnaa nikhraa aadmee ishq kee aisee hai kuchh gahraaiyaaN teergee tanhaa nah kar mujhko kabhee roshnii hai waqt kee parchhaaiyaaN yaad rakhnaa usko aasaaN hai bahut bhool jaane hee meiN hai dushwaariyaaN ghair par ab mujh ko pyaar aane lagaa hai yeh apnoN kee karam farmaaiyaaN dil meiN Saraa ke muHabbat hai makeeN DhooNDte ho or kiyaa achhaaiyaaN Niazmand Saara
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Mar 29, 2009 0:00:44 GMT 5
Boht Khoob Saara Sahiba.
Boht si daad qubool kijiye.
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Apr 1, 2009 13:47:32 GMT 5
Bahut khoob Sara ji .... Daad qabool farmaeay .... sada khush raheay ....
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 7, 2009 10:02:28 GMT 5
Saara aapaa bahut umda behr maiN napi tuli ghazal. Daad hazir!
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Apr 7, 2009 21:08:37 GMT 5
bahooooooooooooooot khoob soraaaaaaaaaaat
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shaira
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by shaira on Apr 9, 2009 23:59:22 GMT 5
Boht Khoob Saara Sahiba. Boht si daad qubool kijiye. bohat shukriya Jooni sahib.
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shaira
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by shaira on Apr 9, 2009 23:59:55 GMT 5
Bahut khoob Sara ji .... Daad qabool farmaeay .... sada khush raheay .... bohat shukriya Zaki sahib.
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shaira
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by shaira on Apr 10, 2009 0:00:58 GMT 5
Saara aapaa bahut umda behr maiN napi tuli ghazal. Daad hazir! bohat shukriya Aatif, lekin abhi tak Tabassum sahib aur Razi sahib ne meri ghazal kyun nahi dekhi??
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shaira
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by shaira on Apr 10, 2009 0:01:41 GMT 5
bahooooooooooooooot khoob soraaaaaaaaaaat kyaaaaaaaaaaaa?
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 11, 2009 0:04:03 GMT 5
sara sahiba mujhay aap ki saari ghazal pasand aai aik shair jo mujhy sab sy acha laga us par mujhy aik aytraz bhi hy
yaad rakhnaa usko aasaaN hai bahut bhool jaane hee meiN hai dushwaariyaaN
yeh shair boht acha hy lykin saari ghazal main is ka hi qaafia mukhtalif hy angraaiyan ,achaaiyan aur tnhaaiyan k saath dushwarian ka qafia bhla nahin lag raha albata yeh shair boht acha hy thanx razi
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