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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 6, 2008 15:53:20 GMT 5
atif sahib ye waqei yadgar lamhat hotay hain. lakin aap nay ye nahin bataya k ye kab aur kis moqa per buvai gae tasaveer hain dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 6, 2008 15:45:50 GMT 5
acchi nazm kahi aap nay. taabeer jo ho so ho khawab dakhnay per to baherhal koi pabandi nahin hay. dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 22, 2008 16:18:13 GMT 5
atif sahib main nay ziada ter seniors ko accha aur shafeeq paya haiy. aisay senior bhi hon gay jin ka ishara aap nay kia hay.junior ka kam respect kerna aur senior ka farz piayr kerna hota hay. piyar kerna wala hamesha galtion ki nishandahi kerta hay aur guide kerta hay. han baz seniors aisay hain k jab koi junior ihtram k sath un ki kisi thakhleeq per raiy deta hay to wo isay apni seniority per hamla tasawar kertay hoay naraz ho jata hay.is k baray main aap kia kahain ge Dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 21, 2008 18:03:00 GMT 5
bohot arsay say ye shair pasandeeda hay
BASTI K SARAY LOG HI AATISH PARAST THAY GHAR JAL RAHA THA MAIRA SAMANDER QAREEB THA
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 21, 2008 15:08:03 GMT 5
atif sahib bohot umda ghazal kahi aap nay.qayam-e-pakistan say phalay aur forun bad jin masail ka samna tha aur pakistan ki badolat jin k hal honay ki umeed bandhi thi aur chand kush fehem aaj bhi umeed lagai bethay hay aur phir jis kerb say guzartay hain aap nay acchi terjamani ki hay is ghazal k baz ashaar main .muslan ye ashar MAIN FARAIB GHORDA-E-RAHGUZAR aur MUJHAY BIJLION SAY MILAY AMAN aur BARI MAHNATON SAY BANA THA JO aur wo jo teergi say nikal day
isi bat ki terjamani ker rahay hain. shaher aashob hain. acchi ghazal likhnay per mubarakbad qabool kijiay
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 18:22:22 GMT 5
aatif sahib bohot acchi ghazal kahi aap nay. jazbay ki shiddat her shair main jhalakti hay. sirf aik arz hay jis shair main aap nay girah lagai hay wahan shaid aap kuch jald bazi ker gae.jis misray per girah lagai jati hah to parnay wala ye tawqo ker raha hota hay k koi aisa misra samnay aaie ga jo chonka de gay aur original shair say bhi ziada lutf day ga.magar mazarat k sath is gazal main aap k han aisa nahin ho saka. baqi gazal dad ki mustahiq hay.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 18:03:23 GMT 5
nadeem sahib teesra shair bohot accha laga. thuk har ker jub insan mausi ki intiha per hota hay to bazoqat wo apni kwahush hi say kinara ker laita hay. is kafiat ki terjamani bohot acchay andaz main ki aap nay. agar is shair per mazeed socha jae to ye insan ki khuda k liay talash ki terjamani bhi kerta hay. meri nazar main to ye hasil-e-ghazal shair hay.dad hazir hay zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 15:29:03 GMT 5
apni pasandeeda shaksiat ko khiraj-e- thaseen her shaks ata kiay gaey hunar k zariay kerta hay.koi singing k zariay koi taqreer ker kay koi column likh ker koi shairi ker kay. aap nay bhi afsanay say ye kam lia hay. bohot acchi koshih hay . acchi bat ye hay kay aap nay jo aalamat istemal ki hay wo aasani say samj main aanay wali hain jo is afsanay ki khoobsoorti hay.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 15:03:47 GMT 5
rawani is muzmoon ki khoobion main say aik khoobi hay. isay shairana nasr kaha jaie to kuch ghalat na ho go.because is main aik musulsul ghazal ya nazm ka taassur milta hay. jazbat bohot acchi tarahan aur saleeqay sau biyan kiay han aap nay. aik nuktay ki taraf nishandahi kerna chahoon ga k agarchay ye nasr hay shairi nahi magar kunkay is main shairana tasur ubharta hay is liay pooray muzmoon main agar aik hi seegha istemal kia jaiy to bhala maloom ho ga. is muzmoon main aap jis say mukhatib hain us kay liay baz jaga aap nau TUM aur baz jaga TOO istemal kia hay ye kuch accha nahin laga. baqi muzmoon umday hay
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 14:36:36 GMT 5
aap nay bulkul buja farmaya ye wakayi dhatai hay. lakin is ki waja hanari maslahat pasandi aur baz jaga kuch logon ki shidat pasandi bhi hay k hamain ye din daykhnay per rahay hain. lakin kushi ki bat ye hay k is k khilaf educated logon ka reaction bhi daykhnay ko mil raha hay.main aaj hi akhbar main perh rahas tha k kisi college main prize distribution k doran jis main ameriki safeer chief guest thay aik student nay un ka musahfaey k liay barah hoa hath nazar andaz ker k aur prize lainay say inkar kertay hoay stage per aa ker chand lamhon main apna moafi-uz-zameer bayan kertay hoay is hamlay kay khilaf reaction zahir kia. aab jald hi america per sub kuch wazayh ho jaij ga. lakin hamain phalay apni ravayatoon ki bajaiy islam ko follow kerna ho ga
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 14:21:03 GMT 5
dilshad sahab nay aik bohot aham masaly ki taraf tawaja dilai hay.waqai maslahat k paish-e-nazar bohot hi muhtat ravaia ikhtiar kia jata hay jis ki waja say is bazm ka maqsad poora nahi ho pata, hum to is bazm main atay hi is liay hain k kuch seekh sakain, aur hamari rahnumai hamaray senior hi karian gay.agar koi shakhs islah ka bura manata hay to bhatar hay k us ko us k hal per chor dia jai. waqt ki tohkron say khud hi sumbhal jaie ga lakin shaid us waqt tak bohot dair ho chuki ho. meri app sub say guzarish hay k main jo kuch bhi arsal karoon us ka bhurpoor tanqidee jaiza lain mujhay khushi ho gi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 13:53:09 GMT 5
rafi sahab ye khabar sun ker bohot sadma hoa. allah aap ko sabr ata farmaiy. hum sub aap k ghum mail barabar k sahreek hain zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 19, 2008 18:11:51 GMT 5
rafi sahab aik acchi radeef k sath bohot umda gazal kahi hay aap nay. main razi sahab ki raiy say ittafaq krta hoon k radeef ko bohot umdagi say nibhatay hoay bohot aala khayalat gazal main daikhnay ko milain hain. dad qabool kijiay zagham abidi
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Jun 19, 2008 17:53:06 GMT 5
Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 19, 2008 17:53:06 GMT 5
aqeel sahab bohot umda
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 19, 2008 17:47:06 GMT 5
main razi sahab ka shukarguzar hoon k meri taveel ghair hazri k bawajood unhon nay mujhay yad rakha. tamam ahbab ka shukria jinhon nay mujhay meri salgirah per yad rakha
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