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Post by Zagham Abidi on Apr 23, 2009 10:59:26 GMT 5
mirza sahab cha gaiy hain aap. mairi taraf say bhi mubarak bad qabool kijiay
zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Apr 23, 2009 10:55:53 GMT 5
naveed sahab umeed hay khariat say hon gay aap. chand savalat lay ker hazir hoa hoon 1. aap nay shair khana kub shuroo kia aur aap nay wo pheli ghazal kub khahi jis say aap ko ehsas hoa k aap main aik accha shair mojood hay.
2. aap ka nazria-e-shair kia hay
3. aap ki ab tak kitni books shai ho chuki hain
zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Apr 22, 2009 10:41:10 GMT 5
zalzalay aur sonami jaisy qudrati afat ya insan k apnay haton dahi janay wali qayamat hamaisha acha adab takhleeq kernay k bais banti hain. jaisay 1947 main partition k moqa per ya sonamy aur pakistan main anay waley zalzalay k bad . aap ka afsana bhi isi pesmanzar main hay. aik acchi koshish hay. afsanay k aghaz say maloom hota tha k aik bohot aala afsana samnay anay wala hay magar jaisay jaisay qari aagay perhta hay hay usay thori mausi hoti hay k aagay koi nai soch aur khayal us k samnay nahi aata. aur is tarha ye aik farmula afsana bun jata hay. thori si koshish say isay bhetar banaya ja sajta tha. khasoosan afsanay k aakhir main aap nay jo nazm likhnay ki koshish ki hay agar wo na hoti to ziada bhetar tha baherhal aap ka andaz-e-thareer daikh ker aik bat to manni peray gi k aap aik accha afsana likh sakti hain
zagham abidi
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taqtee
Apr 21, 2009 11:48:24 GMT 5
Post by Zagham Abidi on Apr 21, 2009 11:48:24 GMT 5
hafiz sahab umeed hay khariat say hon gay aap. aap ki ghazal aur us ki taqtee perhi. main taqtee k asoolon say wakif nahin hoon. lakin kuch baatain kahtakti hain. phelay shair k doosray misray main TERI HUM ko aap nay felun k wazn per kaisay taqtee ki hay.aur second last shair k doosray misray main rusvaion ki taqtee kertay hoay aap nay shayad is ka talafuz change kia hay. maira khayal hay aisa theek nahi hay. please correct me if i m wrong
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Feb 3, 2009 20:11:56 GMT 5
bohot khoobsoorat kalam hay. sadion ki makhsoos zahni tarbiat k zair_e_asar chand mottasib aur na ahel mohaqqakeen kuuch arsay say jis tarhan maarka_e_karbala ko iqtedar ki jang qarar de ker waqea_e_karbala ko jis ghalat andaz say paish kernay ki muzmoom koshish ker rahay hain aisay main hamara farz banta hay k aisay namnehad danishwaron k khilaf qalmi jahad kertay hoay aisay mazameen aur nazmain likhain jo in mottasib aur jahil daniswaron k moon per tamacha hon. england main muqeem aik shair ka shair mujhay yad aa raha hay jo shayad aisay hi muhaqeqeen k liay kaha gaya hay
gham_e_husain ka sqadqa utarnay k liay yazeed dhoondta rheta hoon marnay k liay
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jan 7, 2009 13:13:28 GMT 5
mirza sahab
allah aap ki walidah ko sahat-e- kamla ata farmae. ub un ki tabiat kaisi hay.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Dec 9, 2008 19:05:43 GMT 5
rafi sahab nazm k silsilay main jo jo tajarbat hoay un may khasoosan azad nazm bohot kamyab hoe.aur is ki ahmiat ko tasleem kia ja chuka hay lakin azad ghazal k silsilay main mazhar imam say lay ker adeem hashmi tak jo bhi tajarbat hoey wo sub nakami say dochar hoey . aap k khayal main aisa keun hoa.
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Dec 8, 2008 20:54:30 GMT 5
afsana perha aur us per jo tabsary hoay wo bhi perhay. hairani mujhay is bat per hoe k aik seedhay saday afsanay k baray main shakook-0-shubhat aur ibham jaisay alfaz istaimal kiay gae.afsanay ko jaisay shooroo kia gaya aur jaisay is ka ikhtatam hoa wo is afsanay ki requirement thi.is afsany main ibham aur shakook-0-shubhat paida hoe to afsanay k ikhtamam per wo sub door ho gae.is k liay zaheen ya chalak qari ki behes main pernay ki zaroorat hi nahin. aik puranay mozoo ko achay andaz main paish kernay ki koshish ki gae hay. umeed hay ainda hamain mazeed accha afsana pernay ko milay ga
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Oct 1, 2008 8:38:21 GMT 5
saeed sahab
taza khayalat per mabni ye ghazal acchi lagi.ghasoosan phaila panchvan aur satvan shair bohot acchay lagay.dad hazir hay
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 29, 2008 18:13:11 GMT 5
mughal sahab
poori nazm bhajnay k liay shukria
zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 29, 2008 18:09:51 GMT 5
atiq sahab
shukria
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 28, 2008 21:53:44 GMT 5
suhail sahab
aap ka bohot shukria k aap nay tafseel say jawab dia aur ghazal talash kernay main mairi madad ki. main bohot dinon say is ghazal ki talash main tha lakin kamyab nahin ho raha tha. mujhay yaqeen tha k is forum per zaroor koi mairi rhanumai ker day ga. aap k bataiy hoay no per main aaj hi rabta karoon ga. aik bar phir aap ka shukria
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 27, 2008 17:22:27 GMT 5
mohotram arakeen
mujhay aik nazm ki talash hay. agar mujhay is nzm k baray main maloomat mil jain to aap ka mumnoon hoon ga. nazm ka aik mista ye hay.
reet is nagar ki hay aur janay kub say hay
is nazm k poet aur kitab ka nam chahiay
zagham abidi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Aug 16, 2008 20:49:22 GMT 5
ramish sahab hum sub aap k ghum main barabar k shareek hain
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Aug 16, 2008 20:39:35 GMT 5
happy birth day
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