farri
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by farri on Feb 18, 2009 22:38:10 GMT 5
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Apr 6, 2009 14:27:56 GMT 5
bahut khoobsorat tehreer meryam ji .... Thanks for sharing this ... Sada khush raheay ...
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Post by uzair143 on Apr 10, 2009 0:13:47 GMT 5
bout khoobsurat likha hai app ne
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 11, 2009 0:30:37 GMT 5
aik achi kahani hy zindagi ki talkhion ka khoobsoorat izhaar kia aap ny
aur fari yeh batain natasha maryam kon hain kia yeh aap ka naya qalmi naam hy ?
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Apr 22, 2009 10:41:10 GMT 5
zalzalay aur sonami jaisy qudrati afat ya insan k apnay haton dahi janay wali qayamat hamaisha acha adab takhleeq kernay k bais banti hain. jaisay 1947 main partition k moqa per ya sonamy aur pakistan main anay waley zalzalay k bad . aap ka afsana bhi isi pesmanzar main hay. aik acchi koshish hay. afsanay k aghaz say maloom hota tha k aik bohot aala afsana samnay anay wala hay magar jaisay jaisay qari aagay perhta hay hay usay thori mausi hoti hay k aagay koi nai soch aur khayal us k samnay nahi aata. aur is tarha ye aik farmula afsana bun jata hay. thori si koshish say isay bhetar banaya ja sajta tha. khasoosan afsanay k aakhir main aap nay jo nazm likhnay ki koshish ki hay agar wo na hoti to ziada bhetar tha baherhal aap ka andaz-e-thareer daikh ker aik bat to manni peray gi k aap aik accha afsana likh sakti hain
zagham abidi
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