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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 3, 2008 17:34:28 GMT 5
Aik purani ghazal paish-e-khidmat hai, umeed hai keh aap apni qeemti rray nay zaroor nawazaiN gay.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 3, 2008 21:39:11 GMT 5
ahaaaaaaaa bohat khoob Mirza sahib
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 3, 2008 22:34:30 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib Pasandeedgi ka shukriya
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 3, 2008 22:40:52 GMT 5
Salam...Mirza Ji! aap khoob ho ji
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 3, 2008 23:33:43 GMT 5
WAA Naveed Bhai! Khoobi tau aap ki nazar maiN hai janab keh aap ko ghazal bhaa gayee...... Shukriya
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Post by dilshad on Jun 4, 2008 21:11:05 GMT 5
Aik purani ghazal paish-e-khidmat hai, umeed hai keh aap apni qeemti rray nay zaroor nawazaiN gay.
atif bhai ,
salam _o_alaekum ,
aap ki gazal nazar nawaz huwi . gazal pasand aaei , aur mujhey aesa kuch bhi mahsoos nahi huwa ke main kisi janib nishandahi karoo'n , saaf suthri , chust durust , aur saadah saadah mazameen ....atif bhai majmooei tour par kamiyab gazal hai , yon tou har sher ach_cha hai , lekin sare mazmoon eak hi rang ke hain , sirf maqta hi eak aesa sher hai jis ne mujhey chaonka diya , maqtey me aap ne bahot bad>hi baat kahi hai , iss sher ki agar nacr ki jaey aur tafseela 'n bayan kiya jaey tou kaei eak safhey qalamband hongey !
atif bhai hamari shaeri in sare mazameen ka bhi taqazah ham se karti hai , jo aaj ki eak bahot ahem zaroorat hai , agar sher ki surat koi eak hadeec ya quraan shareef ke hawaley se koi baat qari tak ham pahoncha pate hain tou, yeh bahot bad>hi baat hai . maqtey ke liye main aap ko tah_e_dil se mubarak baad pesh karta hoon , qabool farmaiye
mukhlis dilshadnazmi
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Post by dilshad on Jun 4, 2008 21:15:42 GMT 5
salam _O_alaekum ,
main aap tamami arakeen_e_bazm se darkhwast karta hoon ke kisi bhi takhleeq par sirf waah waah kah kar hi iktefa na karein , balkey jo kuch aap ke zahn me uss gazal ya nazm ke hawaley se aaey tou , aap koshish karein ke kuch likhein , take baat aagey tak jaey , aur eak dusrey ke seekhne ka samaan paeidah ho sake . shukriya mukhlis dilshadnazmi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 4, 2008 23:19:29 GMT 5
atif bhai ,
salam _o_alaekum ,
aap ki gazal nazar nawaz huwi . gazal pasand aaei , aur mujhey aesa kuch bhi mahsoos nahi huwa ke main kisi janib nishandahi karoo'n , saaf suthri , chust durust , aur saadah saadah mazameen ....atif bhai majmooei tour par kamiyab gazal hai , yon tou har sher ach_cha hai , lekin sare mazmoon eak hi rang ke hain , sirf maqta hi eak aesa sher hai jis ne mujhey chaonka diya , maqtey me aap ne bahot bad>hi baat kahi hai , iss sher ki agar nacr ki jaey aur tafseela 'n bayan kiya jaey tou kaei eak safhey qalamband hongey !
atif bhai hamari shaeri in sare mazameen ka bhi taqazah ham se karti hai , jo aaj ki eak bahot ahem zaroorat hai , agar sher ki surat koi eak hadeec ya quraan shareef ke hawaley se koi baat qari tak ham pahoncha pate hain tou, yeh bahot bad>hi baat hai . maqtey ke liye main aap ko tah_e_dil se mubarak baad pesh karta hoon , qabool farmaiye
mukhlis dilshadnazmi Nazmi Bhai! Meray liay aik sanad ka darja rakhta hai aap ka itna jame' aur mufaSSal tabsaraa. Aap nay bahut tawajja say ghazal paRhi aur apnay qeemti khayaalaat say nawaza. Maqtay kay hamraah yeh ghazal qataa baNd hai, issi liay aik say mazameen haiN. Yeh aik kaifiyat ki ghazal hai. Mera maan baRhanay ka bahut shukriya. Allah aap ko jazaa day. Aameen.
Maqtay per aap ki mubaarak qabool shud, zarra nawazi hai aap ki. Aalah ki taraf say yeh mazmoon meray zehn ko wadeeat huwa. Mera koi kamaal nahiN hai. Jazakum-ullah khair.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 4, 2008 23:28:30 GMT 5
salam _O_alaekum ,
main aap tamami arakeen_e_bazm se darkhwast karta hoon ke kisi bhi takhleeq par sirf waah waah kah kar hi iktefa na karein , balkey jo kuch aap ke zahn me uss gazal ya nazm ke hawaley se aaey tou , aap koshish karein ke kuch likhein , take baat aagey tak jaey , aur eak dusrey ke seekhne ka samaan paeidah ho sake . shukriya mukhlis dilshadnazmi Nazmi bhai! maiN Sadd fi Sadd aap ki baat say ittefaaq karta hooN, humaiN Sukhanwar Forum ko Anjuman-e-satesh-e-bahmi ki bajaay aik haqeeqi adbi forum banana chahiay, jahaN seniors apnay juniors ki nigarishaat per agar thoRi si tawajjaa day kar apnay mashwaroN say bhi nawazaiN tau yeh adab ki bahut baRi khidmat ho gi. Aapas maiN dost aik doosray ki chhoti chhoti ghalatiyoN ki nishandahi bhi kar daiN tau yeh bhi munaasib ho ga.
Mujhay umeed hai keh baaqi araakeen bhi app ki aur meri baat say ittefaaq karaiN gay.
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Post by kanwal on Jun 5, 2008 0:30:47 GMT 5
Bohat umdaa ,...
Yeh sher bohat pasand aaya ,....
Daad ke guL aapke iss sher ke naaM ,...
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 5, 2008 0:56:54 GMT 5
KaNwal aap kay phool mil gaay haiN, aap ki itni khoob soorat daad ka tah-e-dil say shukriya, Sher pansad kia iss kay liay bhi mamnoon hoon
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 7, 2008 0:35:35 GMT 5
AOA ATIF bhai bohat umda ghazal ne had darja mutasir kiya aur jese dilsahd sahib ne kaha maqta to hsale ghazal nahi balke jaan e ghazal he bohat saro dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 14, 2008 15:51:15 GMT 5
AOA ATIF bhai bohat umda ghazal ne had darja mutasir kiya aur jese dilsahd sahib ne kaha maqta to hsale ghazal nahi balke jaan e ghazal he bohat saro dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Ramish Bhai! Aap ki taareef nay mera kum az kum dau kilo khoon baRhaya. Bahut shukriya keh aap ko ghazal bhaa gayee. Wagarna tau maiN tifl-e-maktaboN ka shagird hooN.
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Post by Bilal Mirza on Jun 14, 2008 23:39:12 GMT 5
Daad hazir hai itni achchi ghazal per.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 15, 2008 5:55:38 GMT 5
Daad hazir hai itni achchi ghazal per. Taareef aur daad ka shukriya, Bilal MiaaN!
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