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Post by nadeem on May 31, 2008 12:16:44 GMT 5
Qais o laila ka tarafdaar agar mar jaey maeN bhi mar jaoN ye kirdaar agar mar jaey
phir khudaya tujhay soraj ko bujhana ho ga aakhri shakhs hai baydaar agar mar jaey
chopnay walay to kabhi soch kay ik din bilfarz yeh meri khahish e deedaar agar mar jaey
baNdh rakhi hai qabeelay nay tawaqo jis say aur achanak hi wo sardaar agar mar jaey
ain mumkin hai kay aa jaey mera naam kaheN shehr e laila ka gunehgaar agar mar jaey
muntazir jis ki ye AnkhaeN haeN kai barsooN say aur wo chand bhi us paar agar mar jaey
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 31, 2008 22:44:02 GMT 5
chopnay walay to kabhi soch kay ik din bilfarz yeh meri khahish e deedaar agar mar jaey
wahhhh
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Post by naheedv on Jun 1, 2008 6:20:41 GMT 5
achi ghazal hai Nadeem ji,
3rd she'r chupnay walay tu kabhi soch kay ik din bilfarz yeh meri khawhish e deedaar agar mar jaey
waah, iss she'r ko paRh kar ye misra' yaad aa geyaa
"aaNkh se door na ho dil se utar jaaye gaa"
daad!
shukriya Naheed
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on Jun 2, 2008 8:58:31 GMT 5
Wah Nadeem Sb wah bohot khoob. achi ghazal hai
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jun 2, 2008 15:00:42 GMT 5
aoa nadem bahi salam sir jee kiya hall hy ap ka ap ki ghazal parhy zabardastt wahh wah wah ap kamal hy kar deyty hian jee dadd haezer hy
aur khas torr py ye heyrat bhar share
baNdh rakhi hai qabeelay nay tawaqo jis say aur achanak hi wo sardaar agar mar jaey wahh
ap ka Mubashir saeed
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Post by nadeem on Jun 8, 2008 17:30:49 GMT 5
muhtram Rafi Tabbsum Salam bahut shukriya aap naen ghazal pasand ki
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Post by nadeem on Jun 8, 2008 17:35:06 GMT 5
Muhtarma Naheed Adaab ghazal pasand karnay ka shukriya baqi jo aap naen aitraaz kiya wo sawaal chana jawaab mash wali baat hai aur aisa lagta hai jesay aap ko mujh say koi zid hai so ab maen yeh kahon ga keh aap apnay tabsray mehfooz rakha karaen kiyon keh maen apna aap manwana nahen chahta wassalam
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Post by nadeem on Jun 8, 2008 17:39:56 GMT 5
muhtram Atiq ur Rehman salamat rahaen aap naen ghazal pasand ki is kay liey maen mamnoon hoon
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Post by nadeem on Jun 8, 2008 17:43:33 GMT 5
Piyaray Mubashir khush aur kamyaab raho maen bilkul theek hoon bas masroof bahut hoon yeh sher meri apni kahani hai jo tum naen pasand kiya issi ka tasalsul yeh hai
ab mujh say qabeelay ki hifazat nahen ho gi ab haath maen dil hai koi sahmsheer nahen hai
issi qisam ki masroofiyat maen hoon dua karo maen hamesha haq ka saht deta rahoon
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Post by saeed on Jun 10, 2008 4:50:14 GMT 5
Nadeem,
achhi kavish hai.....yeh sher mujhey bhi buhut acha laga. chopnay walay to kabhi soch kay ik din bilfarz yeh meri khahish e deedaar agar mar jaey
Daad! Saeed
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Post by nadeem on Jun 11, 2008 16:30:29 GMT 5
muhtram Saeed bhai bahut shukriya aap naen ghazal pasand ki Allah aap ko khush rakhay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 14, 2008 13:10:03 GMT 5
bari umda ghazal hay bahut achi laga parh kar
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 20, 2008 8:35:50 GMT 5
Nadeem ji! Kia umda ashaar-e-ghazal hai! Kissi aik sher ka hawala dena bahut mushkil sabit ho raha hai, kiyooN keh sub kay sub ashaar baRay jaandaar haiN. Bahut si daad hazir hai.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 18:03:23 GMT 5
nadeem sahib teesra shair bohot accha laga. thuk har ker jub insan mausi ki intiha per hota hay to bazoqat wo apni kwahush hi say kinara ker laita hay. is kafiat ki terjamani bohot acchay andaz main ki aap nay. agar is shair per mazeed socha jae to ye insan ki khuda k liay talash ki terjamani bhi kerta hay. meri nazar main to ye hasil-e-ghazal shair hay.dad hazir hay zagham abidi
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