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Post by kanwal on Jun 20, 2008 12:10:19 GMT 5
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 15:03:47 GMT 5
rawani is muzmoon ki khoobion main say aik khoobi hay. isay shairana nasr kaha jaie to kuch ghalat na ho go.because is main aik musulsul ghazal ya nazm ka taassur milta hay. jazbat bohot acchi tarahan aur saleeqay sau biyan kiay han aap nay. aik nuktay ki taraf nishandahi kerna chahoon ga k agarchay ye nasr hay shairi nahi magar kunkay is main shairana tasur ubharta hay is liay pooray muzmoon main agar aik hi seegha istemal kia jaiy to bhala maloom ho ga. is muzmoon main aap jis say mukhatib hain us kay liay baz jaga aap nau TUM aur baz jaga TOO istemal kia hay ye kuch accha nahin laga. baqi muzmoon umday hay
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 20, 2008 21:48:45 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat tehreer Kanwal sahiba
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Post by kanwal on Jun 21, 2008 2:05:41 GMT 5
rawani is muzmoon ki khoobion main say aik khoobi hay. isay shairana nasr kaha jaie to kuch ghalat na ho go.because is main aik musulsul ghazal ya nazm ka taassur milta hay. jazbat bohot acchi tarahan aur saleeqay sau biyan kiay han aap nay. aik nuktay ki taraf nishandahi kerna chahoon ga k agarchay ye nasr hay shairi nahi magar kunkay is main shairana tasur ubharta hay is liay pooray muzmoon main agar aik hi seegha istemal kia jaiy to bhala maloom ho ga. is muzmoon main aap jis say mukhatib hain us kay liay baz jaga aap nau TUM aur baz jaga TOO istemal kia hay ye kuch accha nahin laga. baqi muzmoon umday hay Salam ,...
Bohat achaa laga aapka yeh mesg dekh kar, aur dekh kar khushi hui ke Aapne meri tawjaH week point ki tarf dilaayee, Dil ki gehraiyoN se Shukrguzaar hooN Aapki ,...
Maine Edit kar liya hai ,....
Aapka tah e dil se Shukriya ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 21, 2008 23:34:42 GMT 5
mohabat ka bhar poor izhaar waaliahana pun aur deewangi muhabat ki ataa hoti hy aur jisay yeh mil jaay us ki tehreer main woh rawani aur husn payda hota hy jo tumharay haan mojood hay kanwal mujhy boht achi lagi yeh tehreer boht arsay baad tumhari nasr parhi aaj main nay aur lutf aagia thanx razi
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 28, 2008 17:18:35 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee takheer hoi tokuch bayes e takheer bhi tha jee nahi is bar mahaz meri susti aurkuch halat ki wajha jane kion dil bujha sa howa tha kai bar sukhanwar par akar bhi log in hone ka jee nahi kar raha tha kher hota he kabhi kabhi esa bhi
ap ki aik bohat khobsorat tehreer jise ap ki zubani suna bhi aur yahan parha bhi ap ki apni hi zaat ke sath yeh wabastagi bohat kamal ki he akhir me jo rukh diya he ap ne is tehreer ko wo ap ki zehni baloghat kla monh bolta sabot he bohat umdagi se ap ne is sachi tehreer ko afsane ka rang de diya dad kebohat se phool aur bohat sari doauo,n ka tohfa ap ke liye is tehreer ke liye aur saima jee ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 2:05:39 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat tehreer Kanwal sahiba Thank u Rafi Sahib ,....
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Nadia
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Post by Nadia on Jul 25, 2008 17:54:51 GMT 5
Boht Arsay baad app ki threer parhi kanwal ji or kamal e umdagi se app ne likhe yeh tehreer
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