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Post by HASIB RANA on May 20, 2007 15:55:08 GMT 5
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 20, 2007 13:50:26 GMT 5
BOHAT KHOOB AQEEL JEE ........... DAD QABOOL KEJEY
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] haseeb sb Bahut shukria[/quote] ITsMY PLEASUR n U WEL COME ALL THE BEST
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 17:10:34 GMT 5
ankhoon ki dararooN say lapakty hein bujhy khaab urta hay koe raakh samandar miry andar agni pe chirakta hay tamanaein barahman parmatma dalay kahin jhomar miry andar BOHAT KHOOB AQEEL JEE ........... DAD QABOOL KEJEY
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 22:41:36 GMT 5
AaP KA SHUKER GUZAAR HOON KEH AaP NAY GHAZAL PERHE PASAND KI ......... Aor IS NACHEEZ KO DAD K QABEL SUMJHA .... THANKZ ONCE AGAIN .... JE KHALID SAHIB .. NARAZ HONEY KI IS MIN KOE BAAT HE NAHEN HAY ....... KUENKEH MAIN SAMJHTA HOON KEH JAIZ TANQEED Aor AETRAZAT HUMAREY KAAM KO Aor B NIKHAARBAKHSHTEY HAYIN ........ Aor IS TARAH MALOMAAT MAIN B IZAFAH HOTA HAY ......... MERE TU WESEY B KOSH'SH HOTE HAY KEH KOE AISE BAAT NA KAROON JISS SAY KISE KI DIL AaZARE HO .... LAKIN YEH B SACH HAY KEH PAYMANAH BHER KER AaKHER CHALAK HE JATA HAY .. BEHR HAAL MUJHEY AQEEL SAHIB KI TANQEED ACHE LAGEE ...... HO SAKTA HAY IN K E'LAM MAIN YEH BATEN NAA HOON ...... JO INHOON NAY KEEN .... YA PHER YEH B MOMKIN HAY KEH IN KO KOE NEEM USTAD MIL GAYA HOO .... JISS NAY IN KO YEH GHALAT TALEEM DAY DEE ........... MAIN SAMUJHTA HOON KEH YAHAN PER IS PEYARE BAZM MAIN HUMAREY AaNEY KA MAQSAD HE SEKHNA Aor SEKHANA HE HAY ........ WERNA SHAERE TU AaP KAHEN PER B KER SEKTEY HAYIN .. Aor P-MEDIA IS K LEY BEST PLACE HAY ....... MAIN AaP SAY B YAHE UMEED KERTA HOON . KEH AaP B POETRY SECTION MAIN IN RAHEN GAY .............. Aor APNI SOOJH BOOJH K MOTABEQ AGAR KAHEEN PER KISI KI POETRY MAIN KOE KAME BESHE AaP KO NAZER AaTE HAY TU AaP BEHTER TAREQEY SAY MSALOON KI MADAD SAY ISLAH KAREN GAY ......... MAIN NAHEEN SAMJHTA KEH E'LAM HUMARE JAGEER HAY ..... BELKEH HER US TALEB-E-E'LAM KA HAQU HAY JO IS KO PANA CHAHEY ..... I HOPE K AaP IS ZIMAN MAIN MERA BHER POR SATH DAYN GAY .. BE HAPPY n KEEP SMILING MAY ALLAH BLESS U [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 15:33:13 GMT 5
AIK TAZAH TREEN GHAZAL ......... KANWAL JE KI FERMAESH PER SUKHAN WAR K NAAM .............. UMEED HAY APP KO PASAND AaEY GEE .............. ........................................ THANKZ
bohat khoob Rana SahibTHANK U V-MUCH TABASUM JEE BE HAPPY
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 15:29:40 GMT 5
Humari farmaish pe nazr e karam karne ke liye be had shukriya janaab ,..... Khushi hui dekh kar ke aap iss bazm ke active rukan bante jaa rahe haiN ,.... Umdaa khiyaal paish kiya hai aapne ,.... dil ke gulshan se dheroN daad ke guL aapki nazR;.... HAAH HAAAH HAAAAAAAAA ........ HUMMMMMMMMMMM .... AJI YEH TU AaP KI ZRA NWAZI HAY KEH AaP NAY FERMAESH KI ...... WERNA HUM IS QABEL KAHAN KEH KOE HUM SAY FERMAESH KERY .... ............KANWAL DAR ASAL MAIN ZMANAH SAZI MEIN IS-QADER PHANS CHUKA HOON KEH FORUM KO THEEK TARAH SAY TIME NAHEEN DAY PATA ......... LAKIN MAIN KOSH'SH KARON GAA KEH BAZM SAY DOOR NA HONY PAOON ...... INSHA ALLAH .. WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL MAY ALLAH BLESS U
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 14:40:34 GMT 5
ghazal ka matalia kia aj kay adabi ufuq say mail nahi khati ye ghazal is kay ilawa alfaz ka istemaal par bhi nazr e sani chaheat arabia aur farsi alfaz mein ataf jaiz nahi hota jasay bint o pisar isi tarha ay ki haey majhool ka girana qabeeh hay mehnaat aur shauq say rahein hamwar hoa chahein gi THANK U V-MUCH AQEEL SAHB ........ AaP NY AeTRAZAT KE'EY . TANQEED KI ................ AaP KA BAY HAD MAMNOON HOON ....... JWABAT PE'SH-E-KHEDMAT HAYIN .........
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 0:13:16 GMT 5
AIK TAZAH TREEN GHAZAL ......... KANWAL JE KI FERMAESH PER SUKHAN WAR K NAAM .............. UMEED HAY APP KO PASAND AaEY GEE .............. ........................................ THANKZ
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Ghazal
May 19, 2007 13:46:41 GMT 5
Post by HASIB RANA on May 19, 2007 13:46:41 GMT 5
maiN bhi hijrat peh aaj hooN majboor apnay seenay ko ghar e saur to kar BOHAT UMDAH TABASUM JEE .. BOHAT HE NICE GHAZAL DAD QABOOL KEJEY ALL THE BEST
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] Bohat Shukria Rana sahib[/quote] U WEL COME DEAR ........ WISH U ALL THE BEST
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Ghazal
May 15, 2007 18:25:35 GMT 5
Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 18:25:35 GMT 5
ahbab ki khidmat maiN aik aur ghazal paish kar raha hooNik enaiyat zra si aur to kar pehlay wa,adooN pah apnay ghaur to kar
zarf mera bhi tujh peh khul ja,ay hasb e taufiq mujh peh jaur to kar
saath dunia bhi tujh ko lay kay chalay khud ko hasb e hwa,ay daur to kar
chor day ga to sab gilay shikway khud rawaiay peh apnay ghaur to kar
maiN bhi hijrat peh aaj hooN majboor apnay seenay ko ghar e saur to kar maiN bhi hijrat peh aaj hooN majboor apnay seenay ko ghar e saur to kar BOHAT UMDAH TABASUM JEE .. BOHAT HE NICE GHAZAL DAD QABOOL KEJEY ALL THE BEST
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 14, 2007 13:22:46 GMT 5
...... BOHAT KHOOB RAMESH JEE ................ ACHHE GHAZAL LIKHE HAY Aap NAY ........... DAD QABOOL KEJEY ALLAH PAK AaP KO TENDAROSTI ATTA ERY ........... AaMEEN [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 19:25:15 GMT 5
Thanx Haseeb sahab, bohut bohut thanx nazam ko pasand karnay ka. U WEL COME JEE ............. BE HAPPY
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 14, 2007 13:49:17 GMT 5
………………….HAIN KHWAAB SAARAY RAASTAY!!!!!!
Har aik pal bahar tha, Ajab nasha sawaar tha, Kisi ka bas khayal tha, Ye man k youn nihaal tha, Bicharna bhi muhaal tha,!!! NICE POEM ............ NEHA JE KEEP IT UP ....... BE HAPPY ALL THE BEST [/COLOR]
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 19, 2007 13:39:02 GMT 5
Thanx a lot Rafi bhai, haseeb sahab, Aqeel sahab, sunita ji n kanwal, Aaap sab ki hosla afzai aur ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka shukriya. U WEL COME KEEP SMILING
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 14, 2007 13:46:00 GMT 5
Mein Jaanty hoon k, Tumhain mujh say Muhabbat hai, Tumhary aankhon mein, khwaabon, Tumharay saanson ki har dor main, Bas main hi basty hoon, Tumhary zindagee k har waraq par, Mera hi Naam likha hai, Mein Jaanty hoon, k tum.. Mera bin ik pal bhi, Jee nahin saktay, Magar mein kia karoon Jaanaan, K mein majboor hoon Jaanaan, Tumharay Dil pay likha Naam apna , Padh tou sakty hoon, Magar Un khwaab Lamhon ko, Teri Bayloss Chahat ko, Mein apna nahin sakty, K Mein Majboor hoon Jaanaan, Bohut Majboor hoon Jaanaan. NICE POEM ............ NEHA JE KEEP IT UP ....... ALL THE BEST [/COLOR]
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