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Post by HASIB RANA on May 20, 2007 14:09:27 GMT 5
Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye
KANWAL IS SH'AR PER DOBARAH GHOR KERO .......... QAFEYAH GHALAT HAY ........... NOHA IS MAIN USE NAHEEN HO SEKTA KUEN KEH YEH WORD ( NOHAH .... HAY NA KEH NOHA ) PANCHWAN SH'AR B GHOR TALAB HAY ( kab se khare haiN hum ) ( guzra na kijiye ) ZMANAH MUKHTALF HAY ............... ( JAB B KHARE HOON HUM ) ( GUZRA NAH KIJIEY ) ZEYADAH BEHTER RAHEY GAA ....... BAQI JO TM BEHTER SAMJHO .................... TUMHARE MERZE WISH U ALL THE BEST BE HAPPY [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 17:48:44 GMT 5
BETEY HUEY PALOON KO BHULANEY K LEY . HAFEZAH KAMZOOR KERNA PAREY GAA .......... PER YEH ZULAM NA KERNA KABHE .......... j / k NICE ONE.... LIKE U WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL [/COLOR][/quote] ,....yeh to doosri ghazl thi ,... shayed jaldi meiN dheehan nahiN raha ,....... anyway bohat shukriya,..... [/quote] HUMMMMMMMMMMMM ......... MALOOM HAY ......... 3 DIN PEHLEY MAIN B YEH GHALTI KER CHUKA HOON ......... NAZAM KI JAGAH GHAZAL POST KER DE THE ............. KHAIR ........... NICE GHAZAL Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye KITNI DAD DOON ................. MERA KHYAL HAY KEH JITNI DAD B DAY DOON KAM ER JAEY GEE ........... IS SHEAR K SAMNEY ......... WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL .......... SDA MUSKORATI RAHOO
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 13:26:47 GMT 5
BETEY HUEY PALOON KO BHULANEY K LEY . HAFEZAH KAMZOOR KERNA PAREY GAA .......... PER YEH ZULAM NA KERNA KABHE .......... j / k NICE ONE.... LIKE U WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL [/COLOR]
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Post by HASIB RANA on Aug 14, 2007 15:03:43 GMT 5
HMMMMMMMMMM ................ AaP KO ACHE LAGE NASRE NAZM ......... THANKZ 4 LIKING ......... BE HAPPY n TAKE CARE
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 16:04:16 GMT 5
Sahil sahab, Nice poetry. THANKZZ SO MUCH
BE HAPPY
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 15:53:39 GMT 5
Hum tanha kaise ho sakte haiN haseeb jee ,...
Kathi meethi yaadeiN humesha humare sanG rehti haiN , Hum kaise tanhaa reh sakte haiN ,....
Bohat khubsoorat si poem parhne ko di aapne daad e guL aapki nazR ,.........
HUMMMMMM .. KEH TU TUM THEEK RAHE HO .............. KUCH KHATIMETHI YAADEN HAMESHAH SATH HE REHTEEN HAYIN ......... WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL MAY ALLAH BLESS U [/COLOR]
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 14:11:16 GMT 5
PASANDEDAGE K LEY BAY HAD MAMNOON HOON AaP KA WISH U ALL THE BEST
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 14:08:19 GMT 5
THANK U VERY MUCH DEAR BE HAPPY
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 11, 2007 18:16:44 GMT 5
UDAAS SHAMOON MAIN VERAAN RESTOON PER BUJHEY CHRAGH LEY KER MUNTAZER HAYIN NAZREN KISS KI ?
MUJHEY TU KUCH KHABER NAHEEN HAN MAGAR MAIN JANTA HOON FAQAT ITNAA ;;;
PAL BHER KI ZINDAGE MAIN KUCH PAL APNEY B THEY MAGAR MUJH SAY WO KHOO GA'EY HAAN WO KHOO GA'EY Aor HUM TENHA HO GA'EY
RANA HASIB SAHEL
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Post by HASIB RANA on Aug 14, 2007 14:55:25 GMT 5
MUJHEY TUM SAY MOHAB'BAT HAY MAGAR MUJHEY DER NAHEEN TERY KHONEY KA NAH HASRAT KOE TERY MILAN KI HAAN MAGAR IS LAA'SHEY K ANDER TERE CHAHATON KA SAMUNDER ! MERE ROOH KA WAJOOD IK TOO HE TU HAY TOO NAHEEN AGARCHEH SAATH MERY MAGAR TERA AHSAAS MERY SAATH HE HAY ROSHANI KI KIRAN KHUSHBOO KA JHONKA CHAOON HAY TU MERY LE'EY JALTE DHOOP MAIN !
DASH'T-O-SEHRA KI VEHSHAT MAIN MERA HOSLAH HAY TERA WAJOOD MUJHEY TUMHEN MOQEED NAHEEN KERNA APNI HASRATON KA DAMAN NAHEEN BHERNA TERE RAH K KANTEY MAIN CHUN LOON GAA MUSHKALEN TERE APNEY DAMAN MAIN BHER LOON GAA BAN K JUDNU TERE RAAHEN MUJHEY ROSHAN REKHNA HAY BAS MUJHEY TUMHEN KHUSH DEKHNA HAY KUEN-KEH MUJHEY TUM SAY MOHAB'BAT HAY .................................
RANA HASIB SAHEL
MUJHEY TUM SAY MOHAB'BAT HAY MAGAR MUJHEY DER NAHEEN TERY KHONEY KA NAH HASRAT KOE TERY MILAN KI HAAN MAGAR IS LAA'SHEY K ANDER TERE CHAHATON KA SAMUNDER ! MERE ROOH KA WAJOOD IK TOO HE TU HAY Wah Rana Saheb Kia Bat Kahe Hay ........... Yahe Hay Haqeeqe Mohabt .......... Agar Koi Samjh Sakey Tu ......... ................................. Ap Ki Poetry Perh Ker Bohat Acha Laga . Aesy He Likhty Rahyn . Aor Hum Prhty Rahyn ..... Once Again I Must Say Very Nice Poem . THANK U V-MUCH DAER ................... AaP HAYIN KAHAN ........... MAIN B US WAQAT TAK NAHEEEN LIKHOON GAA JAB TAK AaP TASHREEF NAHEEN LAY AaTEY .......... ALL THE BEST DEAR
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 15:22:38 GMT 5
Sahil sahab, khubsurat nazam hai..daad qubool kijye THANK U NEHA JEE .......... IT,S MY PLEASURE ..........
BE HAPPY n KEEP SMILING
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 14:04:59 GMT 5
Wah janaab ,... Aapki takhleeqaat bhi aapki tarah munfarid munfarid si haiN, Dil meiN utarane waali ,... Daad ke guL aapke liye,....... REALY ............. LAKIN MERY USTAD-E-MOHTARAM ABHE TAK MUJH DANT'TEY REHTEY HAYIN ........ KEHTEY HAYIN KEH kg 1 K BACHEY B TUM SAY ACHHA LIKH LAIN GAY .................... BE HAPPY MAY ALLAH BLESS U [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 13:52:32 GMT 5
sahil sb bout khoob likha hai app ne keep it up BOHAT BOHAT SHUKREYAH UZAIR SAHIB .... .... INSHA ALLAH BE HAPPY
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 13:47:42 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm Rana Sahib dad qabool farmaiay THANK U JEE THANK U VERY MUCH ........ AaP KI DAD HE HUMARA HOSLAH HAY ............. MAY ALLAH BLESS U
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 11, 2007 18:09:40 GMT 5
MUJHEY TUM SAY MOHAB'BAT HAY MAGAR MUJHEY DER NAHEEN TERY KHONEY KA NAH HASRAT KOE TERY MILAN KI HAAN MAGAR IS LAA'SHEY K ANDER TERE CHAHATON KA SAMUNDER ! MERE ROOH KA WAJOOD IK TOO HE TU HAY TOO NAHEEN AGARCHEH SAATH MERY MAGAR TERA AHSAAS MERY SAATH HE HAY ROSHANI KI KIRAN KHUSHBOO KA JHONKA CHAOON HAY TU MERY LE'EY JALTE DHOOP MAIN !
DASH'T-O-SEHRA KI VEHSHAT MAIN MERA HOSLAH HAY TERA WAJOOD MUJHEY TUMHEN MOQEED NAHEEN KERNA APNI HASRATON KA DAMAN NAHEEN BHERNA TERE RAH K KANTEY MAIN CHUN LOON GAA MUSHKALEN TERE APNEY DAMAN MAIN BHER LOON GAA BAN K JUDNU TERE RAAHEN MUJHEY ROSHAN REKHNA HAY BAS MUJHEY TUMHEN KHUSH DEKHNA HAY KUEN-KEH MUJHEY TUM SAY MOHAB'BAT HAY .................................
RANA HASIB SAHEL
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