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Post by saeed on Mar 27, 2008 3:20:35 GMT 5
Ishaaq Athar saheb,
Buhut dukh hua aapke walid-e-muhtaram ki wafat ka sunker. Khuda unhen jawar-e-rehmet me jageh de aur aapko aur aapke ehbaab ko sabr se nawazey. Amin!
saeed
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GHAZAL
Mar 26, 2008 3:07:23 GMT 5
Post by saeed on Mar 26, 2008 3:07:23 GMT 5
achhi kavish hai. Daad! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 21, 2008 8:25:58 GMT 5
Anmol saheba,
'chalo tum bhi zara ye khwaab dekho' achhi kavish hai....Daad!
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Post by saeed on Mar 21, 2008 8:14:27 GMT 5
Waqaar saheb. HAPPY BIRTHDAY Saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 19, 2008 3:43:55 GMT 5
saeed sahab aap ki shairi ka maddah hoon ghazlain aap ki parhin aur nazmain bhi yeh drust k nazm kehna her aik k bus ki baat nahi aur yeh k is ka alag mizaaj hota hy magar meri raay yeh hy k acha ghazal go nazm mainn jub taba aazmaai karta hy to to wo zyaada behtar andaz main baat kar sakta hy us k haan jo craft hoti hy aur us k nateejay main nazm main joo aik aahang aur moseeqi payda hoti hy woh nazm ko qaari k dil main utaar dayti hy bohat see daad qabool kijiay aur nazmain kehtay rahiay thanx razi Razi Bhai, buhut shukriya daad ka. aapney baja kaha... aazad nazm se pehley baqaeda ghazal/ paband shaeri ko smajhna aur seekhna lazim hai. Jesey Picaso ne pehley baqaeda painting seekhi aur phir tajreedi art to ek nei meraj di. meri nacheez raye ye hai ke Ghazal seekhney aur smamajhney ki had tak to theek hai....Lekin aazad nazm mein kei barhey nam aisey hain jinki pehchaan he sirf nazm hai... misaal ke tor pe N M Rashid, Majeed Amjad...... aur phir Urdu mein be-shumar aisi bhi misaalen hain ke barhy barhy ghazal-go aazad nazm ko taskheer nahen kar sake.... aur kisi had tak aazad nazm to ghazal ke aashiqon ne ta-assub ka shikar bhi banaya hai..... Kher...meraey nazdeek nazm bhi ghazal ki tarah baqaeda ishq chahati hai...donon ka saroor apna apna hai. Buhut nawazish! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 18, 2008 6:46:20 GMT 5
Atif Mirza saheb- buhut mubarak ho salgira ki. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 17, 2008 4:04:51 GMT 5
Great Idea!
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Post by saeed on Mar 17, 2008 4:01:12 GMT 5
Saeed Saheb Aek achi nazm ke liye bherpoor daad. Aap ney sahi kaha ....azad nazm ka alehda mizaj hota hey ya shayad koi mizaj hota hi naheen. Azad nazm kehna her aek ke bas ki baat naheen..kam az kam merey bas ki baat tow naheen....aap ney khub nazm likhi aur khub nibhaya hey usey. dheron daad Kher andesh Qamar Qamar sb, Nazm pasand karhey aur feedback keliye buhut mashkoor hoon. aadab! Saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 17, 2008 3:57:57 GMT 5
Saeed SaaHib, aadaab! aap ki ghazal bahut achchhi lagi. DheroN daad qubool kijiye! Anmol Anmol, buhut nawazish apki! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 17, 2008 3:55:56 GMT 5
Wah Saeed saheb bohat khub sari ghazal hi bohat achi hey lekin ye 4 sher tow bohat hi pasand aaey Nabz chalti he nahen zarb-e-mohabbat ke seva Ishq! Mojhko terey aazaar ne zinda rakha Ek fasana! jisey her peich ne pamaal kiya Ek kahani! jisey kirdaar ne zinda rakha Wo tamasha tha jisey ehl-e-nazar bhool gaye Wo khaber hai jisey akhbaar ne zinda rakha Chorh ker mujhko kahen ka bhi na chorha usney Maar ker mujhko merey yaar ne zinda rakha khas taur per ye aakhri sher dheron daad Qamar Qamar saheb Buhut shukriya daad ka. nawazish! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 16, 2008 6:26:36 GMT 5
Noshi, aapko buhut buhut mubarakbad salgera ki.
best wishes, SAeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 14, 2008 6:05:18 GMT 5
Kanwal saheba, achhi kavish hai.....
"Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN"
wah
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Post by saeed on Mar 14, 2008 6:01:33 GMT 5
Bohat khoob ,.... Aik achi nazM parhne ko di aapne ,.... Shukriya ,.... Daad e guL aapki nazR ,.... Kanwal, Buhut shukriya aapka dad-e-gul keliye!!!! Saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 14, 2008 5:59:44 GMT 5
Shukriya Tanweer and Kanwal! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 13, 2008 4:13:42 GMT 5
Saeed sahab ap ki nazm parhi achi lagi magar ap ki ghazal kay muqablay mein nazm nisbatan kamzor hay. Malak sb, mein ne kaha tha na mein abhi tifl-e-maktab hoon... ...aur phir aazad nazm ka apna ek alag mizaj hota hai...aapki muhabbat hai ke aapko meri ghazal ziadeh pasand hai. saeed
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