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GHAZAL
Mar 23, 2008 22:15:30 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Mar 23, 2008 22:15:30 GMT 5
Ser pe ger saibaN nhi hota waqt phir meherbaN nhi hota
zulm ki inteha bhi hoti hai derd phir bhi yayaN nhi hota
eik misra bhi ek kahani hai waqeyaa bekaraN nhi hota
kuch to nadaniyan meri hongi hadsaa nagahaaN nhi hota
ho gyaa chupp jo thaa sarapa derd ab to aah o fughaaN nhi hota
dete rehte hain zindagi kokhiraj kab mera imtehaaN nhi hota ------------------------------------------
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GHAZAL
Mar 23, 2008 23:11:44 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 23, 2008 23:11:44 GMT 5
eik misra bhi ek kahani hai waqeyaa bekaraN nhi hota
dete rehte hain zindagi kokhiraj kab mera imtehaaN nhi hota
Bohat khoob Neelofer sahiba
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GHAZAL
Mar 24, 2008 11:36:22 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 24, 2008 11:36:22 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hay aap ki
yeh ashaar mujhay khaas taur par pasand aai aik shair par mujhay aytraaz hay yahaan aap sy tawarad ho gia hy
mujhay aik maroof shair yaad aa raha hy
waqt karta hy parwarish barson haadsa aik dum nah hota
mera khyaal hy aap ko is shair par nazr e saani karni chaahiay thanx razi
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GHAZAL
Mar 24, 2008 12:25:36 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Mar 24, 2008 12:25:36 GMT 5
Razi Bhai ! Aadab.......... Aap ne jis sher per napasandedgi ka izhaar kia hai aor kisi brey shayer ka hwala bhi diya hai...mujhe is baat per koi eitraaz nhi ho ga ager aap chahen iss sher ko nikal den.... lekin mujhe iss baat ka zara sa dukh zaroor ho ga k k woh sher jo mai ne practicaly aik hadse k baad likha tha, kisi brey shyer k sher se tkra gyaa. aap ne twajja se perhi, ye mera eizaaz hai....salamat rahen neelofar
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GHAZAL
Mar 24, 2008 18:09:53 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 24, 2008 18:09:53 GMT 5
umda ghazal hay dad qabooleay
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GHAZAL
Mar 26, 2008 3:07:23 GMT 5
Post by saeed on Mar 26, 2008 3:07:23 GMT 5
achhi kavish hai. Daad! saeed
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GHAZAL
Mar 27, 2008 14:26:20 GMT 5
Post by waqaar on Mar 27, 2008 14:26:20 GMT 5
Neelofar SaaHebah, aadaab! aCHh~ii ghazal kahii aapnay. Razi SaaHeb ki baat say ittefaaq hay. do,am Yeh keh "ab to aah o fughaaN nhi hota" maiN ShaaYad mas,lah hay. "aah-o-fughaaN" hoti hay Ya hota hay? ghor t^alab baat hay. daad qubool kee jiYay is aCh~i aur saadi ghazal per. waQaar
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GHAZAL
Mar 27, 2008 17:08:51 GMT 5
Post by dnangrani on Mar 27, 2008 17:08:51 GMT 5
Neelofer ji
bahut achi gazal pesh ki hai
zulm ki inteha bhi hoti hai derd phir bhi yayaN nhi hota
kahte hain dard sabka saanjha hai phir bhi jaane yakeen nahin hota.
Daad ke saath
Devi
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GHAZAL
Mar 29, 2008 17:09:51 GMT 5
Post by tmasood on Mar 29, 2008 17:09:51 GMT 5
kuch to nadaniyan meri hongi hadsaa nagahaaN nhi hota
bohat khoob
daad haazir hai
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