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Post by saeed on Mar 11, 2008 9:47:03 GMT 5
Achha hai Khalid sb. daad. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 11, 2008 9:45:13 GMT 5
Bohat khoob aap ki nazm bhi aik munfarid andaz rakhti hay Saeed sahib buhut nawazish Rafi bhai! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 11, 2008 9:44:36 GMT 5
waah bahut hi khoob, bahut pasand aayi aap ki nazm.dheron daad meri aur se qubuul kareN.aap bahut achha kehte hain, chaahe ghazal ho ya nazm.khush raheN. Buhut shukriya Sunita gee. aapki zarra nawazi hai. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 10, 2008 8:18:20 GMT 5
Nazm: Barf Ki Moorat (Saeed, Sydney) Ajab tehdaar moorat hai… Haseen bhi, dil-nasheen bhi aur gurezaan bhi Keh jiska zaheri paiker Koe sheeshey ki kam-aamez gurhiya hai Jo anpey fun ke mard-aalood maqtal mein Rawaan sang-o-sanaan se bach ke jeeney ki sa-e mein Faaselon se umr karti hai! Who khul jaye… To paiker hai kisi mohtaat matti ka Jo khul-ke hans to leta hai Magar rishton ke jungle mein sada khayef Kisi munh-zor khwahish ke machalney se Kisi na-mehrbaan barish mein ghulney se Jo ghul jaye… to who ek barf ki moorat jo muddat se kaehn oonchey paharhon per kisi ke garm seeney per pighalney ki tamanna mein sitadeh hai Pighal jaye… to apni zaat ke under Who ek khushboo ka paiker hai Keh jiskey must ranggon se dhanak bhi faiz leti hai Yeh be-khaufi, yeh rang-o-boo ki aamezash Yeh harf-o-khwab ka paras Kisi soorat Ger uskey zaheri paiker mein bas jayen To who moorat Namood-e-harf ke ka-bey mein Apney fun ki masnad per Amar honey ke layeq hai!
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Post by saeed on Mar 8, 2008 8:29:41 GMT 5
Razi bhai achi kavish hai....ye sher khasker acha laga .
taa rahay ashk bahanay ki riwayat zinda teray hotay huay marnay ki tamanna hay mujhy (halanke hamarey school of thought ka nahen;-)
Jahan tak marney aur maarney ka taaluq hai to...Faraz sb ki nei kitab "A ishq-e-janoon pesha" mein Ghalib ki riwayat ka eik maqta hai...
Ham to chahat mein bhi ghalib ke muqallid hain Faraz Jispe martey hain usey maar ke rakh detey hain
buhut daad!! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 8, 2008 8:18:07 GMT 5
Qamar sb, achi ghazal hai....
guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey
dad hazir hai. Seeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 6, 2008 13:52:24 GMT 5
Buhut Shukriya Khalid, Rafi aur Razi saheban apka! saeed
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 13:19:52 GMT 5
Post by saeed on Mar 5, 2008 13:19:52 GMT 5
Malik Saab,
mein pehlay ishq say bahir abhi nahi nikla zara theher mujhy apna agar banana hay
wah....ji khush ho gaya...aisey sher sirf hotey hain likhey nahen jaatey....aur 'agar' ka istemal bhi buhut lajawab hai.
Dheron daad! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 4, 2008 2:54:18 GMT 5
Saeed Sahab pehli bar ap ki ghazal ka matalia kia aur phir sharmsari say kuch ban nahi paya siwa is ke mein kahon ke mein ap ko pehlay kiun nahi parh paaya bahut kam aisa hoa hay ke yahan koe fresh aur maujoda zuban o ahang ko leay hoey saleeqay ki ghazal parhnay ko mili ho ap ka han masrooN ki rawani aur chusti qabl e dad hay aur ye sher bahut acha laga Nabz chalti he nahen zarb-e-mohabbat ke seva Ishq! Mojhko terey aazaar ne zinda rakha this is what we call freshness and poetification. mayray samait versifire bahut hein koe hota hay jisay sher kehnay ka saleeqa ata hay dhairon dad aqeel Malak saab, aapki muhabbat bhari daad aur hosla-afzai se mujhey tavanai mili hai.....lekin nacheez abhi tifl-e-maktab hai aur safar buhut lamba..... buhut nawazish! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 4, 2008 2:46:29 GMT 5
Adaaab saeed sahab Pehli bar apka kalam nazar sey guzra tabiyaat khush ho giyi bohat umda likha apnay daad qabool kijyee. Buhut shukriya Sumanshah jee. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 4, 2008 2:45:36 GMT 5
Saeed Sahib! Bohat khoobsurat janab, bohat he omdah. Daad k phool hazir-e-khidam hain. TanweerBhuhut nawazish Tanveer sahab. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 3:21:19 GMT 5
Dear Freinds, I have finally managed to upload some clips from my PTV Raatgaye program that I would like to share with you all. The interview was first recorded and played on 15 Jan 2007 from Lahore studios. here is the link for my Yu Tube site: youtube.com/SaeedsPoetry regards, saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 3:12:07 GMT 5
Rafi bhai, BEST OF LUCK!
mujhey poori umeed hai ke aap ba-khariyat wapas aayenge. duago.
saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 3:04:16 GMT 5
bohot umda!! saeed sb daad haazir hai!!! nawazish Khalid saab! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 3:02:56 GMT 5
Saeed jee achi ghazal hai. daad qubool kijiye! Naheed Thanks Naheed for your kind words! saeed
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