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Post by kanwal on Feb 13, 2008 4:05:02 GMT 5
Aik ghazl aapki bisaartoN nazR ,....Tire waaste hi sitam gar rahi hooN Humesha se main tere dar par rahi hooN
Samajhta hai kyuN mujh ko pather sanam tu Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN
Jo rehta hai saaya mira ban ke wo to Main be dard dunya se kyuN dar rahi hooN
Mujhe tu samajhne ki koshish na karna Ke wusat meiN apni samandar rahi hooN
Mire mehrbaaN ab to nazr e karam kar Ke apni qazayaeiN adaa kar rahi hooN
Hai shohrat muqadam na dunya ki hasrat Main ban ke humesha Qalandar rahi hooN
kaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 13, 2008 11:09:38 GMT 5
wahhh
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Post by Atif Mirza on Feb 17, 2008 9:23:27 GMT 5
Kia umda ghazal hai!
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Post by kanwal on Feb 18, 2008 0:42:24 GMT 5
thank you ,....
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Post by kanwal on Feb 26, 2008 3:57:20 GMT 5
Tire waaste hi sitam gar rahi hooN Humesha se main tere dar par rahi hooN waah bahut khoobSamajhta hai kyuN mujh ko pather sanam tu Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN bahut achha khayaal hai lekin yeh kaun hai jo patthar samajh raha hai Jo rehta hai saaya mira ban ke wo to Main be dard dunya se kyuN dar rahi hooN waah waah kya kamaal ka khayaal hai daadMujhe tu samajhne ki koshish na karna Ke wusat meiN apni samandar rahi hooN ek aur achha sher daadMire mehrbaaN ab to nazr e karam kar Ke apni qazayaeiN adaa kar rahi hooN kanwal jo na maane usse rehne do, aise kahan koii sunta hai ;DHai shohrat muqadam na dunya ki hasrat Main ban ke humesha Qalandar rahi hooN ho haaye yeh haal ho gaya hai sher achha haikaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN bahut khoob kanwalsaari ghazal bahut hi achhi kahi hai tumne aur hai bhi behr mein, to isse andaaz-e-bayaan mein lagaana tha na.khair mujhe to bahut pasand aayii, dheron daad qubuul hoN.bas aise hi likhti raha karo.khush raho. Waah didi ,... jee khush kar deti ho yuN tafseel se reply kar ke ,... aur kuch loG haiN jineiN humare liye fursat hi nahiN ,... koi bat nahiN hota hai bade bade shehroN meiN aisi choti choti bateiN ,.... Aapki daad ke liye dheroN pyar ,....
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 26, 2008 13:42:14 GMT 5
AOA hmmmmmmmm kanwal jee ap ki aik our achi ghazal nihao ke samne hain ...................................................
Tire waaste hi sitam gar rahi hooN Humesha se main tere dar par rahi hooN
pehle misre se bharpor itfaaq karta hon ke bohat sacha misra he (lol) umda sher kanwal jee
Samajhta hai kyuN mujh ko pather sanam tu Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN
ap ko ghalt fehmi he wo esa nahi smajhta .................... kawnal jee hasbe mamol dard ki mahak liye howe khobsorat sher ap ka
Mujhe tu samajhne ki koshish na karna Ke wusat meiN apni samandar rahi hooN
bohat Aala sher bohat sari dad ap ki nazr
Hai shohrat muqadam na dunya ki hasrat Main ban ke humesha Qalandar rahi hooN
wahhhh keya bat he jee ap ki ........ wese mera program bhi qalandri ikhteyar karne ka koi mashwara dena chahe ap is silsle me to mehrbani ho gi
kaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN
bohat umda bohat shandar sher he kanwal jee.........................
bohat sari dad ke sath sath duaa go hon ke ap ki tumam ibadate manzor ho our Ap jo qalam ke sath adab ki khidmat kar rahi he use mazeed asmaar lage kanwal jee is khobsorat ghazal ke liye bohat maubarik bad qabol ki jyie waslam ap ka mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by zaamin on Feb 27, 2008 2:09:33 GMT 5
khoobsoorat kalaam,kamnwal saahiba daad qabool farmaayen
zaamin
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Post by khalid on Mar 4, 2008 6:32:43 GMT 5
kaNval aapki ghazloN per meirey tabsera na kerne ki wajah hai k aap fikr e nau per post kerti haiN. aapki ye ghazal bohot umada hai aur bila shubah andaaz e bayaan ke liye qualify kerti hai. meirey khayaal maiN to aapko wahaN hona chaahiye!
khoob saari daad haazir hai!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 7, 2008 9:17:40 GMT 5
kanwal main tumhari is ghazal takbohat takheer say pohancha hoon laykin pohanch to gia hoon aik achi ghazal hay yeh mujhy is ka maqta boht acha laga
kaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN
khoobsoorat baat kahi tum nay aur haan main tumhari ghazal andaz e bayan main shift kar raha hoon aainda tum ghazal wahin post kia karo yeh aik khushi ki baat hay aur naay likhnay walon k liay ail misaal hay k fikr e nau say aghaaz karnay wali aik shaira ab andaze bayan main likhay gee boht see mubarak baad aur daad thanx razi
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 9, 2008 15:44:57 GMT 5
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Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 3:13:33 GMT 5
Thank You Aatif jee ,...
Khush naseebi humari ghazl ki jo aapko pasand aa gayee ,...
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Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 3:17:47 GMT 5
AOA hmmmmmmmm kanwal jee ap ki aik our achi ghazal nihao ke samne hain ...................................................
Tire waaste hi sitam gar rahi hooN Humesha se main tere dar par rahi hooN pehle misre se bharpor itfaaq karta hon ke bohat sacha misra he (lol) umda sher kanwal jee Samajhta hai kyuN mujh ko pather sanam tu Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN ap ko ghalt fehmi he wo esa nahi smajhta .................... kawnal jee hasbe mamol dard ki mahak liye howe khobsorat sher ap ka Mujhe tu samajhne ki koshish na karna Ke wusat meiN apni samandar rahi hooN bohat Aala sher bohat sari dad ap ki nazrHai shohrat muqadam na dunya ki hasrat Main ban ke humesha Qalandar rahi hooN wahhhh keya bat he jee ap ki ........ wese mera program bhi qalandri ikhteyar karne ka koi mashwara dena chahe ap is silsle me to mehrbani ho gi
kaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN bohat umda bohat shandar sher he kanwal jee.........................
bohat sari dad ke sath sath duaa go hon ke ap ki tumam ibadate manzor ho our Ap jo qalam ke sath adab ki khidmat kar rahi he use mazeed asmaar lage kanwal jee is khobsorat ghazal ke liye bohat maubarik bad qabol ki jyie waslam ap ka mukhlis ramishjaan Qalanadri ikhtiyaar karni hai ramish jee to ,.... Mashwara mulaahiza farmaiye ,... To arz e khidmat hai ke ,... ke ,..... ke ,...... ke ,...... ke ,...... ,..... ,............. Samajh gaye naa? ,.....
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Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 3:18:42 GMT 5
khoobsoorat kalaam,kamnwal saahiba daad qabool farmaayen zaamin Bohat bohat shukriya Zaamin jee ,.... Aapke daad humne dil ke gulshan meiN mehfooz kar li hai ,....
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Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 3:21:47 GMT 5
kaNval aapki ghazloN per meirey tabsera na kerne ki wajah hai k aap fikr e nau per post kerti haiN. aapki ye ghazal bohot umada hai aur bila shubah andaaz e bayaan ke liye qualify kerti hai. meirey khayaal maiN to aapko wahaN hona chaahiye!
khoob saari daad haazir hai! Bohat bohat Shukriya Khalid jee ,...
Iss hausla afzaaaye aur pazeraayee ka ,....
Aapki pur khaloos daad o mohabbat dil ke gulsitaaN meiN mehfoooz rahe gi humesha ,....
Par aik baat kahoongi ke ,.....
Fikr e nau meiN bhi jhaank lena chahiye kiyoNke fikr e nau
se hi insaan guzar kar aage barhta hai ,....
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Post by saeed on Mar 14, 2008 6:05:18 GMT 5
Kanwal saheba, achhi kavish hai.....
"Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN"
wah
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