zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 15, 2008 11:52:04 GMT 5
Kanwal
Bohat murassa ghazal kahi aap ney. Khub nibhaya hey ardeef aur qaafiye ko. MashaAllah. Ael sher per nazr-e sani kerney ki zaroorat hey meri adna raaey mein.
Jo rehta hai saaya mira ban ke wo to Main be dard dunya se kyuN dar rahi hooN
is ke pehley misra nazr-e sani chahta hey. merey khayal mein kuch yun ho tow: wo saaya mira ban ke rehta hey her dam
ye sirf meri raaye hey aap ki is sey ittefaq zaroori naheen.
aek bar phir bher poor daad.
Kher andesh
Qamar
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Post by HASIB RANA on Mar 17, 2008 22:29:09 GMT 5
Aik ghazl aapki bisaartoN nazR ,....Tire waaste hi sitam gar rahi hooN Humesha se main tere dar par rahi hooN
Samajhta hai kyuN mujh ko pather sanam tu Idhar dekh main din ba din mar rahi hooN
Jo rehta hai saaya mira ban ke wo to Main be dard dunya se kyuN dar rahi hooN
Mujhe tu samajhne ki koshish na karna Ke wusat meiN apni samandar rahi hooN
Hai shohrat muqadam na dunya ki hasrat Main ban ke humesha Qalandar rahi hooN
kaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN
Mire mehrbaaN ab to nazr e karam kar Ke apni qazayaeiN adaa kar rahi hooN
NICE 1 ............. KAFI MUD'DAT BAD AIK UMDAH GHAZAL PERNY KO DE HAY KANWAL .................. BOHAT UMDAH GHAZAL ............ KEEP POSTING ...... TUMHARY NAAM AIK SH'ER
TREE RAH KO ROSHAN JO RAKHNA THA SAHEL MAIN HER PAL HE TOFAN SAY LAR MAR RAHA HON
ALL THE BEST
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anmol
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by anmol on Mar 22, 2008 0:20:16 GMT 5
Dear Kanwal,aap ki ghazal mujhe bhi bahut achchhi lagi. DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye. Anmol
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 8, 2008 1:05:35 GMT 5
Thank You Aatif jee ,...
Khush naseebi humari ghazl ki jo aapko pasand aa gayee ,... KiyooN na pasand aati mohtarma, ghazal hai hi achchi.
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:30:32 GMT 5
kanwal main tumhari is ghazal takbohat takheer say pohancha hoon laykin pohanch to gia hoon aik achi ghazal hay yeh mujhy is ka maqta boht acha laga kaNwal ishQ ko jo khuda hai banaaya to uss ki ibaadat se dil bhar rahi hooN khoobsoorat baat kahi tum nay aur haan main tumhari ghazal andaz e bayan main shift kar raha hoon aainda tum ghazal wahin post kia karo yeh aik khushi ki baat hay aur naay likhnay walon k liay ail misaal hay k fikr e nau say aghaaz karnay wali aik shaira ab andaze bayan main likhay gee boht see mubarak baad aur daad thanx razi Thank you Razi jee,... Yeh sirf aap ki badaulat hi hai, jab aayee thi kaNwal yahaN to pather thi, uss meiN chamak aapke Sukhanwar ki roshni ki ataa ki hui hai ,.... Main tah e dil se Sukhanwar ke tamaam saathiyoN ki shukr guzaar hooN .
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:32:09 GMT 5
Thank You Ramish jee ,... Yeh sab aap jaise dostoN ki duaoN ka hi nateeja hai ,...
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