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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 15:08:39 GMT 5
zindagii yuu.N bhii guzar hii jaatii kyo.n teraa raahaguzar yaad aayaa [Mirza Galib]
vo aaye hai.n pashemaa.N laash par ab tujhe ai zindagii laa_uu.N kahaa.N se [Momin Khan Momin]
rahegaa saath teraa pyaar zindagii ban kar ye aur baat merii zindagii vafaa na kare [Qateel Shifai]
zindagii mai.n bhii chaluu.Ngaa tere piichhe piichhe tuu mere dost kaa naqsh-e-kaf-e-paa ho jaanaa [Qateel Shifai]
lamhaat-e-yaad-e-yaar ko sarf-e-duaa na kar aate hai.n zindagii me.n ye aalam kabhii kabhii [Shakeel Badayuni]
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:32:04 GMT 5
wah.. buhat khoob.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:30:17 GMT 5
Raat need men meri baith kar Sapna ek bunti rahii Chaandani ke dhaagon par Khushboo ke phool Taank Hawaaon ki raagini ke sur Gungunati dhaariyon men baandhti; Aur phir yeh rangiiN chaadar Ujle khwaab ki Sabz waadiyon men phahraati Roshnii ke raahon men phail gayii- Koii to chalega is par bhii Ta’abiir ka diya lekar zaamin waah ! buhat khoob.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:25:47 GMT 5
good! achhi koshish hai ..
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:19:11 GMT 5
waah... aapki nazm buhat pasand aayi.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:16:17 GMT 5
khoobsurat khayaal se bharpoor, aapki nazm buhat achhi lagi.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:13:14 GMT 5
"Sou jaa keh tairay sou jaanay main . Kitni wahshatt souay gi. Ek tairay sou jaanay main .
Aziatt ubb naa rouay gi ."
buhat khoob.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:08:54 GMT 5
buhat khoob..aapki ghazal ka har shair dhairon daad ka mustahiq hai...behtreen!
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 12:27:59 GMT 5
waah waah..beikhtiyaar dilse waah nikalti hai har shair par.. buhat hi aala kalaam padhne ko diya aapne razi bhai..buhat khoob.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 12:13:15 GMT 5
WAAH .. buhat hi khoob..
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 12:11:00 GMT 5
buhat khoob mashAllah.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 5, 2009 15:01:10 GMT 5
aap ki sabhi ghazlain mujhe munfarid aur behtreen lagti hain..khususan ye shair buhat pasand aaya.. "hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi"
buhat khoob !
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 5, 2009 14:39:09 GMT 5
Allah ta'ala aapki waalida ko kulli shifa ataa karay ..aameen summa aameen.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 5, 2009 14:36:03 GMT 5
is ghazal ko padhkar dilse waah nikli hai..buhat khoob.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 5, 2009 10:23:03 GMT 5
"Khon de kar diye jalane he Ye amal gah gah karna he"
agar qayadat behisi ki lapait me aajaye aur sirf zabaani waday aur be-amali ka raaj ho to phir is shair k mutabiq hi halaat hojainge..
aapke is shair se soch k kayi dar khulay hain , buhat khoob.
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