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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 8, 2008 21:42:30 GMT 5
Dil baidaar so jaa Haan So jaa ,.,., Khou gaiy rastay Sou jaa Door hoay appnay Sou jaa ‘’; Sou jaa keh tairay sou jaanay main . Kitni wahshatt souay gi. Ek tairay sou jaanay main .
Aziatt ubb naa rouay gi /. Inn numm pulkoon ko daiy raahatt Sou jaa /, Sou jaa keh Ek tere baidaari main Kitnay khawab khou jaingay Tairay sou jaanay main Shubb bhar kay jaagay taaray Sou jaingay ., Sou jaa Haan sou jaa
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 8, 2008 23:19:50 GMT 5
Sou jaa keh tairay sou jaanay main . Kitni wahshatt souay gi. Ek tairay sou jaanay main .
Aziatt ubb naa rouay gi /.
khoobsoorat lines hain aap ki nazm ki acha khyaal hy shairana husn mojood hy is nasri nazm main thanx razi
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Post by maya on Oct 10, 2008 11:43:29 GMT 5
Najma Sahiba
bohat acha likha aap nay.khas toor per yea lines jinka tazkira Razi Sahab nay be kea.yea dard ka shadeed ezhar hain.
Fatimah
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 16, 2008 21:04:02 GMT 5
maya gee dua karin iss afra tafree key daor main baichary dill ko sakun melay
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maya
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Post by maya on Oct 19, 2008 13:49:09 GMT 5
maya gee dua karin iss afra tafree key daor main baichary dill ko sakun melay Jee Najma Sahaba durust kaha aap nay.es waqt kea hamesha hm dua kay muhtaaj hain.insan jo hain.........insan tu hay hay maalik kay karam ka muhtaaj.khas tour per dil ka sakoon.main nay kaihn prha tha kay ham sakoon ki talash main bohat door tak jaatay hain.eski talash main kahin nai jana chahayea kiun k akir main a kar melta wahan sy hay jahan sy hm door nekaltay hain... dua main yad rakheay waslam fatimah
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Post by zaki on Oct 31, 2008 10:43:01 GMT 5
Sou jaa keh tairay sou jaanay main . Kitni wahshatt souay gi.
Bahut Khoob ...........Sada Khush raheay........
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 5, 2008 16:17:17 GMT 5
ZAKI SAHIB AP KA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIA
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:13:14 GMT 5
"Sou jaa keh tairay sou jaanay main . Kitni wahshatt souay gi. Ek tairay sou jaanay main .
Aziatt ubb naa rouay gi ."
buhat khoob.
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 7, 2009 14:25:30 GMT 5
bout khoobsurat or bout acha likha app ne Uzair Saleem
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jan 11, 2009 1:47:43 GMT 5
THANKS UZAIR SAHIB AND METICOLOUS JI
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 31, 2009 15:06:03 GMT 5
thanks for appreciation
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