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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 16:04:44 GMT 5
isi leay tu falak say pukaar di gae thi rida-e-waqt saroN say utaar di gae thi
abhi wujood meiN uski nishaniaN nahi thiN so umr bay khabari mein guzaar di gae thi
hamary hath meiN thiN kainaat ki nabzeiN hamary dam say khudaee shumaar di gae thi
jab us nay hijr kay sary usool tay keay thay tu ham pe ishq ki aayat utaar di gae thi
hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi
hamari soch ko qaidi bana lia gia tha hameiN ye roshni jab musta'ar di gae thi
ham us zamany say guzray heiN jis zamany meiN hamray naam pe dunya sanwaar di gae tih
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Post by naheedv on Dec 12, 2008 20:38:21 GMT 5
Aqeel jee, aap kee ghazal buhat umdah hai aur matla'a aur pehlaa she'r laa jawaab! daad qubool kijiye!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 12, 2008 22:54:40 GMT 5
aqeel boht munfarid andaz aur khobsoorat lehja hy aap ka yoon to tamaam ashaar khoob hain magar mujhy yeh do shair to boht pasand aay jab us nay hijr kay sary usool tay keay thay tu ham pe ishq ki aayat utaar di gae thi
hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi
thanx razi
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Post by jooni on Dec 13, 2008 0:13:53 GMT 5
Aqeel Sahib, Khoobsoorat Ghazal per Boht si DaaD qubool kijiye.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:55:40 GMT 5
Aqeel jee, aap kee ghazal buhat umdah hai aur matla'a aur pehlaa she'r laa jawaab! daad qubool kijiye! Naheed g ap ki ala zarfi hay ke ap ko ghazal ka majmoee mizaj acha lga warna ham aisy log tu lohaaroN wala kam kar rahay heiN aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:58:06 GMT 5
aqeel boht munfarid andaz aur khobsoorat lehja hy aap ka yoon to tamaam ashaar khoob hain magar mujhy yeh do shair to boht pasand aay jab us nay hijr kay sary usool tay keay thay tu ham pe ishq ki aayat utaar di gae thi hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi thanx razi Razi sahab mayray leay is say barh kar aur kia compliment hosakta hay ka lehja munfarid hay ap ki zarra nawazi hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:59:22 GMT 5
Aqeel Sahib, Khoobsoorat Ghazal per Boht si DaaD qubool kijiye. ap ki dhairoN dad par hamry dhairoN adab ap ki mahabat hay
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Post by ziabaloch on Dec 14, 2008 15:26:51 GMT 5
Aqeel Bhaa'ii, aadaab !
aaj aek muddat ke baa'd aap se ham-kalaam hone ka sharaf HaaSil kar k bahut Khushii HaaSil ho rahii hai ! aap kii Ghazal ka to maiN ibtedaa hii se deevanaa hooN ! so yeh Ghazal bhii mere shu'la-e-junooN ko musalsal havaa de rahii hai ! daad qabool kejiye ! mujhe KhaaS taur par vuhii she'r pasand aayaa hai jo razi bhaa'ii ko pasand hai ! daad !!
Zia Baloch
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 1, 2009 20:26:16 GMT 5
Aqeel Bhaa'ii, aadaab ! aaj aek muddat ke baa'd aap se ham-kalaam hone ka sharaf HaaSil kar k bahut Khushii HaaSil ho rahii hai ! aap kii Ghazal ka to maiN ibtedaa hii se deevanaa hooN ! so yeh Ghazal bhii mere shu'la-e-junooN ko musalsal havaa de rahii hai ! daad qabool kejiye ! mujhe KhaaS taur par vuhii she'r pasand aayaa hai jo razi bhaa'ii ko pasand hai ! daad !! Zia Baloch Baloch sahab ye tu ap ki mahabta hay ke ap ko mayri shairi pasand hay warna mujh mien asi koe khas baat nahi hay ap kay iltifaat ka shukria dua go aqeel malik
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 5, 2009 15:01:10 GMT 5
aap ki sabhi ghazlain mujhe munfarid aur behtreen lagti hain..khususan ye shair buhat pasand aaya.. "hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi"
buhat khoob !
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 22, 2009 19:48:56 GMT 5
aap ki sabhi ghazlain mujhe munfarid aur behtreen lagti hain..khususan ye shair buhat pasand aaya.. "hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi" buhat khoob ! ap ki mahabat hay warna ham mein tu koe baat nahi hay khiar andesh
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Post by Tanweer on Jan 22, 2009 22:41:38 GMT 5
Aqeel saheb,
Bohat khoob aur omdaah, waaqi haqeeqat mein ye aik munfarid zameen mein kahi gaee ghazal hay aapki, aur es ka achoohta pan acha laga.
go k sari ghazal apnay har shair mein aik alag alag mani^viyat rakhay hovay hay aur qabil sataa^ish hay,
lekin es shair k baray aap kiya kahien gay:
ham us zamany say guzray heiN jis zamany meiN hamray naam pe dunya sanwaar di gae tih
ham tu es k asrar-o-ramooz mein kohey hovay hain, bohat khoob.
Khair Andesh Tanweer
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Post by tmasood on Jan 26, 2009 19:40:23 GMT 5
hamari soch ko qaidi bana lia gia tha hameiN ye roshni jab musta'ar di gae thi
bohat khoob
Aqeel Saheb
her saher aur shaair kaa iak matmaHa-e-nazar hotaa hia jis ke tehat woh shaer kehtaa hai
aap ka anziru=iah naa jen kayaa ho
magar maiN ise magharbi aqwaami ki naam nehaad imdaad k iwaz hamaare her kaam maiN dakahl andaazi kaa laitee hoN
sach tau yeh hai keh yeh maazi maiN hi nahiN Haal maiN bhi ho rehaa hai
aur pehle se baRh ker ho rehaa hai
yeh shaer is zaawiye se bohat talkh Haqeeqt pesh kertaa hai
daad haazir hai
i
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2009 21:30:15 GMT 5
Tamaam Ashaar khoob haiN Malik ji! Daad qabool kijiay. Aik munfarid andaz ki ghazal hai.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 27, 2009 19:29:35 GMT 5
Tanveer sahab
ap ki mahabat aur shafqat ka hamesha muntazir rehta hooN bahut shukria pazeerae ka
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