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Post by Raheel on Dec 16, 2008 17:58:14 GMT 5
Wah ! Bahut Umda.
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Post by Raheel on Dec 11, 2008 13:14:03 GMT 5
Thank you for the information, Razi Bhai.
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Post by Raheel on Dec 3, 2008 20:07:57 GMT 5
<b>Bahut khoob! Nice!</b>
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Post by Raheel on Dec 3, 2008 20:05:35 GMT 5
Shukriya!
Mujhey yeh maosool hue yeh ghazal, inhi alfaaz aur ashaar key saath ... Shair ka ilm nahen, werna mazeed tahqeeq ker key darust kerta.
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Post by Raheel on Dec 3, 2008 20:02:17 GMT 5
Hosa-afzai key liye, Aap sab ka mashkoor hon. Razi Bhai, takheer sey reply kerney key liye muazarat.
Muazrat chahta hon, shair ka naam mujhey khud maloom nahen. Pasand aya tou socha aap sab key saath bhi share ker lon.
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Post by Raheel on Dec 2, 2008 20:34:05 GMT 5
Very Nice! touching.
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Post by Raheel on Dec 2, 2008 20:30:51 GMT 5
Saheh kehti hain ... Bahut umda!
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Post by Raheel on Nov 21, 2008 14:38:34 GMT 5
Bahut Umda intekhab hai!
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Post by Raheel on Nov 13, 2008 15:07:13 GMT 5
Gham-e-Hayat ka Jhagra Mita raha hay koi Chaly aao keh dunya say jaa raha hay koi
Azzal say keh do keh ruk jaao do Ghari Suna hay aanay ka waada nibha raha hay koi
Wo is naaz say baitay hain Lash kay paas Jaisy rootay howay ko manaa raha hay koi
Palat kar na aajay pher saans nabzo'n main Itnay haseen haaton say mayyat sajaa raha hay koi
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 12:31:51 GMT 5
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 12:16:50 GMT 5
Beautiful !!
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 12:14:44 GMT 5
Aik Khuwab-e-Zindagi Ka ___________________
Aik Waham Tha Dil Main Shayad Kabhi Milo Tum Kuch Dair Ruk Ker Poocho Beetay Dinoon Ka Mosam Aawaz Main Ho Larzish Aankhoon Main Ho Tajassus Mazii Ka Koi Lamha Shayad Atak Gaya Ho Sab Bhool Ker Bhi Shayad Kuch Yaad Aa Gaya Ho Phir Main Tumhain Bataoon Apni Khushi Ki Baatain Har Dukh Ko Chupa Ker Dil Main Aasoodgi Ki Baatain Wo Chand Chudhween Ka Taroon Bhari Wo Aankhain Dilkash Haseen Shamain Maasoom Wardatain Wo Pyar Ka Tasawwor Wo Bandagi Ki Batain Wo Rooz Rooz Marna Aur Zindagi Ki Baatain Tum Dukh Say Muskurao Dheeray Say Muskurao Dheeray Say Paas Aao Sar Ko Jhuka Kay Apnay Chup Chaap Lout Jao Phir Main Bhi Muskuraon Maan Kay Diyay Jalaon Duhraon Apnay Dil Main Taa'luq Say Haqeeqat Aik Khuwab Zindagi Ka Haan Umer Bhar Jo Daikha Kabhi Ho Saka Na Poora Younhi Reh Gaya Adhoora Aik Khuwab-e-Zindagi Ka
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 12:09:27 GMT 5
Khoob! bahut khoob.
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 11:54:49 GMT 5
Thank You Tarana, Jooni and Kanwal. Ameen aur kanwal, aap ney wish kiya, bahut acha laga. bar-waqt ya late honey ki baat nahen
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 11:49:49 GMT 5
Happy Birthday Faheem-ud-Din, May Allah's blessing be with you. Ameen
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