Raheel
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by Raheel on Nov 13, 2008 15:07:13 GMT 5
Gham-e-Hayat ka Jhagra Mita raha hay koi Chaly aao keh dunya say jaa raha hay koi
Azzal say keh do keh ruk jaao do Ghari Suna hay aanay ka waada nibha raha hay koi
Wo is naaz say baitay hain Lash kay paas Jaisy rootay howay ko manaa raha hay koi
Palat kar na aajay pher saans nabzo'n main Itnay haseen haaton say mayyat sajaa raha hay koi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 13, 2008 21:25:55 GMT 5
wahhhhhhh Khoobsoorat ashaar bohat khoob Raheel
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 14, 2008 1:07:06 GMT 5
raheel bhai aap zara check kijiay type k doran in ashaar main kuch ghalatian reh gain jin sy yeh behr sy kharij ho gaay hain thanx razi
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Nov 14, 2008 16:03:59 GMT 5
Achha andaz aur khayal hai sahib.
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Nov 21, 2008 15:20:15 GMT 5
Bahut khoob Raheel, Razi ji ne jo kaha hai iss per ghaur farmaeay...... Sada khush raheay..
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Raheel
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by Raheel on Dec 3, 2008 20:05:35 GMT 5
Shukriya!
Mujhey yeh maosool hue yeh ghazal, inhi alfaaz aur ashaar key saath ... Shair ka ilm nahen, werna mazeed tahqeeq ker key darust kerta.
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