maya
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Post by maya on Oct 14, 2008 13:02:19 GMT 5
main waqt ki hathayli pay hun.... meray bachpan ki baykhabar aankh main hay gahri neand,bikhray howay chand khilonay kitaaboun ka basta aur wo ghar tak ka rasta
larakpun kuch jaagta sochta herat sy chaharoun ko khojta dupatta orahta
Javani aik kahani main be kirdar hun matti ki morat kay jaisa mgr zinda aur jaagti ankh main khaboun ka la matnahi silsila mai waqt ki hathayli pay hun...!
fatimah
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 14, 2008 22:04:54 GMT 5
Wahhhh Bohat khoob Fatima g bachapan say jwani tak kay ahsasaat ki bhar poor tarjumani ki aap nay is nazm maiN
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 14, 2008 23:07:35 GMT 5
boht umda fatima ji khoobsoorat lines hain soch ka naya rukh
larakpun kuch jaagta sochta herat sy chaharoun ko khojta dupatta orahta
yeh lines mujhy boht achi lageen aap nazm main kahin kahin qaafia paymaai kar k isy khoobsoorat bana dayti hain thanx razi
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 15, 2008 23:11:05 GMT 5
Boht khoobsoorat lines hain Neha Sahiba. Daad qubool kijiye.
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 15, 2008 23:13:11 GMT 5
Fatima Sahiba, ma'azrat chahta hun, aap ka naam theek nhi likhha.
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maya
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Post by maya on Oct 19, 2008 13:34:41 GMT 5
Wahhhh Bohat khoob Fatima g bachapan say jwani tak kay ahsasaat ki bhar poor tarjumani ki aap nay is nazm maiN Rafi Tabasum Sahab hosla afzai ka bay had shukria waslam Fatimah
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maya
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Post by maya on Oct 19, 2008 13:38:17 GMT 5
boht umda fatima ji khoobsoorat lines hain soch ka naya rukh larakpun kuch jaagta sochta herat sy chaharoun ko khojta dupatta orahta yeh lines mujhy boht achi lageen aap nazm main kahin kahin qaafia paymaai kar k isy khoobsoorat bana dayti hain thanx razi Razi Sahab apki hosla afzai hamesha hemat dati hay. bohat shukria waslam fatimah
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maya
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Post by maya on Oct 19, 2008 13:41:02 GMT 5
Boht khoobsoorat lines hain Neha Sahiba. Daad qubool kijiye. apnay prha aur pasand kea. bohat shukria waslam fatimah
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 27, 2008 23:18:30 GMT 5
maya ge bahut piayari bahut khoobsurat nazm hay
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Oct 31, 2008 10:25:46 GMT 5
Bahut Khoobsorat Nazam Fatimah Ji..... Daad qabool farmaeay..... Sada khush raheay.....
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maya
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Post by maya on Nov 7, 2008 12:01:25 GMT 5
zaki sahab aur Najma sahaba pasandedgy kay ezhar per apki mashkoor hun
waslam fatimah
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Raheel
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by Raheel on Nov 7, 2008 12:09:27 GMT 5
Khoob! bahut khoob.
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