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Post by neha on Jul 4, 2009 22:15:35 GMT 5
Neha G, Achhi nazm hai, Daad qubool kijiye. Daad k liye bohut shukriya Jooni sahab.
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Post by neha on Jul 1, 2009 13:58:13 GMT 5
Qamar Sahab aur Waqas Sahab...Sukhanwar ki is khubsurat bazm main aap ko
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Post by neha on Jul 1, 2009 13:54:21 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba, Adaab. Boht hi khoobsoorat aur piyari ghazal hai. Boht si DaaD qubool kijiye. Daad k liye Bohut shukriya Jooni sahab.
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Post by neha on Jul 1, 2009 13:53:36 GMT 5
Neha Ji wah kya andaz hay...kya asloob hay khoobsoorat tarakeeb...nazuk nazuk khayalaat lutf aa gaya her sher apni jaga mukamil ghazal dil daad hazir hay Kher andesh Qamar Qamar sahab... aap ki purkhuloos daad k liye bohut mashkoor hoon ...bohut shukriya.
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Post by neha on Jul 1, 2009 13:52:00 GMT 5
achi ghazal hay lafziat aur asloob agarche jadeed nahin laikin iss kay bawajood khoob sorat ghazal hay. dosra sher agr dobara daikh lia jaaiy to behtar hay.ye aik dostana maswara hay keun k sukhanwar ka har rukan hamaray liay muhtarram hay.iss liay issay nukta cheeni na samjha jaiiy .achanak paunchnay kay baad khabbar milnay ka jawaaz nahin dia gia. Nawazish sahab aap ki daad k liye bohut mumnoon hoon..baqi jo bhi mashwaray aap nay diye mere liye qaabil-e-ehtraam hain..Musbat tanqeed nukta cheeni k zamray main nahin aty..bohut shukriya
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:30:41 GMT 5
Pooch laita woh haal-e-dil mera Besabab tou khada nahin tha mein
Paaniyon ka mizaaj nahin tha mein Warna kachha ghada nahin tha mein
Bohut khoob nasir sahab..bohut hi rawan dawan ghazal hai..aamad hai ..meri janib se dhairon daad is khubsurat kaavish k liye
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:24:34 GMT 5
Subha say Shaam hojaye, Bhalay hi Chaand dhal jaye, Kay ye Rutt hi badal jaye, Usay parwa nahin hoty, Kisi ki Yaad main roty, Wo do Namnaak si aankhain, Usay na Yaad aty hain, Na us ka mann jalaty hain, Gumaa'n bhi abb nahin bulkay, Yaqee'n ye ho chala mujh ko, Kay abb chaahat nahin baaqi, 'Muhabbat' abb nahin baaqi.
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:21:58 GMT 5
Aadaab QAMAR SAHAB,
kahaN hay shauq ki manzil koi bataao hameN ke justaju ka hi dam ghut ke reh na jaaey kaheeN utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN
Bohut khubsurat nazm hai ....meri janib se daad qubool kijye.
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:14:57 GMT 5
neha jee bade hi aasan alfaz se saji sanwri ghazal hai aapki sab se behter hai lehje ki yaksaniyat . poori ghazal ka asloob wahi pakeeza mahak liye hue zehn ko apne sehr me le leta hai jo ab rafta rafta shayri se bahoot door hota ja raha hai tere lehje ki mahak aur tere pakeeza khayaal ye dua hai ke sabhi ko ye hunar mil jaaye allah kare ke aapka lehja barqarar rahe aameen aadil rasheed F-53/1, Abul Fazal enclave -2 shaheen baagh jamia nagar new delhi-110025(india) aadilrasheed67@gmail.com, mustanad@gmail.com tere lehje ki mahak aur tere pakeeza khayaal ye dua hai ke sabhi ko ye hunar mil jaaye
Aadil sahab bohut nawazish k aap ko meri yeh adna si kaavish itny Pasand aai ..khaas kar aap k shair aur dua k liye mumnoon hoon aap ki..bohut shukriya.
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:11:41 GMT 5
Neha! Bahut Lhoob soorat ghazal kahi hai aap nay! Daad qabool kijiay. Daad k liye bohut shukriya Atif sahab..
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Post by neha on Jun 19, 2009 1:01:41 GMT 5
Ittifaaqan hii sahi uss say nazar mil jaaye Chaahty mein bhi hoon izhaar ko dar mil jaaye
Koi paigham na bhejoon, mein achanak puhnchoon Phir bhi us ko meray aanay ki khabar mil jaaye
Dil-e-naadaa'n bhi behel jaaye ga rafta rafta Bhoolnay ka jo duaaao'n ko asar mil jaye
Meri bujhty hui aankho'n main ujaala kar day Shab -e- hijraa'n ko jo ik baar sahar mil jaye
Mein nay ik umr jo kaaty hai teri aaas liye Uss riyaazat ka mujhay kaash samar mil jaaye
Apnay iss khwaab ki tabeer mein paa loon Neha Raigzaaro'n main jo phoolo'n ka nagar mil jaaye
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Post by neha on Mar 27, 2009 22:04:34 GMT 5
Salam Neelofer ji, Meri jaanib say aap ko Nawasi bohut bohut Mubarak ho...Aur naam bhi bohut khubsrat rakha hai aap nay.. us k liye meri jaanib se dhairon "Duaain" qubool kijye.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 16:13:28 GMT 5
Tire dill k jharoke meiN mujhe khud ko sajaana hai Na hum ko bhool paao ge, yuN tujh ko yaad aana hai
Bohat hai huSn be shaQ iss safar k darmiyaaN laykin Jo guzre sang tere bas wohi ik pal suhaana hai
Mire daaman meiN gulshan bhar diye haiN too ne humraahi Tire ghar tere aangan ko gulistaaN ab banaana hai
Tiri muskaan k jugnoo, nigaahoN meiN samaite haiN Diyaa ummeed ka jeewan mein, main ne ab jalaana hai
Suno kehte haiN wo hum se, hai pal do pal ka saath apnaa Kabhi naa haath chhoote ga, yaqeeN dil ko dilaana hai
Haraa´o shauQ se hum ko magar yeh jaan lo tum bhi Humi se jeet kar phir tum ko, dil se haar jaana hai
Mohabbat ki zaroorat hai kabhi izhaar karna bhi Agar hai to kaho naa, phir sanam se kya chhupaana hai
Kabhi tark e wafaa karte nahiN hum, chaahe kuch bhi ho HumeiN tum aazmaa lo jitna chaahe aazmaana hai
Kabhi to murr k dekh E dushman e jaan tere jaane se kaNwal kaise bikharti hai, kabhi tu ne yeh jaana hai? Kabhi tark e wafaa karte nahiN hum, chaahe kuch bhi ho HumeiN tum aazmaa lo jitna chaahe aazmaana hai
Kabhi to murr k dekh E dushman e jaan tere jaane se kaNwal kaise bikharti hai, kabhi tu ne yeh jaana hai
Wah wah Kanwal ji...hamesha ki tarah khubsurat alfaz aur khayalat se muzayyan ghazal k liye dhairon dili daad haazir hai.. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziada ho.sada khush rahye.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 16:07:54 GMT 5
Boht hi khoobsoorat aur umdah. Daad qubool kijiye Neha Sahiba. Shukriya Jooni sahab.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 16:07:16 GMT 5
Bahut hi umda izhar lateef jazboN ka! Bohut shukriya Atif bhai..daad k liye bohut mumnoon hoon.
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