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Post by kanwal on Oct 2, 2008 3:59:49 GMT 5
Tire dill k jharoke meiN mujhe khud ko sajaana hai Na hum ko bhool paao ge, yuN tujh ko yaad aana hai
Bohat hai huSn be shaQ iss safar k darmiyaaN laykin Jo guzre sang tere bas wohi ik pal suhaana hai
Mire daaman meiN gulshan bhar diye haiN too ne humraahi Tire ghar tere aangan ko gulistaaN ab banaana hai
Tiri muskaan k jugnoo, nigaahoN meiN samaite haiN Diyaa ummeed ka jeewan mein, main ne ab jalaana hai
Suno kehte haiN wo hum se, hai pal do pal ka saath apnaa Kabhi naa haath chhoote ga, yaqeeN dil ko dilaana hai
Haraa´o shauQ se hum ko magar yeh jaan lo tum bhi Humi se jeet kar phir tum ko, dil se haar jaana hai
Mohabbat ki zaroorat hai kabhi izhaar karna bhi Agar hai to kaho naa, phir sanam se kya chhupaana hai
Kabhi tark e wafaa karte nahiN hum, chaahe kuch bhi ho HumeiN tum aazmaa lo jitna chaahe aazmaana hai
Kabhi to murr k dekh E dushman e jaan tere jaane se kaNwal kaise bikharti hai, kabhi tu ne yeh jaana hai?
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 2, 2008 7:10:16 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhh
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 10, 2008 16:52:23 GMT 5
Kanwal Sahiba, Nihayat hi khoobsoorat ghazal hai. Dhair sari daad qubool kijiye. Doosra she'r khaas tor per pasand aaya. "Bohat hai huSn be shaQ iss safar k darmiyaaN laykin Jo guzre sang tere bas wohi ik pal suhaana hai"
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Post by kanwal on Nov 7, 2008 3:50:39 GMT 5
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Post by kanwal on Nov 7, 2008 3:51:58 GMT 5
Kanwal Sahiba, Nihayat hi khoobsoorat ghazal hai. Dhair sari daad qubool kijiye. Doosra she'r khaas tor per pasand aaya. "Bohat hai huSn be shaQ iss safar k darmiyaaN laykin Jo guzre sang tere bas wohi ik pal suhaana hai" Bohat bohat Shukriya jooni jee ,...
pasandeedgi ke liye shukrguzaar hooN aur takheer ke liye Maazrat khaa ,...
Umeed hai Aap humari iss khataa ko nazar andaaz farmaayeiNge ,............
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2008 23:54:07 GMT 5
ghar ko sajanay uar aangan ko gulistan bananay ki baatain boht pasand aain shaadi k baad tumhari poetry main is taasar ka ubharna boht acha laga aur dil sy tumhari khushion k liay dua nikli aik achay qalamkaar ki khoobi yeh hy k us ki poetry main isi tara waqt k saath saath tabdeelian aati hain daad qabool karo thanx razi
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Post by HASIB RANA on Nov 26, 2008 21:58:50 GMT 5
OEY K K TON TEY WAQAE SHAERAH BAN GAI AIN ..... BOHAT KHOOB SORAT ............. KIA KEHNEY ........................ BE HAPPY KANWAL
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 16:13:28 GMT 5
Tire dill k jharoke meiN mujhe khud ko sajaana hai Na hum ko bhool paao ge, yuN tujh ko yaad aana hai
Bohat hai huSn be shaQ iss safar k darmiyaaN laykin Jo guzre sang tere bas wohi ik pal suhaana hai
Mire daaman meiN gulshan bhar diye haiN too ne humraahi Tire ghar tere aangan ko gulistaaN ab banaana hai
Tiri muskaan k jugnoo, nigaahoN meiN samaite haiN Diyaa ummeed ka jeewan mein, main ne ab jalaana hai
Suno kehte haiN wo hum se, hai pal do pal ka saath apnaa Kabhi naa haath chhoote ga, yaqeeN dil ko dilaana hai
Haraa´o shauQ se hum ko magar yeh jaan lo tum bhi Humi se jeet kar phir tum ko, dil se haar jaana hai
Mohabbat ki zaroorat hai kabhi izhaar karna bhi Agar hai to kaho naa, phir sanam se kya chhupaana hai
Kabhi tark e wafaa karte nahiN hum, chaahe kuch bhi ho HumeiN tum aazmaa lo jitna chaahe aazmaana hai
Kabhi to murr k dekh E dushman e jaan tere jaane se kaNwal kaise bikharti hai, kabhi tu ne yeh jaana hai? Kabhi tark e wafaa karte nahiN hum, chaahe kuch bhi ho HumeiN tum aazmaa lo jitna chaahe aazmaana hai
Kabhi to murr k dekh E dushman e jaan tere jaane se kaNwal kaise bikharti hai, kabhi tu ne yeh jaana hai
Wah wah Kanwal ji...hamesha ki tarah khubsurat alfaz aur khayalat se muzayyan ghazal k liye dhairon dili daad haazir hai.. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziada ho.sada khush rahye.
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