Shaheen
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 30, 2007 15:56:40 GMT 5
Thnx 4 lnk
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 24, 2007 19:51:50 GMT 5
Kal jo bachchi bus kay neechay aa kar chakna choor huwi Roti ka ik sookha tukra nikla us kay bastay say
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Shaheen
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 11, 2007 18:32:06 GMT 5
Wah Atif jee! Khoob! Jawaban arz hai keh:-
tum mil gaay tau kia huwa tum door thay tau kia huwa weeraniaN kam na humeN tanha tha maiN tanha raha
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 11, 2007 18:26:20 GMT 5
good poem> atif sahib keep it up.
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 31, 2007 8:53:20 GMT 5
Classic!
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Shaheen
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 17, 2007 15:40:01 GMT 5
Bhai Subhan Allah! Doosra sher khas tor per bohot acha hai.
Mujhay a'zaz hasil hai keh maiN bhi she'r kehta hooN Mujhay hai fakhr na'at-e-Mustafa kehnay kay qabil hooN
Sha'eri ka itna achcha jawaz! Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziyada.
Shaheen
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Shaheen
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 24, 2007 19:28:04 GMT 5
achha mazah hai jee!
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Post by Shaheen on Jan 21, 2008 21:21:41 GMT 5
Mirza Jee,- Poori dunia say total do chaar log is site per on line ho kar do chaar jawab likh martay haiN us ki fikr karaiN aap mulk ki adbi bay haali per pareshan hain. Dunia maiN yeh aalam hai adab ka to Pakistan ya India maiN kia ho ga aur specially aap kay Multan maiN kia haal ho ga. Adbi taur per manDa to aaj kal Sargodha maiN bhi hai.
- Abhi aap yeh daikh laiN keh 18 Jan ko yeh thread shuroo huwa aur aaj tak kisi nay iss bay haali ka notice nahiN liya. Abb dekhtay haiN keh aur koun log aa kar shamil hotay haiN.
- Rabb khair karay.
- Main to issay dunia maiN adbi bad-haali kahoon ga.
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 24, 2007 19:26:52 GMT 5
Janab Uzair Sahib! Youm-e-Paida'ish Mubarak! Kitnay baRay ho gaay haiN aap?
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 18, 2007 15:23:21 GMT 5
Classic! Thanx a lot for such a useful info!
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Post by Shaheen on Nov 3, 2007 9:38:40 GMT 5
Khurram jee Khush amded!
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 13, 2007 18:55:46 GMT 5
Achhay hain magar wohi Atif Sahib wali baat!
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 30, 2007 15:55:54 GMT 5
Alfaz maiN aisi koi salahiyat nahiN jo kissi kay gham maiN shareek honay kay tassuraat bayan karsakaiN. Merai tamam duaaeiN marhooma kay saath haiN. Shaheen
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Post by Shaheen on Jan 26, 2008 10:41:58 GMT 5
Ghazal Achhi hai magar aap jawab bhi diya karaiN na. Banda shukriya hi ada kar deta hai.
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Post by Shaheen on Jan 25, 2008 9:52:33 GMT 5
Wah Devi Jee Achch Ghazal hai! Daad hazir hai.
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