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Post by neelofar on Jan 26, 2008 8:29:15 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Gham ki tasweer ho gyii hai hyaat meri tash'heer ho gyii hai hyaat
mokhtasar si hai daastaaN apni thii jawaN peer ho gyii hai hyaat
khuub ehsaan uss ka haii shayed jiss ki jaageer ho gyii hai hyaat
khawab dekha thaa tum se milne ka aaor taabeer ho gyii hai hyaat
teri janib berhee qadam jab bhi touq o zanjeer ho gyii hai hyaat
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Post by Shaheen on Jan 26, 2008 10:41:58 GMT 5
Ghazal Achhi hai magar aap jawab bhi diya karaiN na. Banda shukriya hi ada kar deta hai.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2008 14:36:10 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Ghum ki tasweer ho gayee hai hyaat Mairi tash'heer ho gayee hai hyaat
Mukhtasar si hai daastaaN apni Thee jawaN, peer ho gayee hai hyaat
Khoob ehsaan uss ka hai shayed Jiss ki jaageer ho gayee hai hyaat
Khwaab daikha thaa tum say milnay ka Aur taabeer ho gayee hai hyaat
Tairi janib baRhay qadam jab bhi Touq-o-zanjeer ho gayee hai hyaat Neelo Ji! Daad qabool kijay! Aur haaN Shaheen sahib ki observation theek hai. Kai baar aisa mehsoos kia gaya hai keh aap reply nahiN daiteeN kisi post ka. Ba-Rai Meharbani iss taraf sanjeedgi say tawajja dijiay ga. Aur dostoN ko bhi issi qism ki shikayat hai aap say.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 17:51:14 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba aap ki ghazal pasand aai khas taur par yeh shair
khawab dekha thaa tum se milne ka aaor taabeer ho gyii hai hyaat
bohat khoob daad qabool kijiy thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 17:52:13 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Ghum ki tasweer ho gayee hai hyaat Mairi tash'heer ho gayee hai hyaat
Mukhtasar si hai daastaaN apni Thee jawaN, peer ho gayee hai hyaat
Khoob ehsaan uss ka hai shayed Jiss ki jaageer ho gayee hai hyaat
Khwaab daikha thaa tum say milnay ka Aur taabeer ho gayee hai hyaat
Tairi janib baRhay qadam jab bhi Touq-o-zanjeer ho gayee hai hyaat Neelo Ji! Daad qabool kijay! Aur haaN Shaheen sahib ki observation theek hai. Kai baar aisa mehsoos kia gaya hai keh aap reply nahiN daiteeN kisi post ka. Ba-Rai Meharbani iss taraf sanjeedgi say tawajja dijiay ga. Aur dostoN ko bhi issi qism ki shikayat hai aap say.aatif bhai shaeen sahib ki raay aap umooman mutafiq nazar aatay hain kia waja hay razi
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Post by neelofar on Jan 26, 2008 21:22:02 GMT 5
Adabi dunia k adab nwaz azizo!!
Mujhe afsoos hai meri na ahli ki wajjah se aap sab uljhan ka shikar hoye...lekin wazahat ker doon ke haliya chand hafton me main ne quick rpl ke zerye apne sabhi karam fermaon ka shukria adaa kia hai Allah kre aap ki nazron se guzra ho... wassalam talib e duaa Neelofar 26th january 2008
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 27, 2008 0:45:08 GMT 5
GHAZAL Gham ki tasweer ho gyii hai hyaat meri tash'heer ho gyii hai hyaat mokhtasar si hai daastaaN apni thii jawaN peer ho gyii hai hyaat khuub ehsaan uss ka haii shayed jiss ki jaageer ho gyii hai hyaat khawab dekha thaa tum se milne ka aaor taabeer ho gyii hai hyaat teri janib berhee qadam jab bhi touq o zanjeer ho gyii hai hyaat Khoobsoorat ghazal Neelofer sahiba bohat khoob
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Post by sunita on Jan 31, 2008 19:46:50 GMT 5
khoobsoorat gahzal Neelofer ji.daad qubuul ho.khush raheN.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 31, 2008 21:29:30 GMT 5
aatif bhai shaeen sahib ki raay aap umooman mutafiq nazar aatay hain kia waja hay razi Asl maiN hum donoN Sargodha say taalluq rakhtay haiN, tau maiN apnay GaraaieeN ki baat say muttafiq hota hooN. Waisay bhi ShaheeN sahiB baat kehtay sach haiN (Chahay woh Khuda Lagti hi kiyuN nah ho).
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Post by ziabaloch on Feb 2, 2008 1:04:08 GMT 5
Nelofar SaaHiba, aadaab !
aap se pehlii baar hamkalaam hone ka sharaf HaaSil kar rahaa hooN ! aap kii Ghazal bahut pasand aa'ii ! nehaayat Saaf andaaz-e-bayaaN hai aap kaa ! daad !!
shukriya
Zia Baloch
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Post by Tanweer on Feb 2, 2008 14:04:10 GMT 5
Neelofar Sahiba,
Ghazal pasand aaee, daad qabool kejiey.
Tanweer
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Post by kanwal on Feb 12, 2008 3:21:17 GMT 5
khawab dekha thaa tum se milne ka aaor taabeer ho gyii hai hyaat teri janib berhee qadam jab bhi touq o zanjeer ho gyii hai hyaat Bohat khooB neelofar jee ,... daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by neelofar on Jun 29, 2008 17:10:47 GMT 5
Aap tmam DOSTON ?QALAMKAR SATHION , ka behad shukria..... Aap sab ne meri tahreer ko iss qabil samjha ke perhi jaaye aaor phir uss pasendeedgi ki sanad bhi mily, ye mere liye aizaaz hai.....Allah aap sab ko apne hifz o amman me rakhe (aamin)yahan per apna eik raaz bhi btaa doon k mujhe typing se breei shadeed qism ki "" alergei "" hai.... akser a&oqat issi wajah se tashakkur ke izhar me takhir hoti hai.....MOAZRET.... RESPECT & REGARDS N F
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