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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 21, 2012 23:38:36 GMT 5
tamam dostoN ko dawat dejeay ke sukhanwar ko bahal karein
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2012 2:40:36 GMT 5
رضی بھائی آپ نے پکارا ہم چلے آئے ہمیں تو آج بھی اتنی ہی انسیت ہے جتنی پہلے تھی سب چلے گئے اسے ویران کر کے جب بھی آتے تنہائی ہی تنہائی ہوتی تو دل گھبرا سا جاتا تھا
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 23, 2011 13:20:34 GMT 5
DOSTO! HAM HAZIR HEIN...!
magar jatay samay itni ronaq chaor kar gaey thay aur ab itna sunsaan mahool .......... wehshat honay lagi hay........ ajao yar aur is weerani ko khatm karo ......... koe behs...... koe jumla ..... ko sawal ......... koe takhleeq..........
aqeel malik
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 23, 2011 13:14:40 GMT 5
mein zroor dekhoN ga mughal bhae ap ka shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 16, 2009 13:59:34 GMT 5
shukria zaki sahab
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 16, 2009 13:58:52 GMT 5
thnx akif
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 27, 2009 16:18:23 GMT 5
ap tamam hazraat ka shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 23, 2009 17:18:35 GMT 5
shukria dr sahab
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 22, 2009 18:40:23 GMT 5
agar ghareeb he hoty tu kuch kalaam na tha hamary pass deay ka bhi ehtamaam na tha
be yak nigah giraya gia hamein aey dost tu kia hamra zara sa bhi nang-o-naam na tha
tamaam umr bahany trashty guzri agar cheh ham ko pas-o-pesh say kalaam na tha
ye shehr ehd-e-guzishta ki ik kahani hay yahan hawas ka kahin koe ekhtitaam na tha
ye khauf tha ke hamein chahatein nahi milni isi leay tu yahan mustaqil qiaam na tha
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 14, 2009 18:05:08 GMT 5
umda ghazal hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 14, 2009 18:03:28 GMT 5
umda aur napi tuli nazm hay dad qubool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 14, 2009 17:57:55 GMT 5
mein sarkari masroofiat kay bais forum par nahi apya .ap tamam hazraat ka shukria
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taqtee
May 2, 2009 12:49:56 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on May 2, 2009 12:49:56 GMT 5
Qadri sahab adab !
behs ko jancha,sab say pehlay tu razi sahab nay wazwh nahi kia ke aroozi hawalay say un kay zehn mein kia hay lihaza us par mein raey qaim nahi karsakta tamam ghazal wazn mein hay siwaey un jaghooN kay jin ki taraf nasir sahab nay ishara kia magar un ki aik baat say ikhtilaaf hay keh NUkTA CHEEN hona chaheay ya Nuqta chee'N tu arz ye hay ke sher ka akhir hamesha zarab kehlaata hay aur zarab mein agar do sakin ikhta ho bhi jaei tu jaiz hoty hein qadri sahab ki bas ye ghalati hay ke unhooN nay nukta cheen ba ilaan noon nahi bandha agar bandh bhi dein tu wazn say kharij nahi hoga
is behr kay bahad zahafaat hein aur un ko barta jata hay nasir kazmi ki pehli barish mein jaga jaga ap ko misaaal milay gi
is wazn ko
felun felun felun felun mafa ilatun mafa ilatun
mutafa ilatun mutafa ilatun
fa ee faoolun felun felun
aur najanay kitnay he zahafat kay sath bandha jasakta hay
thnx aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 2, 2009 12:43:58 GMT 5
Qadri sahab adab !
behs ko jancha,sab say pehlay tu razi sahab nay wazwh nahi kia ke aroozi hawalay say un kay zehn mein kia hay lihaza us par mein raey qaim nahi karsakta tamam ghazal wazn mein hay siwaey un jaghooN kay jin ki taraf nasir sahab nay ishara kia magar un ki aik baat say ikhtilaaf hay keh NUkTA CHEEN hona chaheay ya Nuqta chee'N tu arz ye hay ke sher ka akhir hamesha zarab kehlaata hay aur zarab mein agar do sakin ikhta ho bhi jaei tu jaiz hoty hein qadri sahab ki bas ye ghalati hay ke unhooN nay nukta cheen ba ilaan noon nahi bandha agar bandh bhi dein tu wazn say kharij nahi hoga
is behr kay bahad zahafaat hein aur un ko barta jata hay nasir kazmi ki pehli barish mein jaga jaga ap ko misaaal milay gi
is wazn ko
felun felun felun felun mafa ilatun mafa ilatun
mutafa ilatun mutafa ilatun
fa ee faoolun felun felun
aur najanay kitnay he zahafat kay sath bandha jasakta hay
thnx aqeel
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taraana
Apr 12, 2009 15:07:40 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Apr 12, 2009 15:07:40 GMT 5
wah hafiz saaab
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