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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 9, 2009 11:45:10 GMT 5
AOA Neha jee bohat arse ke bad ap ka koi klam parhne ko mila par bohat umda mila khobsorat Ghazal ke liye bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 9, 2009 11:41:42 GMT 5
AOA Hazarte Razi sahib kese mizaj hai,n Qibla aap ke mazraat chahta ho,n ke takheer se pohanch paya mehfal me aur itni Khobsorat Ghazal se abhi tak mehrom raha razi bhai keya Ghazal atta ki he yaqeen janyiye aik aik misra seedha dil ki gehraio,n ko choota raha aur aik ajeeb kefyiat tari kar di ap ki is Ghazal ne kitni sachi aur kitni haqeeqat par mabni Ghazal he Razi bhai mere chamane Qalb ke tumam phool ap ke Husne kalam ki nazr ALLHA kare ap ka qalam hamesha esi umda aur ba kamal alfaz ki malye bakherta rahe ameen suma ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 9, 2009 0:10:38 GMT 5
AOA Atif mirza bhai bohat khushi hoi jaan kar ke walda ki tabiyat behtar he DUAA he ke ALLHA talla unhe sehate kamla o ajla atta farmye aur ta deer un ka shafqat bhara saya ap ke saro par qayem rahe ameen suma ameen
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 8, 2009 17:51:34 GMT 5
AOA hamza987 jee ap ne ghazal ko itni gehraei se parha aur pasand kiya is ke liye bohat shurkiya ap ki pur khlos dad dil me sama li hum ne nawazish waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/size]
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 8, 2009 17:49:18 GMT 5
AOA jooni bhai ap ki Dhair sari DAD Dhair sare shukriya ke sath qabol ki bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ki is mohabat ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 5, 2009 3:35:01 GMT 5
AOA ATIF bhai ap ki walda ki sehat ka parh kar tashweesh hoi ALLHA talla unhe sehat e kamla o ajla atta farmye aur un ka saya ta deer ao ke saro par qayem o dayem rakhe ameen suma ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 3, 2009 21:52:17 GMT 5
AOA zaki bhai ap ki bohat sari dad dil ki gehraio,n me basa li bohat mamno,n ho,n waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 3, 2009 21:51:13 GMT 5
khoon day kar deay jalany hein Ye amal gah gah karna he kia khoobsorat aur umda sher kaha hay ap nay bahut dair tak is sher kay sehr mein giraftar raha tab kahin kuch keh paya dad qabool kejeay aqeel malik |
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 1, 2009 17:00:49 GMT 5
AOA ehle sukhanwar aik taweel mudat ke bad bazm me hazir howa ho,n apni aik kawish ke sath ap ki qeemti ara ka munatzir ramishjaanYou bhi tujh se nibah karna he
Khud ko pora tabah karna he
Teri zulfo me umr katni he
Bakht apna seeaah karna he
Khulaa lena he zindgai se hume
Our ajal se beeah karna he
Khon de kar diye jalane he
Ye amal gah gah karna he
Dil jalana he bam par ramish
Jism ko farsh e rah karma he[/center]
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 1, 2009 16:47:19 GMT 5
AOA zamin sahib ap ko bhi ne sal ke aghaz par neya sal aur salgira ka din muabrik ho ALLHA talla se duaa he ke ap ke liye bohat khair o barkat wala sabat ho is sal ka har lamha meri janib se salgira ki dili muabrikbad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 1, 2009 16:44:45 GMT 5
AOA Shaheen sahib ap ko bhi dono tarha se ne sal ka aghaz muabrik ho ALLHA pak ane wal sal ka har lamha ap ke liye ba barkat farmye ameen suma ameen meri janib se salgira ki dili muabrik bad qabol kijiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 1, 2009 16:42:47 GMT 5
AOA naveed bhai meri janib se ap ko dono lehazo se neya sal muabrik ho duaa he ke KHUDA talla is ne sal me ap ko sehat aur dono jahano ki barkato aur neemato se nawaze ameen suma ameen meri janib se salgira ke pur musarat moqa par dili muabrikbad waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Dec 18, 2008 0:40:11 GMT 5
AOA inthei qable ehtram Dr Rafi sahib meri janib se aur tumam ehle sukhan ki janib se ap ko salgira ki dili muabrikbad
Dr sahib duaa go ho,n ke ALLHA talla ane wale tumam lamhat me ap ko sehate kamla o ajla atta farmye dono jahano ki khushiya ap ke daman me dal de aur ap hamesha khush o khuram rahe ameen suma ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/size]
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Post by ramishjaan on Dec 2, 2008 16:49:46 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram Dr sahib aik bar phir mazratt ke bar por hisa nahi le pa raha ap ke mukalme jis ke liye bohat sharminda ho,n ap se ...................... umeed he ap maarf farmye ge
Dr sahib jis tarha aik Ghazal me kai mosam kai rang milte hai,n esa bhi dekha geya he ke bohat sanjeed klam me mazhiya ishaar bhi ghazal me paye jate hai,n phir mazhiya shaier aur Aam shaeri ko do adabi hiso me kio,n taqseem kiya geya he keya ghazal Sirf Ghazal nahi reh sakti kio,n ke Ghazal me to inqlabi romanwi aur tanziya ishaar hote hihai,n ??
waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Dec 1, 2008 15:56:29 GMT 5
AOA bohat hi azeez Zaki bhai meri janib se ap ko salgira ki bohat bohat muabrik ho ALLHA kare ane wala har pal har din har sal ap ke liye sehat nemaate barakate aur haqeeqi khushiya,n le kar aye ameen suma ameen ....
zaki bhai meri baaz majboriya,n he ke ap ko itne sada andaz me muabrik bad peesh ki me is waqt rangeen aur pholo se bahri hoi muabrik pesh nahi kar paya mazraat qabol ki jiye waslam ap ka bhai ramishjaan
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