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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 6, 2009 23:23:20 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram neelo far sis bohat shukriya ap ki qeemti doau,n ke liye sada khush rahiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 4, 2009 2:36:01 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai, Adaab. " 'Azaad' ya 'Nasri' sha'eri ka Urdu Ghazal per kiya asar daikhtay hain aap?" " 'Azaad' sha'eri ka mustaqbil kiya nazar aata hai?" Shukriya. AOA jooni bro shukriya itne aham sawalt mujh jese kam ilm se pochne ka ............................. Azaad sha eri ka bohat gehra asar he urdu adab par ab to baqaeyda urdu shaeri ki aik aham sinf mani jati he azad shaeri to mumkin he aenda ane wale waqto me kabhi nasari shaeri ko bhi kuch esa muqam mil jaye jese azad shaeri ko mil hi geya he
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 4, 2009 2:33:23 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai, Adaab. " Adab main 'Riwayat' aur 'Taqleed' ki kiya ehmiyat hai? Shukriya. AOA jooni bro Riwayat ke sath jodna to bohat acha he aur jaha tak bat he taqleed ki to shairi me agar taqleed ki jaye yani sher ko soch samjh kar ke mazi me aik shaier ne esa likha us ki taqleed me me bhi esa hi likho esi taqleed ka me qayel nahi aur me samjhta ho,n ke esa nahi hona chahiye kio,n shaieri wohi jo ap par amaad ho aur ap ka apna kehyal apni soch .......................... taqlled se ap ki keya murad he agar wazeh kar de to mujhe asani rahe gi jooni bro
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 4, 2009 2:29:06 GMT 5
AOA Zaki bro intzar rahe ga
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 4, 2009 2:27:09 GMT 5
AOA JAZAK UM ULLHA AHSAN ULL JAZA atif bhai[/size]
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:40:29 GMT 5
AOA jooni bro taruf ki pasandeedgi ke liye shukriya ap ki mazeed bato ka intzar rahe ga waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:39:06 GMT 5
Urdu Shairry men GHAAALLB.......Kabhi Dobaraa Aaey Gaa>>>> ? AOA muzaffar mohisn sahib pehle to mamno.n ho,n ke ap ne apne qeemti waqt me se kuch waqt nikala aur is interwiew me shirkat ki jawab takheer se dene ki mazrat chahta ho,n aik foutgi ki wajha se kuch din on lein nahi asaka .......... atte hai,n ap ke sawal ki janib ...
Urdu shaieri me GHAALAB kabhi dobara Aaye ga
mere nazdeek meri naqus aqal ke mutabiq har shaklhs apni zaat me aik ehad hota he wo ehad ane wale waqto me majoud to rehta he aur ane wale waqto me mumkiin he ke us se behtar shaksiyat ajye magar wo shaksiyat nahi asakti isi tarha mere nazdeek Ghaalab marhom aik esa shaier hai,n jo har dour me aik bulnad muqam par mjoud rahe ge magar mere nazdeek har dour me kuch shora ese zaror aye hai,n aur atte rahe ge jo us muqam ke barabar zaror masnad hasil kar sake ge ... me yahan misal ke tour par kuch name bhi likhna chahta tha magar kisi adabi behas aur is liye ke kisi ko bura na mehsos ho me sirf itne hi jawab par iktfa karta ho,n waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:32:15 GMT 5
Salam Ramish bhai.... Ab mein soch raha hon keh mein kia pochon app se??? mere pass koi sawal nahi hai... App k baray mein jan kar acha laga .... Bas app khud he bata dejeay apne baray mein.. Sada khush raheay... Zaki bro agar ap hukam kare to keya me sawal nama teyar kar ke ap ko bhijwa do aji hazoor yeh kar e khair ap ko hi ada karna he
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:28:57 GMT 5
AOA Atif bro bohat shukriya duao,n me yad rakhyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:28:00 GMT 5
AOA jooni bhai bohat nawazish ap ki doau,n ke lyie aend abhi apni doau,n me yad rakhiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:26:57 GMT 5
AOA Zaki bhai ap ki moahabt ka shurkiya umeed he ap ese hi apni doau,n me yad rakhe ge waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 1, 2009 19:25:56 GMT 5
AOA Razi bhai ap ki in moahbato ka bohat shukriya daou,n me yad rakhyie ke meri ehliya par in hadsat ka bohat asar he pichle 5 mah me yeh dosri wafat he pichle julaei me un ki jawan behan ka intqal howa tha aur ab un ki walda ka ALLHA talla hi hume sabr aur hosla atta farmye ameen suma ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 24, 2009 23:47:08 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 22, 2009 16:01:24 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai bohat zabardast bohat khusaslbo se ap newazaht farmei he tumam halat ki kash kash kash huamre seysatdan bhi kcuh samjhdari ka muazahra kare aur Pakistan ko aik kamyab na sahi kam az kam aik mulk aik shankaht to baqi rehne de is ki ameen suma ameen ................ ap ke is umda kalam ke liye mamno,n ho,n ap ka yeh he asal jahad aur mujhe yaqeen he INSHALLA ap badi shan se kamyab ho jaye ge aur KHuda na khasta na howe to koi bat nahi pehle bhi itne sal ki tankhwa nahi mili aenda ka bhi ALLHA malik he ap ka Razi bhai waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/size]
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 22, 2009 15:54:27 GMT 5
AOA neha jee bohat shukriya ap ki pur khlos dad ke liye sada khush rahiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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