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Post by jooni on Jul 27, 2008 4:58:42 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga.
"KAASH"
Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta!
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Post by jooni on Jul 27, 2008 4:49:58 GMT 5
Jamshaid Dear, Adaab. Yaar, boht shukriya. Tum to jaantay ho keh aik arsay se kuchh likha nhi jaa raha. Koi wajah smajh nhi aati hai. Razi Bhaii, Atif Bhaii aur tum jaisay doston ki rehnumaii main phir se koshish kroon ga. Dua kerna.
Junaid
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Post by jooni on Jul 27, 2008 4:42:24 GMT 5
Tabassum Sahib, Adaab. Tawajjoh denay ka be-hadd shukriya. Khamiyon ko door kernay ki koshish kroon ga, ap rehnumaii kertay rehiye ga.
Junaid Sikandar
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Post by jooni on Jul 27, 2008 4:37:41 GMT 5
Razi Bhaii, Adaab. Housla afzaaii ka boht shukriya. Atif Bhaii ne boht hi umda treeqay se tajzia kia hai. Aisi hi rehnumaii ka khwahishmand hoon. Junaid
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 19:14:48 GMT 5
Atif Bhai, Adaab. Itni baareek beeni se ghazal parhnay aur tajziya kernay ka dil se shukriya. Rumooz-e-shaa'eri se ziyada waqif nhi hoon. Ap jaisay doston se rehnumaii ki guzaarish hai. Ap ka boht shukriya.
Junaid Sikandar
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 18:16:43 GMT 5
Kanwal Sahiba, Boht khoob. Maqta'a boht umda hai.
Sun Kanwal aaye ga mausam-e- gul bhi ab Jaate jaate hi jaaye gi aakhir khizan
Daad qubool kijiye.
Junaid Sikandar
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 18:02:45 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Apni aik "GHAZAL" paish kernay ki jasarat ker raha hoon. Musbat tanqeed khulay dil se qubool ki ja'ay gi. Muntazir rahoon ga. Paishgi Shukriya.
Aankhon main hi marr jatay hain Sapnay, tanhaa karr jatay hain
Marnay se jo darr jatay hain Maot se pehlay marr jatay hain
Tairay saath jo lamhay beetain Kitni jald guzarr jatay hain
Tairi yaad kay jugnoo aa ker Har ore ujala karr jatay hain
Har rozz naii masaafat hai Har rozz naya safar jatay hain
Aur tarah kay log hain hotay Auron ki khaatir marr jatay hain
Qismat jin ki perdais likha ho Lout k kab woh gharr jatay hain
Ma'ay aur meena ab tum sambhlo Sikandar hum to gharr jatay hain
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 9:06:53 GMT 5
Razi Sahib, Adaab. Boht nawazish ap ki. Insha-Allah jald hi kuchh paish kernay ki jasarat kroon ga.
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 9:02:00 GMT 5
Jamshaid Dear, Tumhara boht shukriya mujhe "WELCOME" kernay aur doosray doston se ta'aruf karanay ka.
Junaid
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 8:58:12 GMT 5
Kanwal Sahiba, Adaab. Itnay khuloos k saath "WELCOME" kernay ka boht shukriya. Ap ka mujhe welcome kerna yaadgar bunn gaya hai. Ap ne meray ta'aruf k andaaz ko pasand kia aur aisay format ki tajveez paish ki, jis per Razi Sahib ne baqa'eda aik thread "Apna Apna Ta'aruf" k naam se shuru ker diya hai. Iss main ap ka bhi hissa hai. Boht shukriya.
Junaid Sikandar
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 8:47:41 GMT 5
Tabassum SAhib, Adaab. Khuli baahon aur khulay dil k saath istiqbaal kernay ka boht shukriya.
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 8:43:17 GMT 5
Atif Sahib, Adaab. Boht achhi tajveez hai Kanwal Sahiba ki aur ap ki tawajjo bhi qabil-e-daad hai. Aur ab to Razi Sahib ne amli tor per aghaaz bhi ker diya hai. Allah ap ko khush rakhhay.
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 8:23:56 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Mujh se milye. Name: Muhammad Junaid Akbar Qalmi Name: Junaid Sikandar D.O.Birth: 17 March, 1972 Native City: Layyah Address: House # 10-A, Main Street, Jinnah Colony, College Road, Layyah. Phone: Mobile # 0333 7670802, Res. 0606 411293 Education: M.A. English, M.A.Urdu (part-1) Profession: Teaching At Present: In Saudi Arabia (Sakaka, Al-jouf ) Phone: Mobile # 00966 551297418 E-mail: junaidakbar72@yahoo.com Reference: Jamshaid Sahil Takhleeq: Majmoo'aa-e-Ghazal ( Mohabbaton Ka Safar ) Hobbies: Cricket, Reading, Cooking, Doston Se Milna.
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 7:54:56 GMT 5
Razi Sahib, Boht hi achhi baat hai, main ta'eed karta hoon. Iss per sakhti se amal hona cha'hiye. Sub doston se ta'awun ki ummeed aur guzaarish hai.
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Post by jooni on Jul 26, 2008 7:46:01 GMT 5
Razi Sahib, Adaab. Abhi namaz-e-fajr k ba'ad, garam chai k cup k saath ap ki "Mukalmati Nazm" parhi. Nashtay ka maza aa gaya. Mohabbat ki khoobsoorti iss k "MUBHAM" honay main hi hai, laikin khwahish hamaisha yehi hoti hai keh Mohabbat "WAZEH" ho. Boht hi "TAAZGI" hai ap ki nazm main. Ye line to dil ko chhoo gaii; " Kisi k hont ka larzan kinara bhi, dilon main moj'zann jazbon ki har tafseel se agaah karta hai" aur " Yahan jo dil ki dunyan hai, agar abaad ho ja'ay, boht veeraan hoti hai". Boht Khoob Razi Sahib. Dhair saari daad qubool kijiye. Razi Bhaii, Pakistan aa raha hoon. 28 july, do-pehr 1 bjay, islamabad, aur aglay din ya'ni 29 july ko LAYYAH pohnchoon ga, insha-Allah. Koshish kroon ga aur Khwahish hai keh "SUKHANWAR" k jin doston se mumkin ho, bil-mushafa mulaqat ho ja'ay, agar aap dost pasand krain to. Boht shukriya.
Junaid Sikandar
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