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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 1, 2007 11:24:33 GMT 5
bohat arsay baad doston k liay aik mukaalmaati nazm laaya hoon aap ki aaraa ka muntazir rahoon ga thanx razi
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Post by khalid on Nov 1, 2007 19:19:45 GMT 5
intehaii khoobsoorat!!
razi bhaii is daur aur in lamhaat se her insaan guzerta hai, iskee akkaasi aap ne aisey ki ke mujhe apna waqt yaad aa gaya!
is peighaam rasaani ko iss khoobi, ravaani, tafseel o taseer se aazaad nazm meiN samoney ke liye meiree jaanib se dheroN daad qubool keeje!
khaalid
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 1, 2007 23:00:05 GMT 5
Razi Sahib! Aaj dopehr iss nazm ko paRhtay paRhtay reh gaya magar shaam ko aap say bilmushafa sun'nay ka ittefaq huwa. Maza aya sun kar aur dobala huwa ab paRh kar. Bohut khoobsoorat!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 2, 2007 7:29:23 GMT 5
Razi bhai Hasb e ma,amool khoobsoorat nazm
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 4, 2007 2:16:17 GMT 5
intehaii khoobsoorat!!
razi bhaii is daur aur in lamhaat se her insaan guzerta hai, iskee akkaasi aap ne aisey ki ke mujhe apna waqt yaad aa gaya!
is peighaam rasaani ko iss khoobi, ravaani, tafseel o taseer se aazaad nazm meiN samoney ke liye meiree jaanib se dheroN daad qubool keeje!
khaalid khalid bhai nazm pasand karnay ka shukria thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 5, 2007 1:09:35 GMT 5
Razi Sahib! Aaj dopehr iss nazm ko paRhtay paRhtay reh gaya magar shaam ko aap say bilmushafa sun'nay ka ittefaq huwa. Maza aya sun kar aur dobala huwa ab paRh kar. Bohut khoobsoorat! shukria atif bhai razi
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maya
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Post by maya on Nov 5, 2007 11:31:04 GMT 5
Razi Sahib
Bohat acha laga apki yea nazam parh kr.aik baar nahi yea baar bar parhana wali nazam kahi aap nay. bohat si daad aur dua apkay leya waslam Fatimah
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 5, 2007 12:31:54 GMT 5
Razi Sahib Bohat acha laga apki yea nazam parh kr.aik baar nahi yea baar bar parhana wali nazam kahi aap nay. bohat si daa aur dua apkay leya waslam Fatimah fatimah ji bohat shukria k aap ny pasandeedgi ka izhar kia thanx razi
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Post by phototech81 on Nov 5, 2007 13:18:33 GMT 5
bohat khub janab mohatam razi Sahab aap ki baoht sari poetry parhi hai ye nazam jab pehly dafa parhi thi to baoht maza aaya tha aur ab dosri dafa parhi hai to aur hi zeda maza aaya hai aap ki sari poetry kamal ki hai nice poetry boaht achi nazam hai
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 5, 2007 20:19:28 GMT 5
Achchi nazm ki khasiyat hai keh har baar yeh naya lutf deti hai.
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tarana
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Post by tarana on Nov 7, 2007 2:35:37 GMT 5
Bohot Khoobsoorat Razi bhai sach lutf aa gaya perh ker...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 0:12:04 GMT 5
bohat khub janab mohatam razi Sahab aap ki baoht sari poetry parhi hai ye nazam jab pehly dafa parhi thi to baoht maza aaya tha aur ab dosri dafa parhi hai to aur hi zeda maza aaya hai aap ki sari poetry kamal ki hai nice poetry boaht achi nazam hai khuram bohat shukria aap ka yehi muhabatain jo aap sab ki taraf sy milti hain yehi mera sarmaaya hain thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 0:25:57 GMT 5
Bohot Khoobsoorat Razi bhai sach lutf aa gaya perh ker... shukria tarana sahiba razi
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Post by waqaar on Nov 8, 2007 2:40:46 GMT 5
razi bh~aaii, aadaab, us din kay ba'd koii javaab nah aana , aik 'ajeeb kaifiYYat baandh~ta hay. daad qubool kee jiYay is khoobSoorat naZ^m per. waQaar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 23:43:03 GMT 5
razi bh~aaii, aadaab, us din kay ba'd koii javaab nah aana , aik 'ajeeb kaifiYYat baandh~ta hay. daad qubool kee jiYay is khoobSoorat naZ^m per. waQaar waqar bhaai bohat nawazish aap ki k aap nay pazeeraai ki razi
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