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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 23, 2008 13:31:42 GMT 5
Qamar sahab ap ka shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 23, 2008 13:30:47 GMT 5
Naheed G ap ka shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Oct 21, 2008 21:03:43 GMT 5
imahry umda hay bas nasr para hay nazm kehna munasib nahi hoga kiun behr hal aik ridham ki zarorat horti hay Salam Aqeel Malik sahaib apki ki baat sy har giz ikhtilaf nahi.es izhaar ka shukria .apki es txt main aik lafz ki samjh nai aye.sab sy pehla lafz kea hay?"imharay"meray leya yea lafz neya hay. ya mumkin hay roman main samj nai saki.ho sakay tu wazah farma dain. waslam i am sory word ghalat type ho gaya tha word tha IMMAGE
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:52:39 GMT 5
imahry umda hay bas nasr para hay nazm kehna munasib nahi hoga kiun behr hal aik ridham ki zarorat horti hay
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GHAZAL
Sept 28, 2008 11:51:12 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:51:12 GMT 5
ap ko chaheay ke ap jadeed jaraid ka matalia aur wazn par thora dhian dein insha allah ap ka kalam rawan hojaeay ga
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:47:49 GMT 5
ghazal ka majmooe mizaaj aur khiaalat mein tazgi tu hay magar treatment ki bahut kami dikhae di crafting ki zaroorat hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:45:00 GMT 5
Razi sahab
ghazal ka matalia kia bahut acha laga jahan tak jhonka daynay ka qazia hay tu aik baat ye bhi zehn mein rakhna zaroori hota hay ke talazmaati nizam meiN ap agar koe concreet fact bana rahay hein tu us sorat mein aisa lafz ko concreet na ho tu us soorat mein masadir kay ulat phiar say aisa kar lia jata hay aur yaqeenan Iqbaal zafar ki aik bahut bari misaal hamaray samnay hay lihaza ap ka muravija lafz apnay poray mana talazmaati nizaam samiat dayraha hay is leay us ko badalnay ki zaroorat nahi hay as it is darust hay han ye alaag baaat ke ap koe khud say mazeed acha lana chahein tu ye aik alag sorat hay
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:33:56 GMT 5
teesray sher ka misra oola par nazr e sani chaheay majmooe taur par ghazal umda hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:28:38 GMT 5
bahut umda nzm hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:22:35 GMT 5
bahut khoob sorat radeef aur rawan ashaar hein dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:21:05 GMT 5
woh har qadam pe saath hmare hai is treh jaise ek ajnabi ho kisi ajnabi ke saath
bahut umda sher hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:19:12 GMT 5
bahut umda imagry ki nazm hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:16:46 GMT 5
Kanwal sahiba jab tak matalia na kia jaeay aur zameeni hqaiq kay sath jurat na banay tu us waqt tak shairi ki wo satah jahan aj shairi ka mahal tameer hay mein dakhil hona bara kathin hay jadeed shairi ka matalia ap ki shairi mein nikhar la sakta hay majmoor taur par aik kamzoor ghazal hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:10:07 GMT 5
bahut khoob aur mazboot misra sazi hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:04:38 GMT 5
Zaki sahab ap ka shukria
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