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Post by neelofar on Jul 27, 2008 16:54:45 GMT 5
G H A Z A L *********
Har shai mili hyaat me derya dili ke saath Paaya hai uss ka gham bhi ghum e zingagi k saath
Apni wafa pe harf na aane diaa kabhi Hum ne hazar range uthaye khushi ke saath
woh har qadam pe saath hmare hai is treh jaise ek ajnabi ho kisi ajnabi ke saath
hum ko milaa ke khaak mee rotey ho zar zar Wallah kyaa khuloos hai iss dushmani k sath
wohh maayel e sitam hai to ye bhi hai ek karam etnaa bhi kab kiaa hai kisi nee kisi ke saath
kan se hooN intezar mee subh e nishaat ke kab se hai dil udaas mera har khushi ke saath
Aaghosh e gham me palti hain khushyaN bhi dekhye hotaa haii subh e noor bhi teera shabi k saath ************************************
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 27, 2008 17:19:14 GMT 5
Khoob ghazal hai Neelo Ji! Daad qabool kijiay.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 28, 2008 1:02:07 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba khoobsoorat ghazal par daad qabool kijiay lutf aa gia thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 28, 2008 2:18:44 GMT 5
Bohat khoob khoobsoorat ghazal Neelofar ji
kan se hooN intezar mee subh e nishaat ke kab se hai dil udaas mera har khushi ke saath
is shaer kay pehlay misray maiN shaid composing ki ghalati hay
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Post by saeed on Jul 28, 2008 6:31:02 GMT 5
Zabardast Rafi bhai......
woh har qadam pe saath hmare hai is treh jaise ek ajnabi ho kisi ajnabi ke saath
Buhut Khub..... Daad!!!
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Post by neelofar on Sept 20, 2008 0:44:02 GMT 5
aadab! aap sab ki mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon..k iss nacheez ki aam si koshish ko saraha khush rahye......... neelofar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:21:05 GMT 5
woh har qadam pe saath hmare hai is treh jaise ek ajnabi ho kisi ajnabi ke saath
bahut umda sher hay dad qabool kejeay
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