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Post by tmasood on Feb 19, 2009 21:11:11 GMT 5
good
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Post by tmasood on Feb 19, 2009 21:09:54 GMT 5
achaa lagaa Ramish saHeb kaa tuaaruf
Shukeriya Atif bha'ee
achaa silsilah hai yeh
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Post by tmasood on Feb 19, 2009 21:01:48 GMT 5
Janaab Razi bha'ee
bohat umdagi se aap ne apne khayaal ki aur hamaare haaN ki siyaasi rawsih ki terjumaani ki hai
yeh aik talkh Haqeeqat hai
yehi dunyaa hai phir aisee yeh dunyaa kioN hai?
jo kisee ko mehaZ is liye maar daitee hai keh uskaa apnaa koee naZriyah hai
mujhe siyaasat se koee dolchaspi nahIn magar aik bahaadur aur qaabil aurat ko jo Paksitan ki pehchaan ban chuki thi is teraH k anjaam se dau chaar kerd enaa
Paksitan k jitne bhi baRae baRae aur qaabil laug haiN asie hi khatam ker diye jaate haiN
yehi yehaan kaa reeti rawaaj ban gyaa hai
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Khair ...ik gehre takhyyul per daad haaZir hai
qabuul fermaaiN
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Post by tmasood on Feb 19, 2009 20:56:59 GMT 5
Meri har baat ka mehwar tu hai Yun meri zaat kay andar tu hai
Tujhe bhoolo'n tou tujhe yad karun Meri socho'n main barabar tu hai
Jo chalakta nahin hatho'n se kabhi Us hasee'n chaah ka saaghar tu hai
Tujhe paa kay yun saja loon khud ko Meray jazbaat ka zewar tu hai
Tujhe dekhon tou meri pyas bujhe Meri aankhon ka samnadar tu hai
Kia mera wasta aghyar say bas Meri hasti ka sukhanwar tu hai
Tere bin Neha bhala kesay jiye Dil ki deewar bhi aur dar tu hai Neha jee
kamaal ker diaa aap ne
nehaayat khoobSurat jazbaat ko baRee masoomiyat se manzoom kiyaa hai
naghmagi se bherpuur kalaam hai
dil kee gehraaiyoN se niklaa huaa
saare ashaar hi laa jwaab haiN
dilee daad qabuul karein sister
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Post by tmasood on Jan 29, 2009 1:20:26 GMT 5
bohat shukeriyah Neha jee
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Post by tmasood on Jan 29, 2009 1:19:50 GMT 5
Boht khoob, Boht Umdah. DaaD qubool kijiye Tahira Sahiba. bohat sh7ukeriyah Jooni Sahab
khush rehiye
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Post by tmasood on Jan 29, 2009 1:18:42 GMT 5
Bahut hi dil ko chhoo janay wali nazm hai, daad hazir hai. Zaraa wazan per nazr-e-saani kijiay ga! Shukeriyah Atif Sahab
is teraf atwaajah dilaane kaa bhi shukeriyah
is ko check ker lijye gaa
wassalam
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Post by tmasood on Jan 29, 2009 1:12:31 GMT 5
Mashallah bohat A'alaa
khoobSurat kalaam share kerne kaa shukriyah
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Post by tmasood on Jan 29, 2009 1:09:22 GMT 5
Bahut umda aur khoobsoorat ghazal hai Tahira ji! Bahut si daad qabool kijiay! Shukeriyah Atif bahe'ee maiN is izzat afza'ee k liye beHad mamnoon hoN
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Post by tmasood on Jan 29, 2009 1:08:13 GMT 5
buhat achhi ghazal hai tahira ji..daad qubool kijiye. Shukeriyah janaab
is HauSlah afza'ee per mamnoon hoN
khush rehaiN
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Post by tmasood on Jan 28, 2009 1:39:01 GMT 5
bohat shukeriyah bha'ee SaHeb
is teraH nazm kaa maZmoon aur waZeh huaa
mehrbaanii
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Post by tmasood on Jan 26, 2009 19:40:23 GMT 5
hamari soch ko qaidi bana lia gia tha hameiN ye roshni jab musta'ar di gae thi
bohat khoob
Aqeel Saheb
her saher aur shaair kaa iak matmaHa-e-nazar hotaa hia jis ke tehat woh shaer kehtaa hai
aap ka anziru=iah naa jen kayaa ho
magar maiN ise magharbi aqwaami ki naam nehaad imdaad k iwaz hamaare her kaam maiN dakahl andaazi kaa laitee hoN
sach tau yeh hai keh yeh maazi maiN hi nahiN Haal maiN bhi ho rehaa hai
aur pehle se baRh ker ho rehaa hai
yeh shaer is zaawiye se bohat talkh Haqeeqt pesh kertaa hai
daad haazir hai
i
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Post by tmasood on Jan 26, 2009 19:34:32 GMT 5
Boht khoob, Boht Umdah. Aap ki DuA per AameeN kehtay hain. shukeriyah jooni
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Post by tmasood on Jan 26, 2009 19:32:19 GMT 5
aaj jo aqdaar ham se kho gaeeiN haaN woh gum gashtah khazaane dhundati hoN Wah bohut hi khubsurat ghazal hai tahira ji...tamam ashaar khoob kahay hain aap nay..meri janib se daad qubool kijye so nice of you Neha jee
in khoobSurat kalimaat k liye dilse mamnoon hoN
khush rehaiN
is waqt is forum maiN gulaab ki sakht kami meHsus ho rehi hai
wernah aap ko pesh kerti
ThehereiN maiN kahiN aur se dhund ker laati hoN
yeh laiN
khush rehaiN
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Post by tmasood on Jan 26, 2009 19:22:15 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy tahira ji daad qabool kijiay thanx razi aap ne isko acha akehaa haiN tau yaqeenan achi hi ho gee razi Bha'ee
aayndah bhi apni raaey se nawaazte rehiye gaa
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