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Post by nasirmalik on Jan 18, 2009 11:43:01 GMT 5
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Jan 20, 2009 0:39:09 GMT 5
Boht Umdah Nasir Sahib.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 24, 2009 0:08:43 GMT 5
boht khoobsoort nazm hy aap ki nasir malik sahab khaaas panjabi aahang jhalakta hy is nazm sy rawan dawan andaz aur mazmon bhi boht umda khush kr dia janab thanx razi
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Post by tmasood on Jan 26, 2009 19:00:16 GMT 5
Nasir Sahab
mujhe khud bhhi punjaabi zabaan maiN shaairee pasand hai aur iski khwaahish hai
aik maine kahi bhi thi
"maaiN ni maiN kinnoN aakhaaN?"
(iInshallah jlad yehaaN chispaan karoNgee)
aapki nazm saari paRhi
magar bohat "guuRhi" punjaabi lagee
is liye kaee muaqaamaat per samjh nah saki
kaash samajh sakti
kuch alfaaz jo smajh maiN anhiNa aey yaa thoRaa bohat mafhoom samjh mai aaya woh yeh haiN
Talli= hatailee??
"oDhar"?
sap?
Kunj?
sutte laikh?
gand chaRaihdi?
geera?
apni kam ilmi per shermindah hoN
umeed hai keh rehmumaa'ee fermaaiN ge.
baaherhaal majmuee taur per is nazm se aap kaa kisee be ittefaaqi per derd jhalak rehaa hai
daad Haazir hai wassalam
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Post by nasirmalik on Jan 27, 2009 19:07:43 GMT 5
H'ble! daad ka shukria. alfaz ke aasan moaani ye haiN. Talli= hatailee?....... Yes "oDhar"?......... Ojhal, Ghaib, Nigah se pare, Disappear sap?...... SaNp, Snake, Kunj?...... saNp ki khal jo wo makhsoos mosam maiN utar phankta he. sutte laikh?...... khaabeeda qismat, dead distiny gand chaRaihdi?...... wo girah jo chohri ho yani 4 martba di gai girah. geera?.....Dushmani, enimyship, Wair umeed he ke ab aap pori tara Nazam se adabi hiz kasheed karaiN gi. Nasir Malik
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Post by tmasood on Jan 28, 2009 1:39:01 GMT 5
bohat shukeriyah bha'ee SaHeb
is teraH nazm kaa maZmoon aur waZeh huaa
mehrbaanii
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