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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 16:01:36 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba! apki aik behti nadi ki tarah rawan dawan ghazal pasand aaee, achay khiyalaat ka izhar achay peraey main kiya hay aap nay. daad qabool kijiey Tanweer Shukriya Tanveer sahab
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 16:00:01 GMT 5
[ color=Blue]YOUN INTEZAAR KII HAD SAY GUZARNA CHAHTY HOON
KAY TERY CHAAAH MAIN, JEE JEE KAY MARNA CHAHTY HOON
JO MERAY DIL KAY SABHI MAUSAMO'N KA SAATHI HAI USSI KAY PYAAR KI RUTT MAIN SANWARNA CHAHTY HOON
YEH RAAH-E- ISHQ KAY AAZAAR KAM NAHIN JAANAA’N JO WO MILAY NA MUJHAY TOU MEIN MARNA CHAHTY HOON
MUJHAY TABAAH NA KAR DAY MERY YEH KHUSH FEHMI ISI LIYE TOU MEIN KHUD SAY BHI DARNA CHAHTY HOON
KHAYAL QAUS -O- QAZAH SAA TUMHARA LAGTA HAI WO RANG SAARAY MAIN ANKHON MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
KISI KAA LAMS SATATA HAI DOORIYON MAIN MUJHAY WO PAAAS AAYE TOU BAHO'N MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
ZABA'N SAY KUCH NA KAHOON BAS NAZAR JHUKAAYE HUAY MEIN AAONSOU’N SAY TERA ZIKR KARNA CHAHTY HOON
ZAMANA JURM -E- WAFA MUJH PAY DAAAL DETA HAI KABHI KABHI MEIN USAY TUJH PAY DHARNA CHAHTY HOON
KHUDA KARAY NA..........................KOI FIKR PAAS AAAYE TERAY MEIN TUJH MAIN KHO KAY TERY FIKR KARNA CHAHTY HOON
WOH AIK HALKY SI DASTAK TU DAY DAR -E- DIL PAY MEIN APNI ZID SAY USI DAM MUKARNA CHAHTY HOON ABHI TOU KHAAKAY KI SURAT MAIN HAI KHAYAL TERA MEIN CANVAS MAIN TERA RANG BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
BAS AIK BAAR WOH KHUD KO SANWAAR LAY MUJH MEIN MEIN KIRCHIYON KI TARHAAN KHUD BHIKARNA CHAHTY HOON
NAHI HAI KHAUF ANA SAY........................ MUJHAY KOI NEHA MEIN APNI ZAAAT kII HAD SAY UBHARNA CHAHTY HOON[/color][/b][/quote] NEHA JI AADAB . SHAER GOI ME APNA RANG APNA ASLOB AUR AHANG JUDA RAKHNA KAMAL KA FAN HOTA HAI , AUR KISI KISI ME YEH WASF BAHOT ZEYADAH MAOUJOOD HOTA HAI , MAIN NE AAP KI MUKHTALIF GAZLON SE YE ANDAZAH LAGAYA HAI KE AAP KI TARAQ_QI KA GIRAAF BAHOT TEZI SE BULANDI KI JANIB GAMZAN HAI , MERI JANIB SE DHER SARI MUBARAK BAAD , ISSI TARAH KAHTI RAHEIN , ZABAA'N SE KUCH NA KAHO'N BAS NAZAR JHUKAEY HUYE MAIN AANSOONO'N SE TERA ZIKR KARNA CHAHTI HOON EAK AJEEB KAFIYET KA HAMIL HAI YEH SHEAR SHAB KI TAREEKI ME IK TERE SIWA KOI NAHI HAATH UTH_THE HAIN MERE TOU JO MUNASIB SAMJHE BAHOT KHOOB , MERI JANIB SE DHERO'N DAAD AUR DUAEEIN [/quote] Shukriya dilshad sahab...ap ki appreciation aur purkhuloos daad k liye bohut mumnoon hoon.thanx
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:58:04 GMT 5
Waah Neha jee ,... aik umdaa si ghazL par daad ke hazaaroN phooL aapki nazR ,... Thanx a lot Kanwal ji.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:56:21 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy neha ji bohat murassa aur rawan dawan aap ki ghazal main aik dheema dheema sulagta hua andaz qaari ko mutawaja karta hay KHAYAL QAUS -O- QAZAH SAA TUMHARA LAGTA HAI WO RANG SAARAY MAIN ANKHON MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON yeh shair mujhay bohat pasand aaya daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Bohut shukriya Razi bhai...aap ki daaad k liye mumnoon hoon.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:51:44 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba, Adaab. Itni piyari aur umdah ghazal per boht sari daad paish kerta hoon. Allah aap ko khush rakhay! Aap ki daad aur duaon k liye bohut mumnoon hoon Jooni sahab.thanx a lot
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:49:39 GMT 5
Boht khoob Neha Sahiba. Daad qubool kijiye. Bohut shukarguzar hoon aap ki purkhuloos daad k liye.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:48:01 GMT 5
AOA Neha je bohat umda munfrid lub o lehja mehsos howa is Ghazal me bohta umda dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Shukriya ramish sahab.. aap ki hosla afzai k liye bohut mumnoon hoon.
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:47:03 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba, Boht khoob, Boht umdah. Daad hazir hai. Daad k liye bohut shukriya Jooni
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Post by neha on Mar 17, 2009 14:18:56 GMT 5
wah wah khoobsoorat andaz hy aap ka Thanx Razi bhai
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Post by neha on Mar 17, 2009 13:56:49 GMT 5
Neha nay teergi main jalaya tha ik diya Parwanay uss ki chaah main qurbaan hogaye wah wah umda shair hy laykin neha ji itni achi ghazal k matlay par aap agar nazr e saani kr lain to munaib ho ga boht mash_hoor shair hay ik shakhs saaray shahr ko weeran kr gia mujhy aap k matlay main is k aahang mehsoos hota hy aysa naa danista bhi ho to usay hazaf kr dayna chaahiay baaqi tmaam ghazal achi hy thanx razi Shukriya Razi bhai..aap ki daad k liye mumnoon hon, baqi aap ki raaye sar ankhon par, mein zaroor dekh loon gi matlay ko.
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Post by neha on Mar 16, 2009 23:19:43 GMT 5
"Humain jab se muhabbat hogai hai" Batayen kiya ! qayamat hogai hai
Kabhi jo dushman-jaa'n tha humary Humain uss say hi nisbat hogai hai
Khudara koii un se jaa k keh day Mujhay bass unki aadat hogai hai
Wo rakh k dil mera, ye keh rahe hain Amanat main khayanat hogai hai
Bohut tha naaz jin ki dosti par Unhi say abb adawat hogai hai
Bohut naayaab is dunya main ab tou Har ik qadr-e-sharafat hogai hai
Musalma'n kia laday ga kaafiro'n se Khud aapas main adawat hogai hai
Yeh nabzain tehr si jaty hain meri Kay chahat abb zaroorat hogai hai
Likhoo'n ab kiya fasana dil ka Neha Bohut bojhal tabiyat hogai hai
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Post by neha on Mar 16, 2009 23:03:28 GMT 5
Saaghar kay tootnay ki sada kuch na poochiye Yaado'n main doobnay ki saza kuch na poochiye
Jab toofaa'n uth rahay thay behr-e-suroor main Uss waqt doobnay ka maza kuch na poochiye
Barso'n se me'h ki aas main takta hai aasma'n Sehra main paaniyo'n ki nida kuch na poochiye
Basti ujaarnay main tha gar uska haath bhi Kiun hum ko hi mili yeh saza kuch na poochiye
Rakh kar nifaaq seenay main miltay hain chaah se Aisy munafiqat ki faza kuch na poochiye
Yunhi luta diye thay jo sikkay khuloos kay Paaii jo phir iwaz main jaza kuch na poochiye
Jo safha-e hayat pay likha tha mein nay naaam Phir us ko bhoolnay ki waja kuch na poochiye
Har chand uss kay qurb ka matlab bahar hai Phir bhi judaiyo'n ka maza kuch na poochiye
Neha tou muntazir hai usi aik chaaah ki Abb hogi kia Khuda ki raza kuch na poochiye
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Post by neha on Mar 16, 2009 22:46:23 GMT 5
Rastay tamaam shehr kay sunsaan hogaye Rutha wo kia kay log bhi anjaan hogaye
Tum ne bana lia tha kbhi dil main mere ghar Kis dil kay ab batao tou mehmaan hogaye
Lamhay wo chahaton k, qurbat k saaray pal Uss ki jafa kay naam ka taawaan hogaye
Tufaan aansuo'n ka hai iss darjay teztar Lagta hai jaisay be sar-o-saamaan hogaye
Khwahish thi sath jeenay o marnay ki tere sang Mere wo khawb mujh say hi anjaan hogaye
Neha nay teergi main jalaya tha ik diya Parwanay uss ki chaah main qurbaan hogaye
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Post by neha on Mar 16, 2009 22:44:27 GMT 5
Meri hasty mere khwaabo'n ka asaasa tu hai Mere jeevan k har ik pal ka khulaasa tu hai Mere jazbo'n ki tarawat se faqat tu waaqif Meri saanso'n ki har ik lay se shanasa tu hai
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Post by neha on Mar 16, 2009 22:23:30 GMT 5
chaand, sitaara, khushboo, titli aur gulaab ab tum khud socho woh kaysa ho sakta hay
pyaar main rafta rafta shiddat aa jati hay zara zara si baat pay jhagrra ho sakta hay
Bohut khoob janab aap ki ye ghazal bohut acchi lagi, dhairon daad hazir hai.
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