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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 14:34:04 GMT 5
AOA SAEED bhai bohat umda seedhi ankho ke raste dil me utarti chali gai yeh Ghazal meri janib se bohat sari dad ap ki is ghazal ke liye chota monh badi bat aik mashwara gar tabiyat par gra.n na guzre to
Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai mera adna sa mashwra yehi he ke Naqoosh ki yeh Zid maan li jiye kitni Masoom aur meethi Zid he Qalbe chaman se Dad ke phool ap ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Ramish bhai, Buhut nawazish pazeerayi keliye. Aapka mashwara bilkul baja hai....ham ne naqoosh ki zidd maan li... khush rahen saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 1, 2008 9:32:55 GMT 5
saeed sahab kia khoob nazm hay.aik aik line dil main utarti hoe mhasoos hoti hay. dad qabool kijiay zagham abidi Zagham sb, Buhut nawazish aapki. Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 1, 2008 9:32:00 GMT 5
eik zer-e-tameer ghazal Sukhanwar ki tesri salgireh ki nazr..... Rukney ka irada tha, guzer jaaney ki zidd hai Phir josh-e-musafat kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai?
Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai
ApnoN ke wo andaaz na pehley se maraasim Guzrey hooey din-raat ko duhraaney ki zidd hai
Maloom naheN wehshat-e-be-faiz januN ko Jeeney ki tamanna hai keh marr jaaney ki zidd hai
Us reig-e-rawaaN se gul-o-gulzar ki khwahish Ye ishq nahen hai kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
izafa:
aabaad hai ujRey hooey chehroN ki wafa se ye shehr keh basti nahen, veeraney ke zidd hai
kis ramz ka aazaar khula chashm-e-januN per ab hamko samajhney ki na samjhaaney ki zidd hai kehte haiN ziyada zid karna acha nahiN hota ,...
Lekin kabhi kabhaar maan aur nafaasat se zid ki jaaye to bhali lagti hai, Aapki ghazL ki taraH ,...
alag ranG jis tarah Aap ne paish kiya hai Qaabil e tareef hai,...
Daad e gulshan Aapki nazR ,...Kanwal Buhut nawazish is pzeerayi keliye. Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 1, 2008 4:52:33 GMT 5
yome-e-pakistan ke hawaley se Nazm "Aazadi" meri doosri Kitab "Eik muthi meiN merey Khwab" se.....
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Post by saeed on Aug 1, 2008 4:23:03 GMT 5
Aziz saheb achi kavish hai daad Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 1, 2008 4:07:11 GMT 5
Neha saheba HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! ...and best wishes Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 11:01:55 GMT 5
khoobsoorat nazm khyaal ki rifaat k saath saath is main aahang bhi hy aur aik khaas kayfiat jo parhnay walay ko usi mahol main lay jaati hy jisay aap nay nazm kia hy boht see daad aap k liay thanx razi Razi bhai maine apni nazm aapkey nam isi liye ki hai keh yeh kisi had tak aapki nazm "Rohi mein kitna piyasa hhoN" se mutasar hai... aur kuch faiz shayad meri khwaja Farid se mohabbat ka bhi hai. Buhut nawazish hosla afzai keliye saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 10:58:30 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhhhh bohat khoob Saeed sahib Ibn e insha yaad aa ga,ay Rafi bhai pasandedgi ka shukriya Kahan ham aur kahan....Insha ji... Mamnoon Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 10:57:21 GMT 5
waah ,...
Bohat Umdaa ,...
Daad ke phooL Aapki nazR ,... Buhut Nawazish Kanwal- daad aur pholoN keliye Mamnoon Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 10:56:35 GMT 5
Wah Saeed Bhai maar daalaa! Aray biraadar-e-bazurg! Masha Alaah kia rang hai, kia tarang hai. Khas taur per Sehra ParstoN ko mukhatib jab aap nay mukhatib kia tau hamaray dil ko bhi laga aap ka yeh khoob andaaz-e-takhatub. 6 Baras Khokhrapar (Sehraay Thar) aur abhi Cholistan maiN bhi waqt guzaar kar aa raha hooN. Sehraa nawardi maiN ab tau masters honay walaa hai.
Itni umda Nazm per meri jaanib say bahut saari daad qabool kijiay. Bahut umda khayal hai. Wah Buhut shukriya Atif mian. mujhey khushi hui ke aapko nazm achi lagi regards, saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 10:54:47 GMT 5
bohat khob daad Haazir hai Buhut Nawazish Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 10:52:52 GMT 5
Razi bhai Buhut piyari nazm hai....aur meri nazar se guzer chuki hai. maine apni nazm aapkey nam isi liye ki hai keh woh kisi had tak is nazm se mutasar hai... aur kuch faiz shayad meri khwaja Farid se mohabbat ka bhi hai. Mera khayal hai ke mein ne is nazm pe pichley forum pe daad bhi zroor di hai. Aapki yeh nazm bila-shuba eik shahkar hai!!! MuhabbateN. saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 4:36:56 GMT 5
Kanwal, Matla khubsurat hai.... Muhabbat ke jhoote saraboN meiN rehna HumeiN raas aaya na khaaboN meiN rehna
Daad!
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Post by saeed on Jul 30, 2008 18:44:34 GMT 5
eik taza nazm Razi Bhai aur degar sehra-parastoN ki nazr...... Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 30, 2008 7:32:57 GMT 5
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