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Post by dnangrani on Mar 31, 2008 13:50:44 GMT 5
:)Gazal: 1
Kitne piye hai dard ke ansoo bataOn kya Ye dasTaN gam bhi kisi ko sunaaOn kya?
RishTOn ke aaine mein dararein jo paD gayi Ab aaine se apna hi chehra chupaOn kya?
Dushaman jo aaj ban gaye, kal tak to bhai the Majbooriyaan hai meri, main tumse chupaOn kya?
charOn taraf se tez hawaOn mein hoon ghiri In andhiyOn ke beech mein Deepak jalaaOn kya?
Dewaangi mein kaT gaye mausam bahaar ke Ab patjhaDOn ke khauf se daaman bachaaOn kya?
Saazish mere khilaaf mere dostOn ki thi Ilzaam dushmanOn pe mai Devi lagaaOn kya?
Devi Nangrani
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 1, 2008 2:25:42 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Devi ji
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Post by waqaar on Apr 1, 2008 13:12:12 GMT 5
Devi jii, aadaab! huZoor kaisii haiN aap? bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay. lagta hay aajkal khoob aamad ho rahii hay. "charOn taraf se tez hawaOn mein hoon ghiri In andhiyOn ke beech mein Deepak jalaaOn kya? Dewaangi mein kaT gaye mausam bahaar ke Ab patjhaDOn ke khauf se daaman bachaaOn kya? Saazish mere khilaaf mere dostOn ki thi Ilzaam dushmanOn pe mai Devi lagaaOn kya? " Yeh teenoN aSH'aar ziYaadah pasand aaye, baYaan aur khaYaal donoN kay leHaaz say. teeSray She'r say behr aapkii SaHiiH pakaR maiN aa,ii hay. aisa lagaa mujh~ay. merii dilii daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:45:29 GMT 5
WaQaar acha laga ki tumne dhyaan se padke apni vichar v rai se awagat kara diya. dhanyawaad ke saath
Devi aajkal mumbai mein hoon.
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:46:58 GMT 5
Priya Sunita bahut acha lagta hai tere mahkte hue shabdon se guftagoo karte hue. thanks sunita wishes DEvi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:48:04 GMT 5
Rafi saheb aapka dhanyawaad vo humsafar hai use saath lekar chalna hai.
yahi poetry ke saath hamara rishta bhi hai.
Devi
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