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Post by dnangrani on Jan 24, 2008 22:20:15 GMT 5
sabhi sadasyon ko mera sneh bhara namaskaar
** Gazal
Bakee n teree yaad kee parachhaiyan raheen bas meree zindagee mein ye tanhaiyan raheen.
dolee to mere khwaab kee uththee naheen, magar yadon men goonjitee huee shahanaiyan raheen.
bachapan to chhod aae the, lekin hamare sath ta- umr khelatee huee amaraiyan raheen.
chahat, khuloos, pyar ke rishte badal gaye jazabat men n aaj vo gaharaiyan raheen.
achchhe the jo bhee log vo baqee naheen rahe ‘Devi’ jahan men ab kahan achchhaiyan raheen.13
Devi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 24, 2008 22:48:24 GMT 5
wahhhhhh bohat khoob Devi ji
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zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 69
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Post by zaamin on Jan 25, 2008 0:42:58 GMT 5
bahut khoob ghazal,devi ji mubaarak
zaamin
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Post by sunita on Jan 25, 2008 3:31:57 GMT 5
waah ek aur khoobsoorat moti aap ke khazaane se mila hai is bazm ko. aap ki har ek ghazal be- misaal hai kyunki iss main zindagi ke sachhe rang nazar aate hain. Bhagwaan aap ko sada iss laayaq rakhe ki aap ta-umar aise hi likhti raheN.dheron daad meri aur se.khush rahen.
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Shaheen
rukn
From City of Eagles
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Post by Shaheen on Jan 25, 2008 9:52:33 GMT 5
Wah Devi Jee Achch Ghazal hai! Daad hazir hai.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 25, 2008 10:02:59 GMT 5
Devi NangRani Jee! Aap ki ghazal qabil-e-daad hai, Daad qabool kijay.
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:16:29 GMT 5
[size=4]AOA devi jee bazm par wapsi par ap ko dobara activ dekh kar khushi hoi kesi hain ap aj phir ap ne bisarto ko aik khobsorat ghazal se nawaza he meri janib se bohat sari dili dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/size][/color]
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Post by tmasood on Jan 25, 2008 18:13:50 GMT 5
bohat khoob Devi jee
ach'ceh maZaameen nikale haiN
dilee daad qabuul kareiN
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