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Post by brijinder on Jun 18, 2007 2:52:30 GMT 5
Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage ki guzre huwe din fasaane lage
Jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagew
Lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lage
Pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo the kabhii bahut faasle ab banaane lage
Guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal Woh sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lage.
Jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lage
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Post by sunita on Jun 18, 2007 3:04:51 GMT 5
wow brijinder ji yeh aap ki shayri ko kya ho gaya hai? aap to aaj kal bahut hi achha likhane lage hain.dheron daad meri jaanib se, zor-e-kalam aur zayaada.
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Post by brijinder on Jun 18, 2007 4:34:30 GMT 5
Ha!ha.To itna bura likh raha tha maiN?Ofcourse I was not writing gazals but azaad nazms which is really my style.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 18, 2007 23:23:57 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat rwaaN behr maiN Ghazal kahi aap nay Brijinder Sahib daad haazir hay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 25, 2007 13:25:20 GMT 5
brijinder ji aap ki ghazal humain pehli baar prhnay ka itfaaq hua aur sunita ji ki tara humain bhi bohat hayrat hui kamaal hy aap itni achi ghazlain chupaa kar baythay hain thanx razi
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Post by rooh on Jun 27, 2007 22:28:06 GMT 5
Brijinder ji....Namstey..
sahii kahaa Sunitaa jii...mujhe bhii barii hairat huii..aap ki ghazal pehli baar parhne ko mil hai...
ummed hai aagey aap ki aur bhi ghazalein parhne ko milengii..daad qabool kijiye
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Post by brijinder on Jun 28, 2007 2:12:07 GMT 5
I am very thankful to u all.Nazm is my forte n I am more comfortable in it as to me,it uits more to my temperament n I can more freely fit in my philosophical n psychological outpouring in that form. I am very thankful to u all for the warm words.
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