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Post by waqaar on Nov 9, 2007 1:13:30 GMT 5
Yaaraan-e-meHfil!
aik khaYaal paiSh-e-khidmat hay. go keh mujh~ay naZ^m kehni nahiiN aati ph~ir b~ii jo khaYaal aaYa likh` Daala. naZ^m khaaliStan meray jazbaat kii 'akkaasi kerti hay aur Yehi meri khwaahiSh bh~ii hay. jo samajh~ jaaye uska bh~ii bh~alaa, baaqioN ka bh~alaa to hay hii. apni aara, say Zaroor nawaaziYay gaa. Shukriah!
waQaar
=========== 1. Sukhan jo musakhkhar keray ga diloN ko junooN jo keh paalay sabh~ii manziloN ko nigah jo furozaaN keray meHfiloN ko fusooN jo jagaa day sabh~ii 'aaqiloN ko Zaroorat hay inki Zarooat say haT kar keray baat koii, rivaaYat say haT ker
2. milaiN jot ban ker Chaman ko Sukhan-war jo jab bh~ii uTh~aaYeN,gay apna qalam gar qabaa saCh likh~aiNgay,qabaa saCh kay bal per miTaayeN,gay taareekiaaN Shu'lah ban ker Zaroorat hay inki Zaroorat say haT ker likh~aiNgay woh baataiN rivaaYat say haT ker
3. sukhanwar wohii jo khudii ko jagaa day Sharar ban keh qomoN ko roShan banaa day ghulaami kay naam-o-niShaaN ko miTaa day aur kh~o,ay hu,oN ko khudaa say mila day Zaroorat hay unki Zaroorat say haT ker keh ker baat tu bh~ii rivaaYat say haT ker
4. ab aati hay mujh~ko Sadaa Yeh Haram say badal day zamaanah tu apnay qalam say guzar jaa ab aagay tu hoor-e-iram say Zaroorat jahaaN ko hay terii qasam say Zaroorat hay teri Zaroorat say haT ker to ker baat ab kuChh~ rivaaYat say haT ker
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 9, 2007 2:03:09 GMT 5
Bohat khoobsoorat nazm hay Waqaar sahib
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Post by sunita on Nov 11, 2007 5:21:19 GMT 5
waqqar ji aadaab, bhai ghazal main to aap maahir hain hi ab nazm bhi kehni shuru kar di hai aap ne matlab ab iss maidaan main bhi sab ki chhutti karne vaale hain aap nazm yaqeenan achhi hai so daad qubuul karen aur aage bhi nazm kaha kareN.khush rahen.
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Post by khalid on Nov 11, 2007 23:17:43 GMT 5
ji haN waQaar aaj ke sukhanver ko sach kehne aur khaamosh na rehney ki jitni zaroorat hai shayad aazaadi k waqt bhi nahiN thee! aapki nazm isi haqeeqat ko ujaager kerti hai!
aaj ke halaat per kaun kaafir chup reh sakta hai! daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 12, 2007 1:30:59 GMT 5
waqaar sahib shair wohhota hy jo waqt ki nabz par haath rakhta hy main un logon ki baat sy kabhi bhi itfaaq nahin karta jin ka kehna hy k adab sirf adb ki hud tak ho aur us ka zindagi aur gird o paysh sy koi taaluk na ho khushi hui aap ki nazm parh kar jis main aap nay sukhanwaron ko un k faraaiz pehchan_nay ki dawat dee bohat rawan dawan aur aaj k halaat k saath munslik nazm hy thanx razi
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Post by waqaar on Nov 12, 2007 3:12:05 GMT 5
Bohat khoobsoorat nazm hay Waqaar sahib Rafi' SaaHeb
aapka husn-e-naZ^ar! bahut Shukriah!
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Post by waqaar on Nov 12, 2007 3:14:49 GMT 5
waqqar ji aadaab, bhai ghazal main to aap maahir hain hi ab nazm bhi kehni shuru kar di hai aap ne matlab ab iss maidaan main bhi sab ki chhutti karne vaale hain aap nazm yaqeenan achhi hai so daad qubuul karen aur aage bhi nazm kaha kareN.khush rahen. Sunita ji,
ghazal ka maahir keH ker kYuuN Sharmindah kerti haiN . sabki CHh~uTTi kerwaa,ooN ga to baaqioN ka moq'ah nahiiN milay gaa, is liYay hamaiShah kuCHh~ khaamiYaaN CHh~oR deta hooN .
aapnay hamaiShah meray khaYaalaat ko saraaha, iskay liYay bahut SHukriah! khuSh rahYay!
waQaar
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Post by waqaar on Nov 12, 2007 3:18:15 GMT 5
ji haN waQaar aaj ke sukhanver ko sach kehne aur khaamosh na rehney ki jitni zaroorat hai shayad aazaadi k waqt bhi nahiN thee! aapki nazm isi haqeeqat ko ujaager kerti hai!
aaj ke halaat per kaun kaafir chup reh sakta hai! daad qubool keeje! Khaalid SaaHeb,
badqismati keh hamaaray baiShtar Shu'rah khaaSker in forums per is per kam hii soChtay haiN. woh Sirf rivaaYati ghazal keH ker daad ikaTTh~ii kernay maiN intahaa,i mut^ma'iin haiN. Yeh baat Sharm-naak hay. afsos hota hay , per kYa kiYay jaaye. aap aur ham aur kuCHh~ ginay chunay log haiN aur inShaa,Allaah rahaiNgay.
aapnay saraah diYa samamjh~iYay "paisay wusool".
waQaar
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Post by waqaar on Nov 12, 2007 3:21:32 GMT 5
Razi bh~aa,ii! aadaab! aapnay bilKul bajaa farmaaYa magar in Shu'rah ko kon samjh~aaye jo apni dh~un maiN magh~an haiN. Yeh log maHabbat aur rivaaYat aur hooroN say aagay nah-jaanay kYuuN nahiiN soChtay . chalYay ham aur aap hii SaHiiH. khUSh rahYay! bahut Shukriah is teHreer per qeemti waqt sarf kiYa aapnay. waQaar
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Post by HASIB RANA on Nov 18, 2007 17:47:22 GMT 5
Yaaraan-e-meHfil!
aik khaYaal paiSh-e-khidmat hay. go keh mujh~ay naZ^m kehni nahiiN aati ph~ir b~ii jo khaYaal aaYa likh` Daala. naZ^m khaaliStan meray jazbaat kii 'akkaasi kerti hay aur Yehi meri khwaahiSh bh~ii hay. jo samajh~ jaaye uska bh~ii bh~alaa, baaqioN ka bh~alaa to hay hii. apni aara, say Zaroor nawaaziYay gaa. Shukriah!
waQaar
=========== 1. Sukhan jo musakhkhar keray ga diloN ko junooN jo keh paalay sabh~ii manziloN ko nigah jo furozaaN keray meHfiloN ko fusooN jo jagaa day sabh~ii 'aaqiloN ko Zaroorat hay inki Zarooat say haT kar keray baat koii, rivaaYat say haT ker
2. milaiN jot ban ker Chaman ko Sukhan-war jo jab bh~ii uTh~aaYeN,gay apna qalam gar qabaa saCh likh~aiNgay,qabaa saCh kay bal per miTaayeN,gay taareekiaaN Shu'lah ban ker Zaroorat hay inki Zaroorat say haT ker likh~aiNgay woh baataiN rivaaYat say haT ker
3. ghulaami kay naam-o-niShaaN ko miTaa day aur kh~o,ay hu,oN ko khudaa say mila day Zaroorat hay unki Zaroorat say haT ker keh ker baat tu bh~ii rivaaYat say haT ker
4. ab aati hay mujh~ko Sadaa Yeh Haram say badal day zamaanah tu apnay qalam say guzar jaa ab aagay tu hoor-e-iram say Zaroorat jahaaN ko hay terii qasam say Zaroorat hay teri Zaroorat say haT ker to ker baat ab kuChh~ rivaaYat say haT ker sukhanwar wohii jo khudii ko jagaa day Sharar ban keh qomoN ko roShan banaa day
BOHAT KHOOB ........... BOHAT ACH'HA LIKHA AAP NAY DAD HAZIR HAY ... WISH U ALL THE BEST
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 12, 2008 23:46:47 GMT 5
Bahut hasb-e-haal aur to the point nazm. Daad qabool kijiay aur issi tarah iss meHfil ki ronaq baRhatay rahiay.
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